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By : lorettcopeland

From ANON - dragon34 on May 11, 2005
this chapter was great, I can't wait to see what Draco is going to do, before his father does.

I'm getting ready to update two of my stories, I will send you the updates, so be on the look out.

After you finish this story, i really hope you come up with another tantilizing story.
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From ANON - Huked On Fonix on May 07, 2005
*Grin* I'm so excited about the upcoming chapters! Haha, I can't wait to see what happens. I so love your story, it always just sucks me in, I don't want to stop reading it.
I like this chapter (31). It's all about Ron, and Ron is is one of my favorite characters - BUT, he's got nothin' on Draco, lol!

Anywho, I love it, I love it! You're so awesome!

**Hugs!**
:-D
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From ANON - Annie on May 07, 2005
Hiya Lorett honey!!!

How are you? Good I hope! I'm ok. I didn't go too well with the whole auditioning thing. I went twice and they knocked me back both times! But I'm not too bothered about it! I still love to sing and nothing is going to take that away from me! They're missing out not having me in their show! (It's their loss blah, blah, blah!) I'm just sooooooo tired from the whole nerves excitement mix now. I mean I still have tons of work to do for University which is great! *sighs*

I'm still really hyper about seeing the HP stars! I'm chuffed (another british slang word. Means to be happy about something or with yourself) that they were there! It was just the best weekend! I'm glad you like the pictures I put on the community. I haven't received the rest of the pictures from that weekend yet but as soon as I get my hands on them I'll send them straight over to you! I promise! I'll see if I can dig up some more Tom and Christian photo's especially for you!

Anyway, review... I love thhis chapter! Ron is sooooo sweet about Hermione and you just know that it's going to happen between them in the books! They're just destined to be together! I wonder if there will be arguements between Harry and Ron over our Hermy??!! I can't wait to see what you do with that! Awwww Ron wants her so much! It'd break his heart if Hermione picked Harry instead of him. He'd fall out with Harry big time!!! But then again if he doesn't tell Harry how he feels he wouldn't have any reason to be mad at him because Harry wouldn't have stepped on a 'no go zone'. Ooohhhh... All the romances are intertwining and I love it! It makes for very interesting reading! Hee hee!

Anyway, must dash. I'll try and put a brittish slang word into every review I do from now on so that you might be able to use them in future chappies! Sorry it took me a while to review! I got here in the end though!!! Hee hee!

Hope you're ok and life is treating you well!!

hugs and kisses and stuff,
AnnieXxX
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From ANON - RahNee on May 06, 2005
Well, Lorett, dear...I am sooooo glad that you put in this short chapter so we could get a deeper glance at Ron. (I know, I know...hard to believe I am not greedily demanding a 2-fur anymore...) Poor Ron: never has a moments peace to himself! And when he does...he dreams of a Hermione he can't even be sure really exists because he is so insecure about himself. That made me so sad! And his jealousy! He almost can't bring himself to admit that he is jealous of Harry, and he fears so much that Hermione only has feelings for Harry...

OH IT IS SO ANGSTY! I love this line: it captures all the anguish: "He would rather his love went unrequited, than have her out of his life." Oh GAWWWWL! Poor baby, always been overshadowed by brothers, then Harry, so insecure, self esteem is shot...I just want to take him in my arms and comfort him. Well, you did it. That's the 3rd of your boys I've hungered to do the comforting thing to.

This was certainly a fabulous little interlude, a nice foray into the inner workings of Ron. But don't think it gets you off the hook on answering any of my questions, Missy! And when the hell do we get some snogging?!!! I must have my snogging fix! Aw heck, I'll just go re-read "It Had to Be You" and stop pestering you about that! SMIRK! I SURE will! Hee hee!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU! Now, what are you waiting for? Off you go to write chappie 36! shoo! shoo! If you need me, I'll be hanging out in the usual spot in The Gutter, eating warm chocolate chip cookies, drinking Dr. P and chillin' the champagne. Drop in any time!

Big squeezy hugs and muchas smooches to you, Lovie!
Love, Ronnie
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From ANON - princessgreta on May 05, 2005
*sprints red-faced into the room*
Can't stop, gotta do tons of work, but loved the chapter!
*hugs Ron fiercely* she loves you too, just you wait Ronnie boy!
Bbyyyyeeeeeeeeee
*sprints back out of the room*
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From ANON - Alison on May 04, 2005
Whew!!! Well, I was SO worried I would miss one of your updates, but I got to it on the second day!! Whoop!! You see, the DAY after I left you that review (thanks so much for the praise, by the way - heh heh...made me blush) all my ties to the outside world were cut. (Your cue to faint.) I had no phone service OR internet service. It was killing me, it was. It was just put up - let's see - maybe five minutes ago. But man, I was mad. AND THEN, I finished writing my next chap - I struggled with a wee case of writer's block with this 'un - and the FILE GOT CORRUPTED. Tell me about it. So it WOULD have been up today, now I'll be lucky if I get it up by Friday.

