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From Rosajean on January 24, 2016
I really wish you'd continue this! I've really enjoyed it this far!
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From Luna8 on August 18, 2015
I love your Sev. Please don't leave us...
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From Rosajean on June 19, 2015
Great story so far! Please update again soon!
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From ANON - Jean on March 26, 2015
Wowza, very hot!
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From ANON - ai on January 30, 2015
i suuuuppeerrr like this story! i like the plot and i like the twists. i also like how Severus' and Hermione's relationship is going.. please dont abandon this story,
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From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on July 24, 2013
what was causing and why was Hermione womb spasming??? and why was it the womb that was spasming?? Was it the contraception potion that was causing Hermione womb to spasm? And Was it the contraception potion that was causing Hermione womb to spasm because the contraception potion would not and will not allow her to become pregnant like her animal part of her want her to???

After Hermione's agonized scream as the cold water pelted her too-sensitive skin, the banging from Draco's entrance to the bathroom began. The sound seemed unbearably loud and the walls pulsed. Hermione couldn't have moved from her position, collapsed in the bathtub, to save her life, and speech was too much to manage. After another minute with no answer, the door burst open with a splintering of wood and Draco charged forward with his wand raised.

The simple effort of awareness became too much, and Hermione let her eyes slide closed. When he spoke, her eyes snapped open and she was confused by his presence.

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From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on July 24, 2013
if she took the potion he would make in spring does that mean that the on heat and etc would go away FOREVER??? also could severus satisfy his lust with someone other than Hermione or like Hermione cant he handel another womans touch?? also if Hermione got pregnant AND had his baby will afterwards will she ever go on heat again and her body want to get pregnant by him even with the springs potion?? Then, he'd sat back and allowed his mind to wander. Pretending that nothing had changed and the potion's side effects could be managed easily was not working. Perhaps the stars would realign after they consummated the bond, but impregnating the chit was not an option and yet the only option that would truly satisfy her body.
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From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on July 24, 2013
did severus put his finders inside her and make her cum that time and is she directly toucking his cock?? put your mouth on his cock Hermione!!!
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From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on July 23, 2013
that was ALL soooo fucking sexy even the way he told her to get out was so sexy!!!
"You mean.... masturbate?" The last word was whispered in shock and she blushed deeply.

"You've always been quick." He grunted.

"I can't, I don't do that. That's....I've never." Hermione realized she was sputtering, knew even that she must seem immature next to his casual mention of the idea. Even as she bulked at him, the image of the act he was suggesting flew to her and made her breath catch.

"May I suggest you start." Her squirming embarrassment brought only a little relief. Did the girl realize she was standing before him naked? That he could smell her? "Unless, that is, you've come to terms with the sex toy concept."

"I won't do that," she told him confidently and then looked away. "I don't know how."

"Fine." He caught her wrist again and dragged her bodily toward another door. Opening it savagely, he threw her down onto his bed and loomed over her, fairly shaking in his need to take her. "Lay back."

"Professor?" She looked around in confusion, biting her lip all the while.

"Do as I say!" He slammed the door shut again and leaned against it. "Lay back."

She did as he said, and then simply waited. Her own breath was loud in her ears and it was being mirrored by his sharp intakes of air. Unsure of what to do, she crossed her ankles and clenched her thighs together. Her eyes were already solidly closed, too embarrassed to look at him.

"I want you to lay your hand on your stomach," he commanded and waited until she had done so. "Feel the weight of it, what it does to your body. Do you feel it?"

"Yes." The word was barely audible but she felt it. The slight weight made her throb all the more.

"Slide your hand upward, cup your breast."

She obeyed. The drag of her fingers on her stomach made it hard to breathe. It worsened still as her fingertips ran over her breast. Though her eyes were shut, she could sense his glare. Professor Snape was watching this. He could see how her nipple strained upward, begging for stimulation. She moved to lightly touch it.

"Not yet," he growled, "I want you to keep that up. Now, lick your lips for me."

Her pink tongue darted out to explore her own skin.

"Bring the bottom lip into your mouth and bit down, softly." He let out a little puff of air as she followed his order. "Now you may squeeze your nipple."

She worried away at her lip, swirling her tongue around it purposefully, as her hand lightly touched her nipple. Needing more, she squeezed gently. Her hips rocked forward and she squeezed harder. She began to make a noise in her throat but cut it off.

"Moan for me," he growled and then groaned as she did. Her hips rocked forward again. "Unhook your ankles. Good, now spread your knees apart for me. That's a good girl, a little more. Rest your hand on your knee. Now tell me, what do you want?"

