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Reviews for The Three Keys

By : lorettcopeland

From ANON - Annie on April 06, 2005
Awwww Poor you Lorreta!! *hugs*

I don't believe that AFF might be closing down! And you've had enough of peopl messing about with your fan fics to last you a lifetime I'm sure! Well I will do everything I can for you hunny! I will donate money to this site first and foremost. Don't worry though, I'll follow you wherever you may go! I love you and your stories too much to just not read them because they've been moved somewhere different. Let me take this opportunity to offer up my FF account if everything else doesn't work out. You could e-mail me your stuff and I could host it on my account but don't worry, you have a lot of faithful readers that I'm sure will think of something to sort out this situation. Let me know if you need any help or a chat or anything. You can e-mail me anytime!!!

Anyway, onto the review! I'm loving the sexual tension between Laurel and Draco!!! And Draco is just oh so cocky!!! Hee hee! Just how I imagine him to be! Even when he's quite seriously injured he's still thinking about the laydees! And poor Laurel with her situation with Harry. I agree with her that she needs to talk to him and get it out of the way. (Not that I'd do that! I'm too much of a coward when it comes to guys!!!) But I can see that he's not going to be best pleased when Laurel tells him her feelings for Draco! And I'm sure the whole sordid(sp?) affair will come out later on when Harry is mad at Draco or something! Ooohhhh... it's all set for tension and action! And I can't wait! I can relate to Laurel aswel for going through everything that has happened with the guys in her head. I do that all the time thinking 'I wish I would have done this' or 'I really wish I hadn't done that'. I think it's just a girls way! I'm sure every girl does it!!!

As for the community, I've posted a couple of messages and I think I've done it right! At least I hope I have! Let me know if I've done something wrong!!! Hee hee!

Update soon and don't forget, if you need me you can call on me anytime!

Lots of Love & Huggles

AnnieXxX
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From ANON - ginny-rules-the-world on April 06, 2005
i don't think i'm going to update my story until my birthday... June 3rd. NO ONE ASIDE FROM YOU IS REVIEWING/READING MY STORY!!!!!! that makes me sad :((((((((. *sigh* KEEP WRITING!

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SMILE! this IS the happy hour!
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From ANON - Smile! on April 06, 2005
You could always use death-curse.com
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From ANON - Jenn on April 06, 2005
Ahh, once again another chapter that I LOVE. Oddly enough this chapter is so simple in context but helps to bind the underlying feelings and emotions that exist. I forgot that you had Laurel remember about the gold light from Harry's, Draco's and her wand.

I really enjoy the adjectives you use. Sometimes I don't really notice it b/c of all the fast-action your dishing out, but in this chapter i really noticed it when Draco was being analysed by Laurel. Especially the whole "explosion of of white blond...." Like HONESTLY, who thinks to use those words??!!! And thats exactly why I love reading your stories, its a fresh look on things.

I really hope that AFF doesn't close down just b/c you've been through enough! Honestly, why can't a site just stay around for once. Its a good thing that you have the backup (which I *ahum* must start posting at.....) But of course I would follow you back to FF if need be. I need to know what happens to the happy couple! GOD FORBID if you ever stopped writing, I think I would become a zombie without the smart, cool intelect of my DEAR LORETT!!!

Hmm, I've had a whole day of good news!! I moved back home recently and its been a struggle to find a good job *note to self, never work in fast food AGAIN* But I had a wicked interview today, got my tax return, AND you posted another chapter of KEYS. I think this may be my lucky day. How are things down in sunny cal right now??? The west coast of good ol' British Columbia is sad and wet. I'm really sick of the rain... if I want water I'LL HAVE A SHOWER!!!! lol, just some issues I have there.

*Still dreaming about lying in bed next to Draco*..... but aren't we all??

Oh! I read some of your links to some stories off of AFF, TOTALLY in love with the one where Hermoine learns to masterbate, lol, I was blushing the whole time. I was raised Christian, so I think reading stories like this is my rebelious self, even though I only go to church like twice a year.... lol, bad me. But don't we all need a little smut once and awhile????? I must know how you come up with these amazing, sexy, tension-like scenes???!!! All I can say is KEEP IT COMING!!!

