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Reviews for The Three Keys

By : lorettcopeland

From ANON - Annie on March 30, 2005
Hiya Lorett!

I hate those kinds of crazy, non-ending, harsh coughs that you're talking about! They're so irritating and annoying! Poor you! I hope it stops soon and that you'll be all better a.s.a.p! Because being ill is no fun! I'm feeling better that I was last week. I've been having trouble sleeping because I'm stressing out about too many things (lack of money, lack of men, too much work etc etc) so I think that might be why! But it just made me feel so... eugh (not really a very discriptive word but I think you'll understand what I mean) that it got me down. But I'm feeling better and less hormonal. Thanks for your concern and your cheer up hugs! *hugs Lorrett back*

Anyway onto my review... Well what can I say... I think WOW just about covers it! So much emotion in there that I was finding it hard to breathe whist reading it! Hee hee! That's me getting caught up in everything as per usual! I can see Harry as this vibrant, full of energy kind of guy. He's just been through so much for a person so young that he has to have all this energy pouring out of him. I'd find it very attractive. As for Laurel, I'm not mad at her. I don't really blame her! A good looking guy with so much to give like Harry... Well lets just say I wouldn't say no!!! Hee hee! But I can see how this will complicate things with the whole Draco/Laurel thing. But it's a very clever twist and totally understandable! I could imagine needing to get rid of some emotions after going through an ordeal like they did and what a way to do that!!!! Can't wait to see your take on the heat between Draco and Laurel! I agree with how you think he is and *sigh* I can't wait to read it all!!! I was right there in the gutter with you hunny!!!

I've read the new chapter of YOU but I haven't had chance to review (ooohhh I'm a poet and I didn't know it!) but I promise I will soon! I love the fluffy sweetness of it all but I'll save that for my review!

Anyway, must dash (how british of me!) because its 4.13am and I should really be in bed! Update soon but make sure you concentrate on getting better first!

Lots of huggles and smooches
Annie!
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From ANON - Blondhunter on March 30, 2005
One of my favorite chapters. Soo good. Takes me back to my teen years. I can remember those hot and heavy make out sessions that almost led to more than it really should of. Wow, what great memories, wait a moment, got to take a minute............................................... Okay, I collected myself. I am so excited because the story is fast approaching one of the other favorite chapters I have for this story. Even if it is close to Shhhh(slash), but not really. Man is that chapter really, really, hot, did I mention, hot! Well glad to see you found a place to post that will let you have free reign over your story. I will be checking in. Love your work.
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From ANON - mrs_accio_firebolt on March 30, 2005
DAMN YOU, DAMN YOU, DAMN YOU!!!!! Have I not told you enough times that I read your stories at the OFFICE??? What do you think that watery-eyes, flushed-cheeks, hands-covering-mouth, drool-slipping-through-fingers and fast breathing do to my reputation?? We've got GLASS WALLS here, for crying out loud!!!!!!

Jiji. Anyways. What can I say?? GREAT chapter. I am in love with Harry (have been for a while, but even more now). He is just so marvelous. So sexy. I can't stand his goodness. Such a fine man. I'd love to be Laurel, able to look into his soul and able to let herself go like that with him, no questions asked. Built forearms... one of my preferred treats. And when he pulls her hand into his pants...........................................................................OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!! Just sooo fabulous!!!!! I just love that kind of man. So sweet and tender and strong and pro-active. Yummie! You've just got to give him beautiful, long, thin hands and I'll be lost forever in his image.

You say he's getting his fun too, even if it's not with Laurel....mmh....and I was kind of wondering.... could it be .... possible... that he had ...hmm... all this fun you say he's going to have..... with.....mmmh....MEEEEEE??????? PLEASE?????

I guess not. Damn.

You wrote a very, very nice chapter. It had a wonderful rythm. You skipped no description, but everything was described so fast, that my heartbeat really went berserk. I could picture everything in my mind and believe me, it got out of hand as well.

I also have to say that though most people might find that interruption annoying, I loved it. I mean, who has never been interrupted when in such a situation? We all have been, I'm sure. So, it's easy to relate to it. And to the crave, urge (arrghh!!! I'm not good at words!!!) that follows. The tension it leaves. Oh, god! I must get myself a cool, gigantic glass of water. Hope it helps....
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From ANON - Silverdragon on March 30, 2005
Hi Lorett,

Thousands of hugs for the lovely shoutout!, and yes i'd love to be added to your chapter update thingy! (email address above) The wrist is healing nicely thank you, couldnt get my hands on a bottle of skelegro anywhere, not for the lack of Owls to Madam Pomfrey. Anyway glad you are feeling a tad better, stay safe and well, and a big red headed hug back to you ( im a red head too! )

