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By : lorettcopeland

From ANON - mrs_accio_firebolt on April 25, 2005
Hello!

This was a nice start for my day. Good chapter, setting things up for what is to come next, huh? So, Draco and Ginny? I have to disagree. I like your Ginny and I think she would be just fine for Draco. However, I don't think it would work between real Draco and real Ginny. Somehow, I just don't see it happening.

The kiss? Poor Draco! having to restrain himself. BUT, he just let her do her thing... He didn't want it to happen or did he? Men! Of course he's a healthy 17 years old male and would be an absolute idiot to deny himself of such an easy prey... but.... I actually think he stopped it because HE hadn't started it. Anyways... He'll always like her? You're soo mean. But soo firm as well. It's funny to think of all the love figures you're preparing for the characters.... knowing that in the end, you'll make decisions (you've probably already make them) as to who gets to keep who. Right now, I'm in love with all of them, I wonder if I could make those decisions.... Don't think so! Give me all of them!!!!!!!

And Draco being in love so soon? I definitely buy it. I do beleive in love at first sight. And.... they do have some sort of connection, right? I mean, in the non-physical world?

See you later, darling, I've gotta start working..... damn........

Besos,
yo merita
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From ANON - RahNee on April 24, 2005
Well, now, I must say, Ginny and Draco in chapter 30...yum yum...they must have been amazing when they were together, cause even now the sparks are flying! I definitely like your Draco/Ginny dynamic. It doesn't even bother me that I don't know what happened between them... you give plenty of info to feed my imagination! Ginny and Draco share some similarities, don't they? And she can dish the cockiness and arrogance right back at him. I love that she's figured out how hard he has fallen for Laurel. "Your secret's safe with me" was priceless. Oooh, I LIKE your Ginny, a lot!

The Laurel/Harry talk, er...brawl, was great. My favorite line:
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From ANON - Erin on April 24, 2005
yay!! 5 more chapters!!...but yes i do believe in love at first sight...and it just makes sense he d fall for her so quickly since technically they have met before..
hmm...interesting feelings between draco and ginny....lots of tension....cant wait to see where that may lead...but hopefully no where...and im kinda curious to see where hermione comes in...or if she does at all....welll keep updating...im waiting patiently!!!
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From ANON - ali aka ginny-rules-the-world on April 24, 2005
hi again! my birthday is in a month a week and a day. but whose counting? i am! lol good chapter. oh and i'm writing my next chapter now.... so it should be done soon! *hugs* i have a knew name for myself... its i-need-a-hug or giv-me-a-hug just because i love hugs! yay! lol KEEP WRITING!

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From ANON - ali aka ginny-rules-the-world on April 24, 2005
hi again! my birthday is in a month a week and a day. but whose counting? i am! lol good chapter. oh and i'm writing my next chapter now.... so it should be done soon! *hugs* i have a knew name for myself... its i-need-a-hug or giv-me-a-hug just because i love hugs! yay! lol KEEP WRITING!
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From ANON - Huked On Fonix on April 24, 2005
I love how you describe the feelings Draco and Laurel have for each other, and their reactions to one another. And I LOVE the idea of Draco in love.

We're getting CLOSER to a brand, spankin', NEW chapter! And I can't wait! I'm so excited, haha.. I love this chapter as well (30) - but now that I think of it,
I love pretty much EVERY chapter you write!!

Lol, keep up the great work!!!

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From ANON - Alex on April 22, 2005
Just when you think maybe Draco's not involved in all this teenage drama, that maybe HE, at least, is able to focus on one person, you throw this at us.
There's really no need for Hermione to come. You've already got enough of a love hexagon or whatever it is. Let me guess what happens when Hermione does come. She's always had a crush on Harry (or Ron) but doesn't like the other one THAT way but now, all of a sudden Draco's all grown up and on the good side. So she decides she thinks he's pretty hot too! So Harry's into THREE girls, huh? And the one he's apparently gotten the farthest with (Laurel) is the one he's the least chance of ending up with? According to Ginny, anyway? But Ginny thinks she DOESN'T have to watch out for Laurel, who just macked on her crush? Ah...Ginny's underestimating the power of the connection between the keys.
The scene at the breakfast table was really confusing. That part of the conversation about the Ministry...ya...didn't really know what was going on. They're going in one at a time to talk to somebody?
I'm at the library right now and there's a really cute guy with really scruffy, sticky-uppy hair who glances at me occasionally. Too bad when I was here yesterday, he was wearing exactly the same thing.
Ya, so it was confusing the way you jumped from one person's perspective to another's to another's. I would just clear up the dialogue a bit, so you knew more of what was going on (and only as regards to the Ministry being there...trust me, the dialogue pertaining to the teen drama, like the Hermione factor - which is fun, btw - is already obvious) and let it all be from Laurel's point of view. The way you have it jumping around, sometimes I didn't know who was thinking what.
I liked that line Laurel thought about boys and their hormones. Haha...look at what YOU just let yourself do last night, silly girl!
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From ANON - Annie on April 22, 2005
Hiya Lorett,