So my dear, I think this is enough of a review for now before I tell you my life story, lol. Hope to here from you soon!

MUAH!!!!!! hugs ~Jenn
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From ANON - Monkmess on April 06, 2005
Ahhh, the plot thickens. I can't help feeling sorry for Harry though, he's kinda getting the raw end of the deal, but I know I'd have a hard time choosing between the two of them, whew!! You have me on the edge of my seat waiting to figure out where the heck this is all going, so keep these chapters coming. Hopefully we won't have to worry about the site going down, but if it does, I'll follow. I now have a vested interest in what happens to these characters. :)
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From ANON - Alison on April 06, 2005
Ello ello!

My God. They CANNOT shut the site down. I won't let them. I will beat them until they reopen it. And until that time of beating comes, I will keep my hopes up that I won't have to exercise my brute strength, and that I can keep my superpowers hidden. RAWRRRRRRRR! Me Alison! Me Big Mad!!! Okay, that said and done, how's it going with you, my dear? Ah, unfortunately I'm sick again......went home from school early yesterday and stayed home today. I'm looking forward to that Starbucks coffee my mom went to go get and a good, light-hearted movie that doesn't require any concentration. Unfortunately, that means that my head is pounding, so I may not be able to say as much as I want to.

Hm. God, Draco is so sexy. WHY CAN'T HE BE NEXT TO MY ROOM?? Poor *ahem* little fella. Hurt and broken and gorgeous and needing some EXTREME comforting....well, honey, I'm ALWAYS available for you. Let Laurel go have Harry. Who needs her when there's an even sexier girl panting after your BEEEEA-UTIFUL body? Sigh...yeah, I suppose you're right. The story wouldn't be quite the same if I became your sex slave, and Laurel fell for Harry.

Whew. Okay, calming down now...hem hem. Well, one thing that you mentioned that I hadn't noticed was the fact that Ron's wand DIDN'T unite with theirs. I probably knew that at one point, but it didn't stick, that's for sure. Guess that's a big flashing arrow that says "Three Keys: Laurel, Harry, Draco!!" Heh, I mean, I knew it was the three of them, but this just makes it a wee bit more obvious. (Changing subjects here...but I really want a garter. I do, I do. Like, I have suspenders, but I NEED A GARTER. Oh, and that wand in it.....where will that lead us? I can't believe I forgot about that. I remember making a point of remembering it, too.)

Okay, I think I'm hallucinating apostrophes. I'm going to take my tissues, my aspirin, my coffee, and my Draco to the couch where I can have as much fun with them as I want. Ick....I'm feeling so horrible. I wasn't THIS bad before. Wow, enough complaining. This chapter was pure fun, my dear, and put many ... er ... naughty thoughts in my brain. Maybe the only thing that's keeping it from melting, though the thoughts ARE making me sweat....or is that the fever? GAHHHH! DIE, SICKNESS! WE DON'T LIKE YOU! ....urgle. Wait, I was supposed to leave AGES ago, so I wouldn't plague you with these rather odd thoughts.

Talk to you soon, dearie. (Oh, and I'm glad to hear that you'll review soon!!!!! I was looking forward to you and Mrs-Accio-Firebolt's comments....the cha[ter finally has some ACTION! Not like yours, but a little.) Right. So like I said, I'll hear from you/talk to you soon. Big bear hug to your brilliant story and brilliant self!!!!

~Me.
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From ANON - Silverdragon on April 06, 2005
Lorett Darling!

How you feeling? I have a couple of suggestions for ites if you need to move your stories. The sites themselves are good sites and well maintained, forgive me if you know about them already but here goes.

http://pureblood.sycophanthex.com/ this is a site dedicated to only the Malfoys
http://lumos.sycophanthex.com/ this is a site for general Harry Potter stories

there are some other sites within the family of sycophanthex which deals with Severus Snape, Remus Lupin and a few others. Hope these come in handy if you do need to move, dont worry if you do though, i'll move with you.

