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By : lorettcopeland
  • From alialdeet on March 21, 2005
    Oh my. The pitiful Draco chapter. Shivering naked. How could I forget? This is the naked you're referring to in the summary, right?
    Gosh. He REALLY needs to get out of the house. Seeing him in this position...I dunno. It's just not turning me on all that much. I can't wait to see him later, at school. See what he's like when he's really in his element (and it IS sad that he's not in his element in his own home).
    And I wonder what he's gonna be like when he learns to let someone in. Get the love that he didn't get in childhood. I mean, he SAYS he's not going to let anyone in for fear of getting them hurt, but we know what's gonna happen.
    I'm getting more into this story than I was before.
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  • From alialdeet on March 21, 2005
    You know, this chapter 12, it's pretty damn good! I like the interaction between Narcissa and Draco. She's gonna die though, isn't she? I get that feeling very strongly.
    Anyway...I like very much that Draco loves his mom. And I thought his reaction to Wormtail was kinda funny. That repulsion, you know. Someone as strong-willed and not-self-involved-exactly but more self-appreciating would have that reaction.
    Haha...poor Lucius. Everybody's being snotty to him. Even Wormtail.
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  • From ANON - Ally on March 21, 2005
    Okay my darling...now we are getting to the good stuff! The club scene to end all club scenes. I love the overprotectivness of Draco here and the way he and Harry just seem to work together so perfectly. From all your hints and future chapters, I have gathered that Laurel, Draco and Harry are the three keys..obvious I know, but the whole soul thing is really intriguing. I am thinking they share a soul or a similar soul and well with the bonding that Harry and Draco will be doing in the future, you know that crazy scene where they link and well almost I dunno...kiss! Well needless to say each chapter makes me remember something from the others and makes me really want the next update!!! I want that bathroom scene!!!!!! You know it is my favourite. Oh poor Draco!!!! Sexy Lucius strikes again.

    Hmmm Oh I remember. I started reading Deconstrust, A Memoir and well, hmm I am still reading it if that is an indication. It is written well and in a very different style, and though her charcters seem way to old for 14, the story really is starting to intrigue me. Needless to say i would go for your Draco or Narcissa and Lucius any day!!!

    Well, I could ramble on all day here my darling, but I think I did plenty of that in the one million e-mails I sent you!!!! Crazy, I know. Will chat with you later.

    Love, Ally
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  • From alialdeet on March 21, 2005
    Wow. There was a moment-that moment when Draco was afraid their might be someone in the room under an invisibility cloak. That was a really creepy moment. I wish it had been longer because it was good.
    Anyway-ya, arguing Draco and Lucius, for some reason, isn't really my thing. I guess it's because (at least in your story) Draco so obviously outmatches his father in everything but age...and a lack of scruples. Draco needs a few less feelings to really whip Lucius' butt. Okay, I change my mind. It's OKAY to see them argue but I can't wait for Draco to put Lucius in his place once and for all.
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  • From alialdeet on March 21, 2005
    I actually hadn't read this chapter. Laure's recovery. So it's new. Woohoo.
    You have this habit (and I'm not going to judge as to whether it's actually good or bad) of being amazingly blunt as to your characters' feelings. Let me paraphrase a few lines that stick out in my memory:
    "I hate the way you make me feel, Lucius." -Narcissa
    "Why doesn't anybody understand me?" -Laurel
    And then, there's all of that Draco stuff. The "I hate what my father's done to me and my mother" stuff.
    Do I do it too?
    Anyway-YES! We're off to England!
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  • From alialdeet on March 21, 2005
    God. So much fucking tension at home is not good for any child, especially not for a child who wants a lot of loving attention, like Draco.
    Quite forceful dream. I wonder if Draco and Laurel were meant to be together? I wonder if they're going to undergo some hardship?
    This Draco is so...I dunno...weird. But in a good way. It's just that what he DOES is so unusual. I mean his summer is just sitting around taking naps and thinking. I wish my summers were like that too. Of course, I wouldn't want to think about the same sort of thing. Maybe YOU would. Yes, you would. You'd like to sit around napping and thinking about Lucius.
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  • From alialdeet on March 21, 2005
    Um...yes, I'll go ahead and take the more toned down version of "smarmy bastard." The chapter was totally hot but the writing was not. Narcissa was almost hot...but her weakness is rather frustrating. I mean, for christ sakes, girl, is he really THAT great? Why don't you just go frig yourself?
    Hm...yes, anyway, I prefer a more thougtful, misunderstood type man for lemony goodness, but I'm sure that will come in time.
    This chapter was so intense. I remember how it sort of surprised me that first time. Didn't see it coming.
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  • From alialdeet on March 21, 2005
    I just thought it was so great the way you explained his smallness as being Lucius' fault. But then again, everything's Lucius' fault.
    It's so great, too-this whole chapter is just Draco in his room, thinking and being resentful. You know it makes me smile. I like it.
    Anyway, way to say, "dammit! Time to move on from canon Draco! If we blame all on Lucius, we can get on to sexy, perfect, controlled Draco!"
    And Here-I'm not making fun when I say this-parents do shape their kids. Almost completely. Draco's just lucky he had enough of a brain to resent his dad and become his own person.
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  • From alialdeet on March 21, 2005
    Jeez. I have no idea how you can stand to write about Voldemort for that long. My Voldemorts all die nearly as soon as you see them. Just can't stand them. Haha..that also means you have the patience to write more about Draco. Patience, who are we kidding.
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  • From alialdeet on March 21, 2005
    Hey! I have a Lovers Curse in my Snape story as well! It has some shitty effects too! Not as draining yours though. Actually, yes, just as draining, but a little slower and quieter. Anyway, get better, Laurel! It's time to go to Hogwarts and have sex with Draco! And Harry, right? I'm looking forward to your Harry. For some reason, I really like reading about Harry as a supporting character in fanfiction. He can be so good that way. I wonder if I'll like your Harry.
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  • From alialdeet on March 21, 2005
    Jeez...what a messy breakup. I've had a few like that myself. Well, not really, but sort of close.
    It was good to have this chapter so violent and extreme. It really helps readers get to know Laurel better, really know her. Know that she's clever under pressure, and will stoop to any level to survive.
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  • From alialdeet on March 21, 2005
    I looking forward to the meeting between Laurel and Harry, too, actually, if Harry is what attracted her to Don in the first place.
    Argh-REALLY? What is with these stupid Death Eater type people, always doing stupid, immoral things?
    Yes, but I'm looking forward to Laurel meeting Harry and Draco and...SNAPE actually, hahaha. Can you turn this into a Snape story? Pretty please? Can I see HIM naked instead?
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  • From alialdeet on March 21, 2005
    Isn't it funny how crushes almost never work out the way you want them to? I mean look at poor Laurel and the way things turned out with Don. I'm going to cruise through the next few chapters since I want to read at least part of this story that I haven't read before. Now that I'm coming back to it after so long, I'm sorta looking forward to the meeting between Laurel and Draco.
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  • From ANON - Dracosgal on March 21, 2005
    THIS IS ONE OF MY MOST FAVORITE CHAPTERS! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE DRACO IN THIS CHAPTER. HE'S SO DAMN SEXY WHEN HE'S ALL IN CONTROL AND BOSSY! GAWLLLLL!
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  • From ANON - Rorikins on March 20, 2005
    God, I'm so sorry it took me so long to get here! Am I on the email list?
    Anyway, YAY DRACO AND LAUREL (and DracoxHermione, too, just not at this particular moment) Can't wait til the new chapters are ready!

    Cya soon! Luv always, Rorikins
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