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Reviews for Deeds and their consequences

By : GothVamp
  • From ANON - Kyzz on January 12, 2006
    Oh my god, I absolutely love your story, it is so amazing, but I must say that I am dissappointed you left it there for what like almost 6 MONTHS (Ok so I just read it today but thats beside the point). Please Please PLEASE update as soon as you can because its an amazing story that should be for sure finished
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  • From ANON - miko-chan on June 03, 2005
    cute I love it
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  • From ANON - pamma on May 12, 2005
    will you please update? please!??!
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  • From on May 08, 2005
    wait..so what was harry's dream about? 0o0o-good chappie!
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  • From ANON - Pamma on May 04, 2005
    Oooh, yay! Yummy updates!! No, do NOT stop emailing me about the updates, because i'll never know when you have. I mean, i don't want to miss a chapter of this sexy story, it's too good to miss! I wish you would have more review..you truly deserve them..but since it's aff.net, there's not manny people around as much as ff.net. I could understand if you don't want to update in ff.net anymore, my friend's story got deleted too! It's so gay of them to do that. Please update soon, i can't wait till sex part!!!! Go GothVamp!!
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  • From ANON - pamma on April 30, 2005
    will you please update before i get too old and die!!?
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  • From ANON - Pamma on April 23, 2005
    wow, this story is amazing, it siriusly need to bo update now! I would suggest you post you story in fanfiction.net, bacause that's the place where most people go, and you would get more reviews, reviews the you deserve. Put your story under Sirius and Harry, ok? I really like your story, please don't let this be the last chapter i will see. It's too good to end so soon. And please email me to let me know if you've update. Please update!!
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  • From ANON - Christina on April 10, 2005
    I really like how you combined actual ritual into the story. This chapter could have gone on a bit longer, but maybe that's just me enjoying your story so much!
    I also really liked how you had Harry calling for him by calling him a son of a bitch. That was entertaining. I mean, other than your typical cursing of the saints when they have seemingly failed, can you imagine any other sort of religious activity that it helps when you scream at the intended?
    More, please!
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  • From on April 10, 2005
    omg! sirius is back!!!! yay! i was soo mad at j.k.rowling when she killed him!!!!! hm..btw- i love your story- 'two worlds' its awesome...and 'behing your smile'
    great stories!!!!
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  • From on March 31, 2005
    oo...i hope harry brings sirius back...he should have killed bellatrix...what if she told someone? not that she believes him but...update!
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  • From ANON - Muertos on March 28, 2005
    So far i like the story its interesting and shows harry as a powerful but not purely good character. Also i like the concept of him indulging in dark arts in order to accomplish something that isn't inherently evil.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 24, 2005
    Not a bad story at all. Shall be interested in seeing what happens. What are the consequences I wonder? Do keep posting.
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  • From ANON - Christina on March 22, 2005
    You are a wonderful writer, your ideas are wonderfully original, and this story has a great tone to it.
    You want a review? I'll give you one.
    I am supposing that much like the rest of the planet you have read Anne Rice. If not, bully, but since you most likely have, I want to tell you from the bottom of my heart that your descriptions are phenomenal, not drawing on for chapters at a time- see, Rice goes overboard, telling you very plainly precisely how everything looks, smells, tastes, feels, sounds, particullarly in "Interview." She is my prime example of how not to write descriptions. You wtite beautiful descriptions.
    For example, you write:

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