Anyway yes I am a brit, and of course I will look over your lingustic skills, but your doing ok at the moment. However if you feel like you need to know anything in particular then just drop me an email and i'll happily do what I can for you.
I did lOVE california, but being a brit I HAD to do the while tourist thing, and do Disney, Universal and everything else that you do on Vacation ( see im learning, vacations are called holidays in the UK) We stayed in Anaheim for 3 weeks. However i can't come back this year owing to he fact I spent
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From ANON - princessgreta on April 06, 2005
This chapter made me smile loads! Laurel is so damn horny! Hah! I think she scared herself slightly, cos she has such a mahoosive weakness for the gorgeous Draco (and who wouldn't I hear you ask).

And I have indignant for you and the whole fanfiction and adultfanfiction not really working out thing. Damn ff.net really don't deserve such an amazing story as this if they're gonna keep chucking you out! I didn't know that AFF.NET might be closing until you said something and it's a real shame :( HUGS AND KISSES

At least you know that all of us adore your story and will follow it around the whole internet (tee hee hee), from domain to domain etc etc etc

xx princessgreta xx
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From on April 05, 2005
Loved the cookie, and I put my star on my refridgerater. Draco must really have a good soul, if Laurel is yelling at her mother over a Malfoy. I couldn't help but think if there was a past between Maggie and Lucius. There was something in the way Maggie questioned her daughter. I know Maggie know that Lucius is a Death Eater, now. But were they friends in the past ? Can't wait to read more of this fantasicly written story, keep up the great work.
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From ANON - Erin on April 04, 2005
ahhh ok im sry im back now...birthday weekend you know how it is...so anyway back to the story:
ahhh the bathroom scene...how wonderful...i love how she had no control...but since i know the rest of the story im just not going to say much else but i love draco more so i cant be a fan of harry...at least not where laurel is concerned...
and i love the spells you make up!!! very creative god knows i couldnt do it!!!
haha well i hope you missed be ill be sure to review asap from now on!!!
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From on April 04, 2005
Good transitional chapter - nice "cool down" from the previous couple *grin*! But I do love it (as always!) and I'm waiting patiently for the next one.

YAY!! Draco baby's coming soon!!! Lol, I do love Draco. . .something about the bad boy thing, I think - and he's just plain GORGEOUS!

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From ANON - Ally on April 04, 2005
Hello my darling,

I apologize in advance for the briefness of this review but well as you know I am not up to par this day. But I refuse to let things get me down so much that I block out others. So I have read your wonderful chapter and once again have been left waiting eagerly until the next installment! I do so enjoy Laurel's mother. I do not think I have ever mentioned her. Her maturity and subtle observations of the children are written so well. I am so looking forward to the Bonding chapter. I know we have a wee bit to go until we reach that, but none the less I thought to mention it here. Well my dear, I am away the now. I just wanted to hand in my two cents and show my support for your wonderful story. Take care darling.

Love, Ally
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From ANON - Annie on April 03, 2005
Hiya Loretta!

Glad to hear that you're feeling better and that the damn annoying cough is dying down slightly! I suppose I am a bit of a night owl! But this is only a recent occurance(SP?). I never used to have trouble sleeping but it's been since I went to university and have had space and time to do whatever I want when I want. I think the rebel in me wanted to stay up as long as I could at first but now it seems it's turned into a habbit! Oh Well!! It's not stressing me out too bad! Bless your cat for being so cute. I have a cat too and he likes to annoy me when I'm busy. But all is forgiven when he curls up on my bed next to me to keep me company and he looks just too cute for his own good! Hee hee!!!

Anyway, onto the review (I told you I had a tendency to babble right?! Hee hee!). I'm loving the new tension between Harry and Laurel! That's going to cause all kinds of trouble I sense!!! And nice touch with the mother-always-knows-what-her-daughters-thinking-when-it-comes-to-boys thing! It's so true!!! My mum is like a mind reader in that respect. She always knows... Hee hee! Draco saying Laurels name when he woke up made me melt a little. He's so cute and is obviously thinking of her while he sleeps and recouperates! Bless him! And Laurel sticking up for Draco like a trouper! That was so sweet!!! I love budding romances! But I bet Harry felt like Crap hearing her say those things about Draco because *puts on sing-songy voice* He loves her!!! Hee hee!!!

