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Reviews for Life\'s Tragedy Number Two

By : chrusotoxos
  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on February 27, 2005
    finding updated works is so much easier i know you donp;t enjoy it but with aff within a day i know fo yuor updats ff well i search forever for updates pls stay
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  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on February 27, 2005
    i am here and love aff because and you are not the only one to complain but it is easirer for me to see you works
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  • From ANON - LariLee on February 24, 2005
    Rough chapter showing the complexity of Severus' character. He didn't like raping and killing the girl, but he still responded and enjoyed it. This isn't Severus at his most redeemable. Well done, though.

    ~Lisa
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  • From ANON - Bambu on February 24, 2005
    Thanks for the Horace translation -- it's a far better one than I first read in college. Aside from that, I particularly liked the interaction between Lupin and Snape. So often Lupin is written as milquetoast without the brains I think JKR intended -- people have a mistaken tendency to compare compassion with weakness -- it's nice to see that you haven't fallen into that trap. Additionally, I've been enjoying Snape's inner dialogue as he performs for the Dark Lord. It's very easy to gloss over the fact that as a spy he's had to continue to engage in rather repugnant acts which excited him when he was younger... that you have written it so that it still excites him is rather interesting. I think you've found a very nice balance between canon and fanon Snape in your characterization. I will be eager to see your next posting.
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  • From ANON - LariLee on February 20, 2005
    Something tells me the Dork Lard didn't think it was funny what happened to Lucius. I thought it was hilarious. Another nice chapter, now back to waiting, twiddling my thumbs, not sleeping well, checking for updates... such is my life.

    ~Lisa
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  • From ANON - Bambu on February 20, 2005
    I have read your most recent chapters, and they're very intriguing. I quite enjoy the moment that Hermione's illusions are dashed, as she brushes her now blond locks... Nicely done.
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  • From ANON - June on February 20, 2005
    Ch 9 - what!?! Why doesn't he tell her that it was LUCIUS, using Polyjuice to imitate Draco?? It might help her to feel more grateful to Severus, but more importantly, she should know how dangerous it can be to go alone outside when Voldemort wants her as a potions ingredient. For her safety, she should know. And it would help Severus gain brownie points iwth her.... Okay, I'm waiting for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Moi on February 20, 2005
    Ack! A cliffhanger! Oi! Trot out the next chapter!

    Please and thank you very much. I'm liking your story, in case you had trouble interpreting that negative reaction (it was withdrawl, not criticism). I like the premise of the diary, and I'm hoping that Snape's proclivity for heroics (no matter how he despises them) will win over the urge to take up Hermione as a sex toy. I mean, I rather enjoy a steamy H/S scene, but it's better when his heart is moved as well as his bits.
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  • From ANON - June on February 17, 2005
    Ch 8 - ack! so Lucius is using Polyjuice to imitate Draco and kidnap Hermione for Voldemort's potion? I'm glad Severus suspects something, but if he thinks he can be "romantic, patient and gentle" he should've said something to her about he did not approve of Malfoy breaking her wrist. I do hope Severus rescues Hermione before Lucius takes her away. Thanks for the chapter!
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  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on February 17, 2005
    Brilliant i must say and need i crave more updates soon!
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  • From ANON - LariLee on February 17, 2005
    Wonderful story, I've read it all in one sitting and will be adding it to my favorites to follow!

    ~Lisa
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  • From ANON - RachelW on February 17, 2005
    This is a good story with an interresting plot. Very different kind of story and I'm enjoying it. I like Lucius too! He seems quite in character so far and I certainly do appriciate that you aren't making Dumbledore into a matchmaker who's practically fluffing the pillows for Snape to bed a student.

    Have a nitpick though... the "
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  • From ANON - June on February 15, 2005
    Ch 7 - ack! Your chapters always make me want MORE!!!!! Okay, so the secret Severus wants from the book can destroy Voldie AND the book also has a secret (another different secret?) that can keep Voldie alive. Has Severus or Lucius been the one making Voldie's Strenghtening Solution? So Lucius is going to make his own Polyjuice so he can go "shopping" to get a girl to donate an "ingredient" and Voldie does NOT want it from a Hogwarts
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  • From ANON - Tourniquette on February 14, 2005
    I really like the story, although I think the chapters are a bit short near the end. Poor Hermione. I seriously hope she won't be blonde throughout the story!

    It's a bit strange reading with the European
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  • From ANON - June on February 11, 2005
    Ch 6 - hmm, what if ANOTHER Muggleborn girl touches it - will she too take on the appearance of Rasputin's lady, or must it be Hermione? (Hey, as long as you're not going to commit yourself to a Severus-Hermione romance, I have to ask!) She says Severus said her appearance is "permanent" but Dumbledore told Minerva it "won
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