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By : lorettcopeland

From ANON - RahNee on May 25, 2005
Lorett darling! (Breezing in and kissing you on each cheek. MWAP! MWAP!) So sorry I am rather late in this review of chappie 33. It is not because I didn't love it: you know I did! It was the best birthday gift, I must say!

Enough chit chat. Let's get down to business. My first fav moment is the "hero complex" dialogue when Draco pushes all of Harry's buttons. And then Draco backpedaling. That was fantastic. And then Harry getting more wound up and Draco making the mental note to push that button again when he had more time to see the results. I laughed!

Next: The money discussion. Draco wants to finance the Order? Well, sure, because he's got to back the good guys now that he has cut the ties with Daddy Death and Moldy Voldy. And Harry questioning if money was worth risking his life was very Harry-like. Harry having to grudgingly admit that with THAT much money, Draco could have been much more of a spoiled brat than he was. I could just imagine Harry's eyes bugging out at the 7000 vaults figure.

All of the Draco/Harry dialogue was great. I enjoyed watching Draco manipulate Harry into the bonding ritual. But I also liked Harry's thoughts on Draco trusting him with Laurel.

The whole Slytherin ring bonding ritual scene was FAN-FRICKIN-TASTIC! I loved the visual imagery. I loved the almost slashy-thing going on. (As you know, that's as close to slash as I like to get: "almost slashy") I loved those lascivious little snakes twining together. I loved the sensuality of the power going through Harry. Well done! Well done! (stands up, gives standing ovation, tosses roses at your feet, wolf whistles, claps some more...)

Hee hee! Harry was maliciously glad that Draco saw how Laurel responded to Harry! Oh, what typical teenaged male posturing. That "I had her first" kind of mentality.

I'd forgotten that Laurel still thought she was in danger from Don! She's got some secrets, too, then. Oh, the Harry/Draco/Laurel stuff is so rife with opportunities for miscommunication and angst! Yum yum yum!

YAY! I FINALLY get some Draco/Laurel snogging! It is about time, lady! And it was so nice and HOT! I swear my heart did flip-flops at the following lines:
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From ANON - Alison on May 25, 2005
Me again. Decided I changed my mind to Ginny. Makes much more sense with the whole friendship line, not to mention the "YOU!" at the beginnig. Didn't have friendly ring to it. Ah, indecision galore!!

But this time, I mean it. I really do. Like, IT'S GINNY! kind of mean-it.

That is...unless....
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From ANON - Alison on May 25, 2005
Woosh!! That was INTENSE, darlin'. HARDCORE ACTION THERE. (Hard in more ways than one, si? Heh heh heh...couldn't resist...I set myself up for that...) It was brilliant, as you said yourself, and just overflowing with these delicious little tidbits that seemed so much fun to write, let alone read. And you left us with a mystery! Who, I wonder, is her secret "spy," "playmate," whatever you called him/her.

The blood bonding ceremony was just amazing. It was such a beautiful ritual, and you carried off its significance - to Draco, especially - incredibly. I could feel his hesitation, Harry's anticipation, their determination, and, most of all, their pride. They refused to bow to the other. You worked in a bunch of other attributes earlier, too, such as Draco's smarts - love of books, you say? Ah...match made in heaven...I just love literate guys. So sexy in their intelligence... Harry's pride got petty here, too (his similarities to Draco are getting more obvious every day!) - his manners?? That truly made me roll on the floor. So like Harry to get offended over something like that, probably just because it's Draco telling him that. It's true, though - Harry's never been really tactful.

