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Reviews for Sixth Year

By : darksoulbrighteyes
  • From ANON - kiayea on January 22, 2005
    It's a bit sad story. I almost cried when Harry tried to commit suicide. Love Harry+Severus interaction. Write more.
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on January 22, 2005
    The characters aren't always in character but I like the plot and am enjoying reading it.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - Kayla on January 21, 2005
    It's a good story but the eight chapter neds to happen faster, if he'd done it along the veins it would've been moments to die and he'd be long dead by the time Severus found him. You may want to change that, otherwise, keep up the good work and looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - vash on January 21, 2005
    Yeah! Another chapter. Woo-Hoo! I really am enjoying the change of pace with Herimone as the evil little !@#$%@# keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Paula on January 21, 2005
    This is a really good story; very interesting. Please continue with it; I can't wait to see what happens next. Severus is hilarious and chapter 9 was funny when he and Harry found the Gryffindors in the Astronomy. Keep up the good work; I'm impressed.
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  • From ANON - Lime on January 21, 2005
    I like your story. And I really don't like Hermione, she's just... a bitch as you said...
    Anyway, looking forward to read more!
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  • From ANON - vash on January 21, 2005
    OHHH!

    I like this one. Especially since Hermione isthe one in the snit. Usually it's Ron. Please Continue, i like this story very much.
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  • From ANON - lightgoddess on January 20, 2005
    Awwww....Chapter 7 was beautiful. *grins* I really, really like this story! I also like the fact that Hermione is the one who's freaking out about Harry being gay!
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  • From ANON - Sigrid on January 20, 2005
    Update! Now! Love it! Can't say that I like the concept of Hermione!Bitch, but it works for this story:)
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  • From ANON - Sigrid on January 20, 2005
    Update! Now! Can't say I like concept of Hermione!Bitch, but it works in this story...
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  • From ANON - ghellie on January 20, 2005
    more! more! more! i cry!
    or i shall ahve to open a cage of cornish pixies into the potions dungeon just as harry and sevvie get into a kinky monkey game of "detention with the potions professor"

    great for an ickle firstie. me likes it.... good on ya for making hermione a bitch. but i'd like to see ron and harry being mates in secret or something... therye too good a pair to break up... i dont mean in a naugty way either.

    ghellie

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  • From ANON - Krystal925 on January 20, 2005
    AWWWW!!!! This is cute. I do have a few suggestions though. If you don't have a beta reader, get one, they are very useful and help with plot and parts you get stuck at and they also check your grammar etc. Also, try to use som kind of marking i.e. italics, 'single quotes', or something to show thoughts. I got confused when they were thinking and I wasn't sure if it was dialogue or not. BUt pretty good so far, I can't wait for the next part!
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  • From lightgoddess on January 19, 2005
    This is going to be a good story, I can feel it. Bravo, keep going!!
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