Silverdragon

p.s Did i mention im going to London this weekend and I'm taking you with me! (storywise not personally im afraid) may look for the platform 9 3/4 whilst im there LOL
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From on March 30, 2005
laurel not nervous because he's famous (harry ) is she.? she practicly knows nothing of draco except his eyes, and the little she's heard of the last name. getting ready to read next chapter, keep up the great story.
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From ANON - Ally on March 30, 2005
DARLING!! Running up to you and bodyslamming you in all my excitement and newly recovered strength!!!! AHHHHHHHH, god how I love this chapter. Odd, I know right, considering my love, obsession, borderline stalker fasination with our dear Draco, but you know what, you write
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From ANON - princessgreta on March 30, 2005
ooooo, i do adore harry! poor him *gives harry a huge hug* he's so cutie innocent!! just so long as he does get with someone then that is ok, i couldn't bear it if draco got laurel (as much as she can be 'got' anyway cos she's not exactly likely to be owned by any guy, even the gorgeous draco) and harry was left all on his lonesome even though his eyes are gorgeous and his soul is pure!!! sorry, i get a bit carried away....
well seeing as i'm reading through each chapter for the first time, i am going to have to tell you how much this story makes me happy!! every time the chapter ends i think something along the lines of NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. which isn't a great feeling i can tell you.
every single character is so perfect, so well mapped out and described but in such a subtle way. i can't stand it when people just describe each character in one go but you gradually feed the information throughout the chapters. perfect. and all those little details. like in the latest chapter where ron interupts harry and laurel. i could just imagine his ears going bright red and then stomping away!! (bless him)
so there you have it, all my love for your amazing fanfiction in a couple of paragraphs! i really hope that you feel better soon so hugs from me (it isn't contagious is it?!) lol, just kidding (but seriously??)
tee hee hee

xx princessgreta xx

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From ANON - The Dedicatee on March 30, 2005
Woohoo! Dedicated to me! I am SO tired and will come back to review more fully later, but let me just say:

"Set and ferocious"

is a really hot way to describe Draco's eyes.
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From ANON - mrs_accio_firebolt on March 29, 2005
Oh my god! Stop playing with my brain, will you?

Harry, Draco or Ron? I can't make up my mind at this moment.

"She wondered what Draco had that Harry didn't...." Don't we all?

As of today, most of the fics I had read had portrayed a soft Harry. But yours is just sooo yummie! WHY is Laurel nervous to be alone with Green Eyes?????? I know I would. But then again, I know of some other things I would do too. Jejeje.

I loved this chapter for its speed. It was exciting to read! Though I had already told you that I wouldn't tolerate any love triangles... and this certainly looks like one. PLEASE! Update soon. PLEASE! Update soon.

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From ANON - Monkmess on March 29, 2005
Great story. This is the first ever I've read with an OC, I usually can't stand those. But this is terrific. You write very well and seemed to have developed quite an involved story. Can't wait to read more, so keep 'em coming.
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From ANON - Tiar on March 28, 2005
so sorry i havent reviewed earlier!!!!! but i love i so much! get better soon!

.tiar.
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From ANON - Alison on March 28, 2005
Damn. I wrote this whole thing once and then erased it by accident. I'll try to do the best I can to remember it all, though, so here goes (God, I hate this computer):

Well, my dear, you're not the only one who feels like crap; I've just been hit by some bug or another. AND THEN, I had tons and tons and tons and tons of homework. What a miserable Spring Break so far. (Well, fine, only today was boring. Yesterday was fun. My family visited a ghost town, perhaps one of the most chilling experiences I have ever had. Destroyed buildings, broken pottery, rusted nails, and rotting windows....when you try to imagine the lives of people in those overgrown houses, it's spooky. I don't know what forced them to flee from it, only taht the chaos is almost complete.) Anywho, HAPPY EASTER!! BELATED!! I hope the Easter bunny brought lots of candy and roses. I would be your honorary Easter bunny if I could, but unfortunately I'm in New Mexico and have no idea where you live, let alone where the post office is. But you deserve 'em anyways for being such a fabulous author and having such a long post. I'll try to do my best to make my review just as long, but I have limited computer time here...sigh.

Okay. Onto observations: I thought the moment when Laurel cradles hurt Draco in her arms to be simply beautiful. When I first read it, I couldn't quite understand why she was so torn up about the possibility of Draco's death - she had just met him that night - but the anguish was real. And then, when she had the conversation with her mother (about the vision and her feelings for the boy), it all came rushing back. I reread that moment, and thought it was written just perfectly.

I also thought the line about Harry always getting blamed first, even when he hadn't done anything, to be hilariously ironic. I sat and stared at that and laughed just because it was so true. I always thought similarly; for awhile, I found JKR's tendency to put him in the wrong place at the wrong time to get tedius, especially since our beloved Harry is so thick-headed and emotional. He needs to learn how to control the PMS. Another section I thought very interesting was the brief conversation between Ron (Red, I love it!) and Harry. Harry vows to take revenge on Draco's murderer (that is, murderer if Draco died), exposing the power of the bond between them, though they were enemies for so long. They still are, of a sort, with Laurel in the picture, but the respect is just breath-taking. I don't know whether Harry sort of feels as if the injury is his fault, since he wasn't paying attention and the curse was meant for him or whether it really was out of respect, but all the same, I found the oath to be wonderful. And Ron's reaction brought the point home:
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From ANON - Silverdragon on March 27, 2005
Hope you feel better quickly, what would i do without this story!
Actually i'm off work suffering with a bust wrist! So i sympathise with you feeling a bit naff.
Wonder if i can have some Skele gro???? Will have to Owl Madam Pomfrey

Silverdragon
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From on March 27, 2005
I just can't tell you enough how much I LOVE this story!! lol, I really like this chapter (24) and I can't wait for the next one! (*Remembering the "Bathroom Scene" haha..*) I'm REALLY looking forwaard to that one, lol! *just not as much as I'm looking forward to some nice Draco/Laurel action, hehe*

Get lots of rest, and I hope you feel better soon!!

:-)
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From ANON - RahNee on March 26, 2005
Wait, was this Chapter 24 or 25? I am so confused!
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