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Reviews for Rose Petals

By : lace122
  • From ANON - Prattle on February 01, 2005
    Your summary is better written than this steaming pile of shite. Don't yank us about with this bloody garbage. You've no sentence structure, no real clear grasp of the English language, and apparently no fucking story. This is SHITE. Actually get a couple of pages going AND get it beta'd before posting. You're wasting bandwith, you fucking wanker.
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  • From ANON - Maris on February 01, 2005
    WTF? This is garbage. My author's notes are longer and more grammatically correct than this tripe.
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  • From ANON - SL on February 01, 2005
    The fact that your story actually has two stars utterly profounds me. In what world, does a paragraph a chapter make sense? In what world does poor narration, characters, setting, dialogue equate with GOOD writing?!? Some suggestions, a beta but also, an actual story, and not "plot notes." If you believe this is a good, less you believe its great, I am sorry to inform you, you'd be wrong. It isn't even due necessarily to bad grammar, bad sentences, bad plot...because there is not even a story!

    0_o You know, "being emaciated" is not the best thing to be, especially if you are writing a story. Flesh, is okay. You're not going to get fat jokes because of the thickness of pages, were this story printed. In writing, "thickness" is irrelevant, to a point.

    If you want an appropriate review, write an appropriate story.

    *takes a deep breath*
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2005
    Make it LONGER!!!!!!! good start but needs more length
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  • From ANON - Denali on February 01, 2005
    you must be kidding. Get a beta. Or something...
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  • From ANON - DDMalfoy on February 01, 2005
    Perhaps you should post when you have more than two paragraphs. You can't expect anyone to form an interest in this from two paragraphs.
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