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By : Grill
  • From ANON - Neith on July 09, 2005
    *SQUEAL!*

    Yes, that's exactly what I'm doing. :D Love it so far, and I'm going to be stalking you with a rusty spork spear till I see more :O
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2005
    that is such a mean cliff hanger
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  • From ANON - Jessii on July 08, 2005
    I really like what yo uhave going on here. I will be checking back for more
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  • From ANON - Moi on July 08, 2005
    Cool! I knew it was going to be Ron! But what happened between Draco and Severus? I hope Severus roasts his dragon butt! Painfully and permanently!
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  • From ANON - Jenn on July 08, 2005
    Excellent as always. I didn't see that happening, Ron of course!! And I expect Neville to be with him, since it was most likely him that grew the moss that particular way.. :) I just hope Draco is dead or obliviated and Severus is able to get to safety. More soon, please.
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  • From ANON - lemonade on July 08, 2005
    I've SOOOOOO missed this story, I'm glad you are posting again. Sorry about internet and family. Good to see you back. This is the best story ever.
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  • From ANON - Divine Angel on July 08, 2005
    Yay! Although I thought we were about to meet Neville... Is he there too? You dropped that line about someone good at Herbology and I thought "That *has* to be Neville!"
    More please!
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  • From ANON - killisandra on July 08, 2005
    you can't leave off there with a completely irate Draco Malfoy interrupting the whole thing!!!! Gah, another cliffie to annoy me to no end. You drive me insane, do you realize that? You know I love your work so please keep it up. Blessed Be as always dear,
    ~Sandra~
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  • From ANON - K on June 28, 2005
    Eeeek! Oh god, you have to have the next chapter up soon! That was one heck of a cliffhanger!
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  • From ANON - Catpower on June 25, 2005
    My goodness - what a cliffhanger! Excellent stuff, as usual. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on June 25, 2005
    A usaual, wonderful. I just can't wait for the next chapter. I love your enitre story, the plot, the twists, the tension. It is pure bliss.
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  • From ANON - Doneril on June 25, 2005
    Wow. Just wow. Normally I don't flock to AFF because I usually like lots of plot with my fiction and get queasy with the porn - but, this kind of story makes me want to come visit more often. In short, I adored reading this. I do hope that you will update soon, because your cliffhanger has me on edge. I really feel for your characters and I believe you have kept them very IC in Voldemort's Britain. Write on!
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  • From ANON - fraser on June 25, 2005
    arg you are so evil for leaving the cliff hanger, you are a sadistic born out of wedlock son (sorry just had to say it)
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  • From ANON - person on June 24, 2005
    Dude. you rock. You are like one of the best authors I have ever read. Usually, rated um...mature fanfiction is plotless or badly forced in, but you incorporate it nicely. I tried to find you in fanfiction but yay! I saw you again here. Please write the next chapter. THank GOD you have a Beta b/c people who don't suck. I love the sensual scenes. Yayness. Did I already say you rock? Anyway, I love you. Don't stop writing.
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  • From ANON - lemonade on June 24, 2005
    Of course, I love this story...but you have to know it kills me to see the updates here, and not at Ashwinder. (!!! I think you do that to torture like Snape! ;D ) I'll still be here when it evens out, so.... *impatient sigh* keep 'em comin, love. Can't wait!!
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