Sorry I haven't been onto the community for a while. It's pretty new to me and I'm still trying to figure out how it all works. I want to reply to some of the messages on there but I always feel like I'm doing it wrong and I don't want to mess up anything on there since you've worked so hard to get it up and running! (I'm such a worrier!) But I promise I will have another try really soon and see what I can come up with!!!

Anyway, update soon!

Love ya,

AnnieXxX

P.S - Think you are sooooo nice for doing personal shout outs! You are so dedicated and I think it's great!!!
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From ANON - RahNee on April 03, 2005
There were so many things in Chapter 26 that I loved. I'll start at the beginning and work my way down...

First was Harry's little negative conversation with himself: he's upset, perhaps even distraught, and manages to come up with a metaphor like "You kissed her like a man drowning and she was your last breath of air." Read a lot of romance novels, do we, Harry? Hee hee!

Second: "general boy carousing" Hilarious!

Third: Maggie says "Aurthur also informed me that you and Red seem to get into quite a bit of trouble more often than not..." Oh, you do not know the half of it, my dear Maggie (and Arthur)! And Maggie catching the uncomfortable vibe between Harry & Laurel and sighing "Teenagers!"

Fourth: Actually this is my favorite, so it should be first I guess: Ron's drama queen moment. He mentions his parents killing him twice, that they are grounded for life, and then the line "We're both going to die old, lonely and never having shagged a girl!" And the Oscar goes to...

Fifth: My next favorite is the interaction with Ron & Harry right after the drama queen speech. It really reflects how close those two boys are. Harry doesn't want to go into the details of what Ron interrupted, and Ron recognizes the code language of "I'll tell you later." Ron senses enough to know to apologize, and Harry says "Nothing to be sorry for" and it is SUCH A GOOD FRIENDSHIP MOMENT! I could sense the bond and the filial love between the two. So so nice.

Sixth: Then the scene that the chappie is named for! I thought the whole vindication of Draco section was great! Laurel almost spilled the beans about this soul-reading trick she can do. It finallly dawns on Harry how much Draco risked, and that if Harry had listened at the get go, things would have been different. And the GUILT. Can we please heap some more guilt onto that boy? I don't think he feels enough yet. When his voice finally cracks with emotion...my heart broke for him. That poor poor boy is seriously going to need therapy for a few decades.

Seventh: (dang, this list is long) The "great power/ great responsibility" line! I read it and thought "whoa, that is freaky, 'cause I know she wrote this chappie long before I wrote my review of Chapter 25" I will now concentrate on predicting the Powerball numbers...

Eighth: I felt a little shiver go up my spine when Maggie put Draco in the room next to Laurel because I seem to recall a certain dream that involved that room...

Conclusion: When there aren't lemons in the chapter my mind is less befuddled with inappropriate thoughts and I write longer and more detailed reviews.

Careful, Lorett! I haven't moshed in quite a while, and if you bodyslam me too hard, I might spill this fabulous champagne you gave me! Let me put the flute down...OK, *bodyslams you back and squeezes you tight* Thanks! And by the way, I'm sorry I made you laugh so hard you coughed. Poor thing! I'm so sorry that the batch of soup and tea I sent by special Dangerously Handsome Trio Courier did not cure you completely. I'm going to make it up to you by sending you some special cough medicine via Speedy Slytherin Delivery...keep an eye out for a blond delivery guy, about 6'2" with a sexy smirk. You'll feel much better soon... (Oh dear, Speedy Slytherin Delivery. I think I just combined Draco with Mr. Roger's Neighborhood! So very fundamentally wrong on so many levels...)

After all the teasers about the next chapter, I am at my computer watching my email and twitching in anticipation! Post soon, soon I tell you! Right...supposed to be working on that patience thing... OK then, I'll just hug you and kiss you and say "Thanks for the wonderful chapter and brightening my Saturday evening! Love ya, dearie!"
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From ANON - Ali aka ginny-rules-the-world on April 02, 2005
DUDE! THATS SWEET! hahaha awsomeness. niceness. hahaha. thats fun. sooooo nice chapter. again. BWAH! that was the bwah of love. HAHAHAHA! ok this is short but i got 2 do stuff! WAA! i dont wanna do stuff! ok well KEEP WRITING!

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