I still can't get over the rings. THEY SOUND SO COOL!! And to have the attitude of the Slytherins, even when bound to a Gryffindor.... So now Harry and Draco are brothers. Closer than brothers, really; that lust was welldone. I squirm to think what would happen if Draco WASN'T prepared (but your little scene with Laurel more than made up for it....SHOWER HO!). Eeps, Harry and Draco (shudders). Not exactly what you'd call a perfect match. Afterwards, when Harry felt jealous that his intimacy with Draco had been shared with Blaise, it reminded me a little of PUPPET MASTER. Obviously, this is in quite diffferent circumstances, but Harry must have felt just as bewildered as Herms and Drakes did after the Fates messed with 'em. Now, here's a question for you: So if Draco bonded with Blaise, he's using the same ring, right? So what happens if BOTH Harry and Blaise are in mortal peril (such as a huge Death Eater/Order battle) - is Draco torn in two? (Now THAT'S an easy way to share our hot babe.) Or maybe both of them are pulled to Draco's side? Yeah, that would at least get 'em out of the way, though it might be a little wierd if Harry's in the middle of the confrontation with Voldemort. "Oy, Voldemort, you killed my fathe---ack!" And more innocent lives are lost, all because of that stupid ring thing. Now, I also assume that Harry and Draco are no longer permitted to hurt each other. Meaning, no more bouncing ferret. It seems that emotional hurt is still okay (though it essentially betrays the trust they put in each other), based on Harry's refusal to agree not to touch Laurel. I fear that there may be a battle of egos concerning the ladies (Ginny included), but it seems pretty obvious where Draco plans on ending up. (That is, right in Laurel's pants.)

Speaking of Laurel...the playmate. While I was reading it, I thought it might be Willow. We hadn't heard from her in awhile, and I know she's pretty powerful. Of course, I changed my mind seeing as this person seemed to have intimate knowledge of Hogwarts' inter-workings, not to mention that Laurel said, "I didn't hear you come in." THEN I thought it was maybe Harry, seeing as she said "Wanna have a go at friendship, then?" (after the infamous bathroom scene, he seemed fairly hostile at her attempts to end any developing affection), but then you implied that this person had just gotten there. Actually, scratch that. I still think its Harry.

Okee dokee...must run, m'love. Beautiful chapter, as always. And I expect you to update soon, young lady! Only two more chapters till the acclaimed chapter 36!!

~Me.
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From ANON - Annie on May 25, 2005
Hello Lorett!!!

How are you hun? Good I hope! I'm ok. I'm soooooo sorry I haven't posted at the community for ages, I have been extra busy with all kinds of different things. First it was all the assignments I had to do. I had about 10 assignments that all had to be in over 4 days and of course me being... well me left everything to the last minute. So there was some late night library stays and early starts. I managed to get everything in on time. (Just about!) Then I had my chillout phase which consisted of nothing but watching telly (TV) and eating rubbish! And then I got home and went straight back to work at the supermarket I work at. I desperately need the money so I'm not really complaining but it does make me absolutely cream crackered (rhyming slang for the word Knackered which in the UK we use for the word tired. We're weird, I know!). But, I do have a bit of time spare sometime soon so I'll pop over and leave a message!

Ok, review time...

I can see why this chapter is your favourite! I think it has to be one of my favourites too!!! You've got everything in there like love, jealousy, passion, bonding, quipy remarks, suspense, tension and trouble brewing... what more could a girl ask for?!?! (A real life Draco I suppose... *ponders* but I won't go into that!! Hee hee!) I think the whole bonding thing with Harry and Draco, the snakes and the rings was very ingenious! They hate eachother yet they're bound to eachother for the rest of their lives!! That's going to be interesting... (Harry is soooooo lucky! *is jealous*) can't wait to see what happens with that. Just one thing about that though, I think the bonding went on for a bit too long. It's great that you put all the detail into it but it just seemed to go on for a while. I loved the interaction between Draco and Laurel. It just made me melt inside!!! They are sooooo made for eachother! I bet the last person Laurel was thinking about during that little encounter was Harry!!! I don't think he could compare to Draco in the whole tenderness, passion way.

Anyway, I can't wait for you to update! I sense trouble afoot! And that's always good for a read! I think Laurels play mate is Ginny... or Harry... I can't decide at the moment! But I guess I'll see for myself soon enough! I will most certainly get my friend hooked onto your story. I've just introduced her to the whole fan fiction thing and she loves it!

Hope all is good in the world of Lorett!

Love ya lots,
AnnieXxX
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From ANON - mrs_accio_firebolt on May 23, 2005
Hello, hello. I'm back.