"You." She moaned again, loving the sound of it.

"You can't have me. What else do you want?" His voice became stern but the husky, vibrating quality of it made her shudder and quiver for him.

"Professor," she pleaded and tossed her head. Her fingers worked away at her nipple, her hips still rocking slightly. His voice was driving her insane.

"Run your hand over your thigh," he spoke softly, "now show me where you want me to touch you."

Slowly she let her hand sink downward, shuddering as her fingers slipped into the center of herself. Unsure, she trailed her fingers over herself lightly, holding herself back.

"Roll your nipple harder." He paused and waited until her hips began to tip again. At one particular point she went drastically still for a moment and then moaned. "Did that feel good?"

"Yes," she gasped.

"Do it again." He watched, as hard as he could ever remember being, as she teased her clit. Her hips arching upward drastically and her eyes were clenched shut. "Do you feel yourself tightening?" He took her inarticulate nod for an affirmative. "Squeeze tighter."

"Oh god." She gasped and did as he said. Sensations were rolling through her body that seemed to sap her control and give it to this man. She squeezed her nipple again at his command. His voice was husky and thick, making her ache to hear it against her ear.

"Tighter. Now moan for me. Again. Arch your hips upward, higher. Keep it up. Tighter."

She did as he said, moaning again even though he hadn't bid it. Her fingers worked, drawing herself tighter and tighter. She heard him moving and her eyes snapped open. He was above her, leaning over her, speaking in her ear.

"Now come for me, Hermione," he growled. His breath slithered over her ear. Her given name an endearment that made her go still and then she began to convulse. A tight wail erupted past her lips as again and again she experienced flashes of pleasure.

"Oh god," she ground out as she arched off his bed. The world began to clear slowly and she looked around in confusion. Professor Snape was nowhere to be seen. "Professor?"

"Always an adept pupil." He tossed her robes at her prone form and then stalked to the doorway. He turned at the last moment to glare down at her. "Now get out."
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From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on July 23, 2013
WHY would it be rape of him to her? I mean its not rape since she WANTS him and he want her so its NOT rape on ether parties

"I don't know what you mean! What can I do about it? I want you." She moved to followed but was held in place by his sneer of distaste.

"Really, Miss Granger? At this point pleasuring yourself sits second to being raped by a Death Eater? I thought you chose death?" he bit out.
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From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on July 23, 2013
is this naked when she come back to the castle

Hours passed, and when she finally spotted the tall walls of the castle, relief swamped her. Bare feet had long since began to bleed, but that inconvenience was minimal compared to the pain radiating from her back. Blood had worked its way between her shoulder blades and down her back. She could feel it trickle down her legs. The slick wetness that had come from the cat had dried. She itched unbearably.

Pausing momentarily to wipe her feet off, she darted into the castle. For a moment she considered going to her own room but gave the thought up almost immediately. She needed something to take care of the wounds on her back and perhaps the others on her shoulder and arms. Had anyone noticed she was gone? How had they not? Going to Madam Pomfrey would probably bring the Headmaster and her friends upon her within minutes. Instead she kept going downward, making her way to the dungeons. Of course, she had no idea where Professor Snape's rooms were, but even now she could smell him.

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From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on July 21, 2013
I would CHOOSE SEVERUS over death!!! LUCKY STUPID BITCH!!!! If it weren't for the fact that she'd goaded him completely beyond the point of safety and then chosen death over his touch
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From ANON - Karen Lioncourt on February 20, 2013
Oh. My. God. This has just blown my mind. You are such a talented writer. Thank your muse for me will you? I hope you'll continue writing:)
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From ANON - HermioneFan29 on February 02, 2013
because hermione and severus are mates because of the cat potion i thoguth that like hermione who cant mate with anyone but snape, fidelity!!!! i thought the same goes for severus too that he cant mate with anyone but hermione?? fidelity!! so why does he wanna fuck someone else??? i dont understand!!!!!
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From ANON - hermionefan29 on January 30, 2013
oh :-( but dirty talk is so sexy!! he should allow her to talk! and vise versa!! mmmmmm

"No, I don't imagine that'll be a problem at all, Miss Granger." He lifted a brow, as if in thought, and then added, "As long as you don't speak, of course." ahhh but will he talk though the hot, torrid affair with her, in bed etc? his voice is SO sexy and his voice affects hermione in so many ways (as it does to me)
mmmmmmm
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