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Reviews for The Part of me that is missing.

By : cearrae
  • From ANON - Silver1 on August 06, 2006
    I have just re-read this - now that the site is up and running properly- and just love it! I have noticed that it has been a while since this was updated. Has this been put on hold or is it posted at any other sites? I hope this has not been placed on hold, as Phaelan is one of my favorite characters- indeed the best OC character - I have seen in many a fanfic. I would appreciate it ifyou could let me know when this is updated. In the meantime, keep up the great work and please, please please, update soonest!
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  • From ANON - Gypsina on July 16, 2006
    I just wanted to say that I love your stories. you have a deliciously wicked imagination when it comes to our dear Severus, yet at the same time temper him with reality. I think it humanizes him makes him more live if you know what I mean...
    Only one thing I'm asking.....Please, please, please please, PLEASE Continue with this story soon..I hit the end of chapter 55 and loudly exclaimed "Ahhh, Where's the rest of it!?" Must say I scared the wits out of my mother and my dogs doing it ~e.g.~
    Anyway I hope you add more to this soon, I am mighty curious where you're going with this.
    Until then,
    Gypsina.
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on July 09, 2006
    I've reread from the first chapter now that affn seems stable, and I'm glad I did. What a twist to find out that Phaelan was a "magical creature" that is bred to be a live "powerstone"/amplifier (powerstone is a source of magical energy storage, and can be used to amplifly spells). For a bit there I was thinking that she might have been a Djinn of some type till I saw what she really was. What a plot twist.

    I hope that Minerva remembers that prophecy at the beginning of the story and puts it all together, or that it gets revealed in time to save Phaelan from Trelawney's prophecy that can be read from several angles. :)


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  • From ANON - MarzBar on March 11, 2006
    Thank you so much for the fabulous make-up chapter. Do we get make-up smut soon? Polly and Dobby and pretty cute. Who is their elder? More story please.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on March 11, 2006
    Thank you so much for the updates!! I had to go back and re-read to be sure I hadn't forgotten too much. I was still a pleasure. I hope our lady will not be too devastated for too long by this new information. It seems to me that Severus is as much a slave to her as she to him. I had imagined she had some powers and had never thought of such a being. More story please.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on February 03, 2006
    I'm so happy to find this story again! I had to reread the whole thing so I wouldn't forget the important stuff. I am looking forward to finding out what Phelan may be other than a Muggle military officer. More story please.
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  • From Muggleman on February 01, 2006
    nice update umm ehat did they have to do outside for new years i love this story
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  • From Muggleman on January 17, 2006
    wow i love the new chapter what happens now i dont think phalen is a normal muggle
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  • From Muggleman on January 17, 2006
    wow i love the new chapter what happens now i dont think phalen is a normal muggle
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  • From ANON - jagqueen2 on December 31, 2005
    The problem with reading fanfic at 1AM, when you find a recipe at the end of the fic and want to try it, the liquor stores are all closed. Great job. I remember that scene in Schindler's list. The next year, we had to play the theme from the violin solo in band, which was really hard for those of us who saw the film. Loved Snape in McDonalds!
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  • From ANON - gypsy_rhodes on December 30, 2005
    Great job with the chapter and the rum balls sound awesome! I will be trying them and let you know how it goes! Thanks for the New Year's gift (the chappie and the balls)! Keep up the great work you are doing with this story!
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  • From Muggleman on December 30, 2005
    ok good new chapter what is Mckenzie a angle or something i 1st thought a witch that was never trained as such but after dubledore readig old book scene i dont know
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  • From Muggleman on December 09, 2005
    great chapter i love how the veterans told them the story and the ghost i love how luna saw him update soon
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  • From ANON - jagqueen2 on December 09, 2005
    OK, checking the previous reviews, I did tear up before. This one made the tear actually fall. Just wanted to clarify that.
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  • From ANON - jagqueen2 on December 09, 2005
    Thanks for the beautiful chapter. This one was the first that actually brought a tear to my eye. Thank your father on behalf of my family. My paternal grandfather was one of many dutchmen kidnapped by the Nazis and put to work in forced labour camps. My maternal grandfather was a spitfire pilot during the war. This was a beautiful chapter.
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