Right. Enough complaining. Your turn for absolute flattery and praise - all deserved, of course. Well, I personally thought this chapter was AMAZING. Let's see, what'd you say to Mrs-Accio-Firebolt?? "That he's a tad more complex than the big, grumbly oaf we usually associate with him." Took the words right out of my mouth. What really astounds me is how you picked up on all these little points in the book, and incorporated them to build up a really strong case for Ron's ...er... affection. Let me be a bit more specific.

The defense. His insecurities are most definitely the type that are hidden - or revealed, in this case - by his tendency to jump on other people. I suppose it was all those years with brothers, fighting jealousy (a recurring problem, it seems) and his desire for fame and greatness. It's his main weakness, as was revealed by the Mirror of Erised. He wants to rise above his brothers, to become the greatest and best of them all. Because he was juggling these strong emotions, he learned to deal with them by beating his brothers to the punch. Not by labeling these insecurities, but by beginning to fight - physically - before THEY labeled them. A weakness in every last one of us, I suppose. Nobody wants to hear the worst things about them put in words.

And his love for Hermione....I ADORED the line that you used to descirbe his fall into this forbidden pool of emotion: "somewhere along the way, over these past 6 years Ronald Weasley had fallen madly, totally, achingly in love with Hermione Granger." Beautifully put. Huh, it's funny. The jealousy you mention about Hermione and his reaction towards those who tempt this jealousy - it reminds me how he reacts on behalf of Ginny. So defensive. (Sorry, guess defense is on the brain tonight.) It's almost as if he, in a way. considers her his sister. And for awhile, I suppose he did. Until she became much, much more than that, in a way that he couldn't ignore any longer.

Ah, shoot. I've got to run...Damn!! I was really thrilled about the opportunity to rattle on about the (startling) depth of Ron Weasley. Darn. Well, know that I sympathize for Ron and respect him for knowing the worst deep in the core of his body, even if he doesn't have the courage to accept it. In a way I had never considered before, it's almost cowardly to continue fighting. But valiant. Sigh...another knight in shining armour. Hopefully, I'll talk to you soon!! I swear I'll update MASTER by this weekend. I need your feedback.

~ME
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From ANON - accio on May 04, 2005
Hola COMADRE (compadre is for a man)! I love your Ron, I have already told you. I've never thought he's soo clueless, but certainly this depth of feelings for Hermione, wasn't expected. I always perceived that he wasn't aware of loving Hermione. But here, he knows and is willing to keep his love quiet in order to not lose her. So very tender ... and stupid. I did that once, and ended up losing both the love and the friendship. He must go get her. If he doesn't, it means she's not meant for him. And he should move on. But nothing good has ever come out from hiding one's emotions toward another person. It is hard, yes. Specially when said person has already given his/her heart to somebody else, but nevermind. It is harder to live in the shadow, I think. So, my dear Ron, so fragile, so intense should get over it and tell her. And see what happens.
Much love, lady for this insightful Ron-packed chapter. All your boys are yummie. And if you could make them real, OMG you should keep it quiet or else.... you could end up very badly beaten, I think. See you next chapter. Portate bien mientras tanto.....
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From ANON - ali aka ginny-rules-the-world on May 03, 2005
YAY! *hugs*! im so excited! one month until my birthday! u know whwat gives me nightmares? the koolaid man! i mean, he just crashes right through your wall like its cool! well using the front door is cool too! i will kick u in the tights if u don't fix that wall before my dad gets home Mr. Koolaid. "oh yeah?" oh no! naughty naughty koolaid! HAHAHAHAHA! sry. i love Dane Cook. he's so funny. ok LOL! (lots of luv)

ME!

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From ANON - Alex on May 03, 2005
I have no idea why Ron would make me "long." He doesn't really make me sad. I have no sympathy for people who don't get up off their pathetic, shy ass and ask someone out if they want to. He's such a pussy! But on the other hand, this whole jealousy thing is interesting. You should make him just go totally nuts with jealousy, go into a flying rage when someone breathes in Hermione's direction, or looks at her, or heaven forbid, actually say her name.
Good chapter. Good Ron. I'm not one to feel sad for this kind of character, but I do find him interesting.
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From ANON - Jenn on May 03, 2005
Hello hello!!!

I know its been a long time, I'm hardly on the computer anymore! But I still read all the updates from the site and read the chappies! I like to call it "lurking" lol

So I totally love this chapter and love RON!!! He is such a little cutie! I just want to hug him or set him and Hermoine up IMEDIATELY!! I love how descriptive this chapter is, it really gives deeper character depth to Ron which I think is needed cause he is a key character.

Anywho, just wanted to drop a quick note and I can't wait for 4 chappies from now!

