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Reviews for The Orb of Fate

By : SnapesAngel
  • From ANON - Katie K on February 01, 2005
    ooh... I can't wait to see how this all turns out... when will the Snarry lovin' come?
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  • From ANON - Eci_Frog on January 28, 2005
    :) New chapter! Great way to start the weekend. Wish it was longer though.
    Will Harry find out inn the next chapter?

    Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Anon. on January 25, 2005
    Very interesting....
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  • From ANON - Katie K on January 25, 2005
    yay! now my perfectionist side can be hidden away, so i can tell you just how much i absolutely ADORE this story!!!!! Please update sooooooon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 24, 2005
    I am really enjoying the suspense in this story, not that I would complain if the chapters were longer and not so cliff hanger-y, but then I am often too greedy lol. I felt so bad for Ginny when Harry yelled at her, and I feel bad for poor Harry being in the dark, I hope that he gets his answers soon. I liked the fact that Petunia was nice as he was leaving too, I always felt that she was nicer than she let on. Hoping for more soon.

    Hugs

    Kat
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on January 24, 2005
    Poor Ginny, Harry really tore into her! I don't think she know's anything at all. Surely if it was that urgent Dumbledore would have
    been waiting to see Harry.

    Why is everyone obeying this Orb? They are all strong wizards surely they would be able to make their own minds up?
    Still Hooked, but have a lot more questions than answers.

    Please update soon, flumoxed, but enjoying it.
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  • From ANON - Eci_Frog on January 23, 2005
    Well, I`m off. No internet connection until Friday. Hope you have updated till then. Pretty please? How often do you update? Once a week?

    How is Severus taking the news of his and Harry`s bonding? Ah, yes, throw Harry, Severus and bed onto a room, let me wach and there you have the happiest person alive. *dreams of Severus coming in wearing only a pair of thight leather pants*
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  • From ANON - Eci_Frog on January 21, 2005
    You`re from Sweden?! I`m from Norway! It`s a small world after all..... Love your story...
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  • From ANON - Eci_Frog on January 21, 2005
    Poor Harry. So clueless... *evil laughter*..... Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - chys on January 21, 2005
    hm, what happens next eh? You left it on a cliffie!
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  • From ANON - Phoenix on January 19, 2005
    Um... confusion. LOL. Poor Remmie! Had to be downstairs with the Dursleys all by his lonesome! This is a good story! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Katie K on January 19, 2005
    Again with the 'you're' instead of 'your', and you've also got a couple of grammatical errors in there.

    I'm sorry! It feels like I'm complaining about this story more than praising it! lol

    I really love it, though, and pppplllleeeeaaaasssseeee update soon!!!!! *hugs*
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  • From ANON - Katie K on January 19, 2005
    can't wait to read the next chapter... luckily it's already up. I'm just commenting on both so you feel special. :)

    And I'm glad u appreciate it when people correct your spelling and grammar, because I have another one for you to fix up (if you can... I don't know). Anyway, in the letter at the bottom of the screen, this is one part you have written: "have been informed about you
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  • From ANON - Arwen Rayne on January 18, 2005
    I was reading the reviews and noticed someone mention you are Swedish. If you need a beta I will be happy to put you in my cue and look things over for you. I beta for two others currently but neither send me much work. I also do a bit of posting on fanfiction under fragonknight01 if you want to check out my work. Most of my stories have one or two errors in them but there is no one consistant type of error- mostly just rushing to get posted... I shall look forward to the next chapter regardless of what you decide.
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  • From ANON - Arwen Rayne on January 18, 2005
    You have a fantastic story going here but some of your grammar errors are really detracting from the quality.
    There is a place/ Their is a posessive/ They're is a contraction of they are. You also used the word brake(used to stop an object in motion) instead of break (as in to shatter or damage something) It is an awesome story so please don't quit just because I complained.
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