I'm so sorry it took me so long to post a review. I've had sooooo manny university assignments to do this week. I was in the library on Monday from 11am untill 10.30pm on Monday just doing work!!! How crazy is that! But at least that stressful week is over and I have a nice chilling weekend ahead of me! My 'cell' phone is great thanks! I love it like a sibling!!! Hee hee! It has so many cool things on it that I never get bored with it! I'm such a child! As for my audition... I got the time and date through the post last Saturday. It's going to be on the 6th of May at 9am (so soon! and so early!!!). I don't know when the programme (called the X-Factor) will air but it's not on the BBC. It'll be on ITV. I hope you get that over there! Probably not. But we do get American Idol over here on ITV2 so you never know! I will most certainly let you know what happens!

Onto the review now... I absolutely love all the hormones flying around these people! It's just craziness! Harry loves Ginny and Laurel, Laurel loves Draco, Ron loves Hermione and Harry might love her too!!! It's great! And what's the relationship between Ginny and Draco???!!! I'm so excited to find out about that! Hee hee! *squeels whilst jumping up and down and clapping hands* I like they way you've wrote Ginny. I can totally see her being like that when she gets a bit older. Really feisty and confident. And her and Ron have got a similar relationship to me and my brother. We get on like a house on fire but we can annoy eachother soooo much sometimes! Plus we are protective over one another!

Well anyway! I can't wait to read what happens next!

Hugs and smooches,
AnnieXxX
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From ANON - Silverdragon on April 20, 2005
Lorett Darling!

How are you? London was fantastic, The Harry Potter tour was EXCEPTIONAL i could just visualise myself in Hogwarts / Leaky Couldron / Diagon Alley/. I was sooooooooooooo looking for a glimpse of my 3 main men. Being Snape, Lucius, and of course our darrrrrling Draco. But no all i saw was a man selling Apples and a cat.!!!!!!!!! ( i did check that the cat wasnt Minerva) Muggle London was just as good spent tons of money, and had a jolly whizzy time. I hope all the photo's turn out ok. Anyway the main reason im here is i'm not getting any of your email updates! So im in danger of missing updates. The stories coming along fantastically well, keep at it

Silverdragon x
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From ANON - mrs_accio_firebolt on April 19, 2005
Hi.

Lazy reviewer you've got, I know. I just have to say in my behalf, that I'm not lazy, just over-worked. Too much work this week... damn.

About this chapter, OMG! it's just soo full of action! Everybody's with everybody. Tun tun tun. "He'd recognize that voice any where"... Hmm. Makes me think they had a thing and HE's not over it yet. Not completely.

And Harry. Always so slow on the uptakes. Is he in love with Hermione? And more importantly at this stage: who is Hermione in love with? PLEASE don't tell me it's Viktor Krum!!! Who is also in love with Fleur Delacour, who happens to have feelings for both Harry and Bill....... You could make me go mad. If I'm not so already.

Very enjoyable read, my darling. Very enjoyable indeed.

I had already told you I love the relation between Harry and Ron. Such good friends. Lovely.

See you soon, ahora tengo que irme a trabajar.

Besos,
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From ANON - Alison on April 17, 2005
(CHAP 29)

Right. So maybe it was more like 24-hours. Close enough. Anyways, I'm here to review now!! And, like I said last time, it's going to have to be short. Groan, I know. Time to go watch Star Wars with my brother who I'm babysitting. He won't shut up, so I figure I better let him watch it. And TV is the kind of thing that you can't be in the same room with without watching it. INVOLUNTARILY, in this case. I like Star Wars well enough (at least the first trilogy...the newest two are possibly the worst movies I've ever seen), but I'd much rather be rambling to you. Sigh.