Luv ya! Muah
Jenn
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From ANON - dragon34 on May 03, 2005
I like the obsessed Ron, it suits him. Just like being a control freak suits Hermione. Can't wait to read more
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From ANON - Lisa on May 03, 2005
Quite apologizing for good writing. Sure there are some errors and areas that you could work on, but smut isn't the only part of a story. If flows well and isn't the inmature porn in almost all of these stories.
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From on April 28, 2005
Ok who are the ones working for Lucius, I really hope Draco doesn't get punish to severely for helping the one he is suppose to kill. I really love your story. I'll be sad when it ends.
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From ANON - Annie on April 27, 2005
Hello there Lorett!!!

How are you hunny? Good I hope! I'm feeling very chirpy today as the sun is out and it's shining all over the place. It makes me feel all cheerful and content like nothing can go wrong. Yet here I am, in the University library distracting myself from the tons of work that I have to do! *sobs* I should be outside enjoying the sunshine! *cries louder* It's not fair!! Since I've got that bit of a rant out of the way I can talk to you normally now! Hee hee!

Me having a cell phone hasn't really got me to go to more parties. Sometimes people just don't invite me but they're the people who don't mean that much to me really! I don't miss out on much. I always have someone there making sure I don't miss out on any gossip!! Hee hee! Awwww it's a shame you don't get ITV where you are! I would have loved it if you could have watched the programme if I get on it! But I absolutely promise you I'll keep you updated on what's happening as it happens. I've always got your e-mail and the yahoo group to let you know!

Right, onto the review...

I love the way you write Lorett! It's so descriptive! I can actually feel the tension between the characters. I loved the arguement between Harry and Laurel. He can be a bit self-centred sometimes but then again everyone is shelfish at one time or another. she put him in his place though didn't she?! It was good of her not to carry on arguing because I think that could have turned in to a full blown barny (a UK slang word for arguement!), and everyone would have heard, and oh... the consequences could have been bad for Laurel and Harry when I come to think of it! Draco is going to tear him appart when he hears about their little... erm... affair!! The action between Ginny and Draco was great too! I love the way you write Ginny. It's just the way I see her in my mind when she's older (think I've already told you that!). The way I see it she has some very overpowering brothers so she has to create a personality for herself to stand out. I can believe the whole love at first sight thing. I suppose when you find your soul mate then you just know instantly. But having not found mine yet I couldn't really say for sure! I like the idea of it though. I'm a hopeless romantic and would like to think it could happen. So just keep going the way you are! I love it!

Oh by the way... I'll be meeting Tom Felton in 3 days!!! ARRRGGGHHH!!! Didn't realise it was so soon! Hee hee! EXCITEMENT!!!! I will definitely get some pics and post them on the yahoo site so you can see what his hair is like. I think he has it short and spikey at the moment but I'll let you know for sure on Sunday. I promise I'll make an apperance at the yahoo community soon. It's a bit overwhelming for me at the moment with all the messages being put up there. I can't make it through them all. But I have read 'The Lions of December' and I'm all ready to have a good chat about it with you all!

Hope life is treating you well!
Love and hugs,
AnnieXxX

P.S - Wow! That was a long review!!!
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From ANON - Alison/Blood Rust/Your Adoring Fan on April 26, 2005
Whatda we want?? A girl worth fighting for!!! Whatda we want? A girl worth fighting for!! Ahhhhh....good old Mulan. One of the TOP Disney movies, following Lion King and the Little Mermaid, of course. Whee!! I love Disney - at least the old, nice animated ones. No more of those these days though...sigh.

Well, my dear, I think after a long conference, the fans of Draco and Lorett everywhere have finally come to a concensus (or however you spell it): Draco's got it bad. REAL bad. But, of course, there's the famous question that is impossible to answer at this present time: Is it love? Draco's pondering, hormonal teenage mind really put words to issues that every young girl asks herself in the privacy of the dark and the shadows of dreams. I, too, have wondered whether such things exist, whether it's possible for me to fall in love. Obviously, it's a wee bit early yet for me to truly fall in love (I mean, the mentality of the guys at this age is simply appalling). But for Draco.... Mentality does not seem an issue. What DOES seem an issue is his own self-doubt. The doubt about the nature of his affection turns the truth transparent, invisible and hidden under so many assumptions and anxious thoughts. Personally, I've always thought that labeling the feelings inside us is dangerous; once we put words to it, the sacred halo of its undignified existance is erased. Emotions always seem more private and beautiful to me when I keep them a secret from myself, when I refuse to put a name to what I'm feeling. It feels wrong when I attach a noun to a feeling, for it's far more complex than the simple word.

Tonight, for example. I had to go play my violin for a group of people (we have "group practices" every month or so), and had to perform a solo. Well, to be honest, I'm a complete ham; I LOVE the spotlight and the feeling of everybody's eyes on me and only me. Of course, tonight had to be the night which I fucked up EXTREMELY badly. Ick. Hurts to remember. Anywho, my teacher kept telling me that it was because I was "nervous" - far too general a word - and I WASN'T. She needed a better word that's all, and it was offensive to me to name it.

Ah, more comments were coming, but I now need to go to sleep. GAH!! I'll talk to you soon, darling - I'll be back in the discussions tomorrow or Thurs night!!

~Me.
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