And I feel like killing you.

What a chapter! Wonderful... or very close to that.

You know me. I do love slash. And you almost gave it to me... but didn't see fit to.

I know a gay or even bisexual Draco wouldn't work in this story... but he came so close. And as I understand it, he even at least kissed with Blaise. Yummie! But not with Harry WHYYY?!?!?!??!?!?!??!?!??!

I loved, absolutely loved the interaction between them in this chapter. The whole bonding thing. Veeery good, muchachita. It made me so hot. I'm not kidding. The force irradiating from them, the depth of the feelings, the emotions running almost absolutely free.. Oh, how much would I have liked a kiss.......

But never mind.

As for the last part.... Hot again. And yet again, you've left me hanging.... Damn you! LOL. I just can't wait till they're alone, together, in a bedroom ( or bathroom, I don't really mind ), naked.... hmmmm. (Damn it, I'm so horny this Monday).

My guess is that it's Ginny who was in the library. Am I right? Yes, I am. And I do look forward to the interaction between Ginny and Laurel. Two rough girls, right?

Anyways, see you later aligator.

Muchos besos y abrazos,
accio
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From ANON - dragon34 on May 23, 2005
Is her play date either Hermione or Ginny ? I almost wanted to see Harry and Draco kiss and grope each other, ( been watching Queer as Folk all day today ) Nothing wrong with watching or reading about two or more hot guys getting it on.
Or maybe her play date is Ron. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

my beta has chapters for two of my stories, so hopefully soon, thanks for reading, and liking.
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From ANON - ali aka ginny-rules-the-world on May 23, 2005
lol! no i listen to Dane Cook, a comidian. he's hillarius. 11 days until my birthday! not including today. i will be 19. it's wierd, there is this big difference between 19 and 20. i mean come on, 19 ur still kind of a teenager, and 20, ur like an adult. n e who, onto more important things, this is my favorite chapter too! :0! lol. ok well, im going to go now. i luv u!

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SMILE! this IS the happy hour!
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From ANON - Alison on May 15, 2005
I've got about two seconds before I have to leave, but I thought I'd pop in and say hello - which is probably about I'll I'm going to have time for in the next couple weeks. My English teacher is piling on these STUPID projects, and I have two more (big ones, too) due in the next two weeks, not to mention all the other work I'll have to deal with. I hope your swamped-ness is over with. (Thanks so much for reviewing, by the way!! I haven't heard from Ally or Accio yet.)

THAT was an action-packed chapter. The tension and drama is very well done, and you leave us wondering exactly what's going to happen next. Let's see...I remember you mentioning that Laurel thinks Draco is dead at one point, and you also had Harry call Draco "the-Boy-Who-Died-to-Save-the-Boy-Who-Lived". Big hint there, I think. And I have a feeling Harvey and Hazel are going to be back with the bloodlust soon, too.

Oh, man, I have to leave!! I was hoping for more time than THAT, but didn't want you to update without hearing from me. I'll try to find my way back and do some disecting soon...but I may not get around to it. Much love, dearest!!

~Me
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From ANON - Lindsey on May 14, 2005
I really, really love your story. I haven't read such a good story in a VERY long time. I usually don't like stories with other characters in it, but this one is so different. The plot is THE BEST....you are a great writer, i REALLY wanna kno what Draco is up to, so please update ASAP!!!!
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From ANON - RahNee on May 13, 2005
Well, darling, I LOVED chapter 32! I really enjoyed seeing Laurel pushed to the edge and her reaction to Harvey. She was ready to show everyone and give them what for! Go Laurel! I really like her.

The scene where Draco is trying to get Harry to come over by jerking his head was funny. A nice bit of humor in a tough situation. And the Harry/Draco interaction throughout was terrific. Especially the dismal failure of the life insurance policy joke.

I enjoyed being in Draco's head as he surveyed the room and schemed. And the funniest line: "God he loved dramatic entrances." Love that dramatic Draco! The scene between Draco and Harvey was fantastic: I could feel the tension. I loved it when Draco gave him his comeuppance.