Okay. Review. Right. WELL, MISSY, YOU HAVE SOME EXPLAINING TO DO. What was that about a love triangle? Hah, not likely. Closer to a love octagon, plus some for all the double attractions. Sexy Draco looks like he has really been around. And it doesn't look like it's about to stop, what with Ginny back in the picture. Everyone, except for maybe Ron, looks like they're going to have to battle dual emotions for two different people. Hm. I better hear more about this Draco/Ginny thing!!! I'm sure I will, too. I've never been much of a fan for Ginny and Draco...Ginny's so independent it would WORK. I suppose that's why I like Hermione/Draco romances so well...they really have to change in order for any relationship to be established. Their romances are all about breaking boundaries. That's why I'm glad that you promised earlier that Laurel and Draco would end up together...I might have strangled you otherwise. But then, you didn't say WHEN they were going to be together. Ah...I feel as if there's a long way to go before then, though Laurel has little doubt in HER mind for who she wants to be with - same as Ginny, by the looks of it. Territorial girls. That's where you can SEE the hormones kick in. I guess the love triangle will really be established by either Draco or Harry: Harry goes after Laurel, Laurel obliges him, Ginny catches - bitch for revenge on the loose. Through Draco, probably. OR: Draco has some unresolved feelings for Ginny, he has a couple of run-ins, ANOTHER bitch for revenge wreaking havoc. AND WE HAVEN'T EVEN GOTTEN TO HOGWARTS YET! I'll be very interested to see how Mrs. You-Know-Who (the one you mentioned who you feel is smarter and more sentimental than most portray her to be) will come into play in all this.

Now, a question: Why does Laurel insist on hiding what she knows? She won't tell them about the Order, even though they're talking about it in a familiar sense, it doesn't seem likely that they're dangerous to her family's relation to the Order. Laurel is such a teenager, but she does have a bizarre sense of caution. Odd. It'll be interesting to see how this bit of cover-up will either result in disaster or a spectacular rescue. Maybe both. Oh wait, just reread it, and noticed that it was because she wasn't supposed to know. I guess it just struck me in a different way. Last thing to say before I leave you (with unshed tears shining in my eyes!): I loved the tension between Ron and Harry. You're right...they've never been afraid to get in each other's faces (though Hermione has). Yet it was funny to see how the anger wasn't at each other, but at their parents...so young to mistake it and direct at each other. Mark of youth, my friend. Actually, make it mark of the human. We've never been clear-sighted, even as the observer.

Love you, my dear. Hope to hear from you soon. In the meantime, I'll be hard at work at my next chapter...laziness has infected me. What can I say?? It's spring!

~Me.
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From ANON - Ali aka ginny-rules-the-world on April 17, 2005
it says i have to ragister and im too lazy to do that lol. i've been great actually. its soooooo nic out today! ah! i'm gonna play some b-ball with some of my friends later. but now i'm gonna go take a walk with my bf. hugs! KEEP WRITING!

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From on April 17, 2005
*Dancing* Only 7 to go! Wooo Hooo! Hehe -

Ah, Draco. . . how could you NOT love this Draco?! He's soo sexy, dangerous, possesive, protective, sweet - everything you could ask for . . .

I really like this chapter, too! (29) I love the chemistry in the kitchen scene . .
I can't wait for more! I'm getting REALLY excited about the new chapters coming up.

Anywho, I just can't tell you enough how much I LOVE your writing! ROCK on, girl! (lol)
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From ANON - Jenn on April 16, 2005
Well well well, GINNY makes the scene. She is definetly one of my FAVORITE characters when written RIGHT. And thank god you have it down to the T.

I remember the last time I read this I started to think how much I liked Ron too. In the next chapter too I think there's that little part about him and Hermoine and I just LOVE IT! Sometimes (well, most of the time) I read Ron in FF and he sounds too wimpy, desperate, loser-ish, etc. Thank god you have him written so well too.

Haha, Mr. Raven-hair can't make up his mind! Can't you just imagine the thoughts in his head......

~Its a warm day down by the lake and the students take time for a little dip... before you know it Hermoine, Ginny, and Laurel are splashing around in the water and Harry is the only boy there.... and OOPPS did those bikinis just disppear?? Now who's the lucky one eh?~

Ok, so I get carried away, lol. YOU KNOW YOU LOVE IT!!!

Don't you just love how those two boys (Harry and Ron) can just look at eachother and know what the other is thinking? I've always thought they'd be like that, incrediblely connected. I like how Ginny catches it too. I really can't wait until Hermoine gets here b/c I love her intellect and I can't wait to see how you write her!

So thats it for now... YEAH only a few more left and your going to get a MASSIVE HUGE AMAZINGLY COOL REVIEW

*Hugs*

~Jenn
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From ANON - Alison on April 16, 2005
Okay. I'm just going to drop a line really fast...I've got to go watch a movie with the family. GAHH!! DO I HAVE NO PEACE!! But know that I've read the chapter and I'll be back tomorrow to do the actual review. Forgive me!! I'll ramble all you want on the love hexagons in a bit.

~Me.
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