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Reviews for Angels of Darkness, Angels of Light

By : Laceyp
  • From HeartStar on November 18, 2009
    Hello I was wondeing if you actually have more of the story done or not.
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  • From ANON - Kana on December 29, 2005
    I'm sorry to hear you're being plagued by virusses... I hope it's fixed soon, because you really, realy have to update this wonderfull story!!!!!!! I loved the first chapter and am dying to read what's going to happen next, so please, update soon!!!!

    Hugs
    K
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  • From ANON - antipyro on June 17, 2005
    OH, so sorry to hear about getting viruses from this site. That's terrible luck.

    I like your stories and don't mind having them posted in sections. I see a lot of genius in your writing, it just has to be drawn out more. Please take your time with this and make it the work you want it to be.

    If you don't get 10 reviews, I'll keep reposting until I reach that mark.

    Again, please continue writing this story, it's really good.

    Hmmm, toys......how about a feather? I liked the snake venom in the cuts, that must really hurt and would probably react in a way that would stun or get Harry drowsy and hallucinate. I've always enjoyed the cock-ring used to limit orgasm. Seems like torture to me. Mind games....I'm no good at thinking them up, but I love to read about them. Blind fold Harry and make him think about experiencing something other than what is really happening. Genuinely devious.

    Please post soon.
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  • From ANON - silverfox on June 16, 2005
    interesting start you have here it seems to be promising hope to see more in the near future
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  • From ANON - Hambares on June 16, 2005
    Good luck ridding your computer of a virus! I like the start of this story. Please continue.
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  • From StarwolfRealms on January 26, 2005
    Hey, I like it so far. I think Harry seems a bit OOC but Draco doesn't. He should be a bit more Sadistic though. As for toys to use, if you do a bit of research on single tail whips and other BDSM toys and sex toys that would be cool. Maybe you could use different dildos on him(Harry). If I had a more definate idea, I'd be more specific. Maybe a ball gag, blind fold, knife play, potions to hieghten the sensations for Harry. Like ones that intensify the feelings he's given. Ones that feel icy/frostbite like and the opposites-ones that make him feel intense heat. And if you plan for Draco to fuck him, maybe Draco could use a special lube/lubes that would cause different sensations too. One that perhaps intensifies pain, pleasure or burns a little, etc.

    ~Starwolf~
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  • From ANON - Skylar on January 25, 2005
    You could greatly improve on your story by adding more plot, more detail, and keeping the characters IN character.
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  • From ANON - savocon on January 21, 2005
    Interesting. I'd like to see more.
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  • From ANON - Kayla on January 18, 2005
    This story sounds promising, I hope you continue.
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  • From lightgoddess on January 18, 2005
    My first suggestion is to make the chapters a little longer. As far as the next scene, I think Draco's probably a ruthless, sadistic little fuck, so the more violent, the better. Maybe he should taunt him, also. You know, tell him in graphic detail what he's going to do before he does it. Errr....that's all I gots for now......Good first chap!
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