The best line of all in the chappie:
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From ANON - Annie on May 12, 2005
Hey Lorett!

How are you hunny bunches? Good I hope! I'm feeling cheerful, because the sun is out YAY, but stressed because I have tons and tons of work to do! *sighs* I wish I could be out basking myself in the beautiful weather and sipping on an ice cold drink but I'm in the university library again working like a trooper to get everything done! It's my own fault for being a procrastinator and leaving everything to the last minute! But I'm sure I'm not the only one who has done it... at least I hope not! It's ok about the whole audition thing. I mean, I was a bit disheartened at first because it's a big blow to your confidence. But then I thought I still love to sing and nothing can take that away from me! Not even mean producers of TV shows who think they know everything about the music biz! Thanks for supporting me Honey! You're an absolute star and I love you right back!

This chapter was amazing! It totally took my mind off my stressful live from which I really needed a break! Except that my friend, who I'd brought with me to motivate me to do something, kept saying "Stop reading those silly stories and get on with your work!" to which I replied "Get Lost!". The interaction between Draco and Laurel melted my insides! It was sooooo romantic and you know I love that stuff! Draco is so gentle with her and so protective. He is definitely a smitten kitten! Ahhh... he's so dreamy! *puts on whiny kids voice* I want a Draco!!! That spell that Harvey put on the room was frightening! I was actually scared for my own safety when I was reading that because it felt so real! It was like the effect the Dementors have on people but much much worse! He's a nasty piece of work that Harvey is! And now Draco's father will know that he's turned to the good side and that he has his eyes on Laurel! Oh NO!!! Dun dun duhhhh! That Lucius is a dirty piece of work! Awww and Harry saw the interaction between Laurel and Draco and was jealous. Bless him! But he was thinking about Ginny and Hermione aswell! Wow! He definitely has girls on the brain! Hee hee!

Anyway, I'd better go because I'm just procrastinating again! You know I love you and what you do so update soon please!!!

Lots of hugs and smooches,
AnnieXxX
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From ANON - Huked On Fonix (too lazy to log in, haha) on May 12, 2005
Oh my goodness, you dedicated this chapter to ME!! Well, partly, haha.. I feel so special!! *grin*

Anyway, LOVE this chapter! Great chemistry between the characters. Action packed chapter, just leaves me wanting more!

:-D
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From ANON - Narcissa Black on May 11, 2005
Statler and Waldorf, and yes, Waldorf did admit once that his wife's name was Astoria. You do have excellent Harry/Draco, and they're both actually straight in this. Usually excellent Harry/Draco involves lubrication spells. Are you sure there's only a few chapters left? Do all three couples get a happy ending, and is there much suffering, and I get tears on my keyboard? No cemetary, all right?
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From ANON - ali aka ginny-rules-the-world on May 11, 2005
hahaha! i feel special!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you dedicated the chpater to me! *o*!!!!!!!!! lol. my other friend, Rachel, helped my solve the problem with my bf (best friend) and she kept telling my bf that she knew how she felt, and blah blah blah, and so the next day, my bf said, "Rachel know's everything," and that just did it. well anywho, on to more important things. AWSOME CHAPTER! (chap 32) OMG! I REMEMBERED TO TELL YOU WHAT CHAPTER IT WAS! *faints* ahahaha. ok im good. LUV U! TTYL!

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From ANON - mrs_accio_firebolt on May 11, 2005
Hola, hola.

I liked this chapter very much. It was so tense. Not too much happened, but the whole explanation of Draco's thoughts as he surveyed the room was exquisite.

I do love the interaction between Draco and Harry... so different and yet, so alike.... jaja when they both roll their eyes at the shocked crowd when Draco mentions VOLDEMORT... (MUFASA!) jiji. Fun kids. Could be great friends, right?

And a very much deserved praise for Dumbledore's scene, when the last of the darkness is disappearing at the tip of his wand... very powerful, and exciting.

I kind of remember that you already told us Draco is going to Gringott's right? What I want to know is how?

Well, see you later, alligator.

Besos, comadrita y p
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