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Reviews for The Three Keys

By : lorettcopeland

From ANON - mrs_accio_firebolt on March 16, 2005
Oh yes!! This was soo enjoyable.
I think you already know that I check my mail at work. So, as I used to do with A Reason and some select others, I check my mail on arrival and if I see one of my dearest fictions has been updated, I just smile all day long, saving my lunch time for actually reading the updates.
I'm having lunch now. Jiji.
This chapter was so fluent, but regretably short. I don't think it would have worked so well had you made it longer, but it's regrettable all the same.
I almost fell off my chair when Draco is trying to remember if anybody has ever told him that he is a good man and concludes "nope, never". So cute. I could tell him whatever he wanted to hear, though. He
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From ANON - ali aka ginny-rules-the-world on March 16, 2005
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From on March 16, 2005
Lol, those little thingamabobs take lots of practice to get it right, lol....

The mental image of those three guys...MmmHmm....gets me sexcited...hehe..

Well, I absolutely LOVE this chapter too (22)!! The story starts really getting good right about now (not that it wasn't before, lol) but it starts getting more intense, I guess you could say. These last few chapters are definately some of my favorites!

I LOVE this story, and I can't wait for more!
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From on March 16, 2005
I LOVE this chapter (21)!! I don't have any specific favorite parts, t hough....I just love the whole thing, lol!

Ok, goin' to read the next one!

:-D
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From ANON - princessgreta on March 16, 2005
ahhhh! *sighs with happiness*
now that was a lovely lovely chapter! ooo i love ron and draco's disgust for one another, so very funny! poor little weasel.. :)
jeez laurel control yourself darling, you know i don't think it's fair she takes up two guys (specially when they're draco and harry). i really wanna know what she saw in his soul though cos it's completely different to draco's.
i can't get enough of T N T though, they're just so snobby but in a funny kinda way! tad can't be all that ugly either he just ain't got a chance!
sorry i can't leave a humungous review cos i gotta do some work now, but kisses and hugs anyway,

xx princessgreta xx
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From ANON - princessgreta on March 15, 2005
omg the chapter with ron and harry and draco in it was so damn hot! i could just imagine them standing by the bar, all sexy and smouldering without even realising it (except for Draco of course!) . Laurel is so damn lucky! But i love her because she's so strong! But the hottest has to be Draco, he's so uninterested in everything that it's truly sexy!
can't wait for the next chapter :)
xxprincessgretaxx
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From ANON - HarryLuvr2 on March 15, 2005
oh i forgot how much i like the meeting of draco from lauerl's view. she's just so totally into him that it takes my breath away right along with her. good job as always. oh yea, and don't you dare quit writing, i would have been so upset if you stopped your stories. i love ya mucho and i'm off to re-read your other one just for good measure too. kisses, luvr2!
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From ANON - HarryLuv2 on March 15, 2005
OMG! i'm finally here! don't think i forgot about you, i've been so damn crazy with work and life, but i would nvr, evr, abandon you and this amazing fict! i just caught up to my most fav part of the story so far. can't wait for draco and laurel to be together. ok, i'm off to the next chapter. miss you loads! luvr2
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From ANON - Dracosgal on March 15, 2005
Ahh the joy of young love. Laurel that lucky, lucky, lucky girl. Well, maybe NOT that lucky she's gone through a lot of crap, but still she gets Draco in the end so that more than makes up for her troubles. She WILL get Draco in the END RIGHT? Of course she will! So, I'll revert back to my previous statement; that lucky, lucky, lucky girl.

Well, yuo know the next upcoming chapters are my most favorite....especially the *ahem* bathroom scene. *blushing* just thinking about it. I forget how you made me - an avid Harry hater fall head over heels for him too, not to mention Blaise and I think I'm harboring a slight crush on Ron and Lucius. YOu just write all your men so damn well.

Well with that I'm out. I think you'll update tonight right? So I get to see more of Draco in all his glory.

love u - M
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From ANON - Annie on March 15, 2005
Hiya Loretta!

How are you hun? Good I hope! I'm glad that our reviews kept you writing because you definitely shouldn't stop just because of what stupid FF.net did!!! You're stories are too good to let them just slip away!!! I love them!

*sighs* Oh the fluffy meltyness of Draco!!! I love it so! I was looking forwards to reading the chapters of him meeting Laurel again because I always imagine myself to be Laurel! I would love it if someone, who is as sexy and smooth as Draco, came up to me in a nightclub! That would just be a dream come true!!!!

Sorry I can't leave you a long review like usual. I have to go and catch a bus home or I'll be waiting for another 30 minutes! I promise to make up for it I'll leave an extra long review the next time!!!

Huggles and smooches

Annie (Twinkle Toes!)
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From on March 15, 2005
I like the two perspectives...second time around, even better, lol! Yes, I completely agree with you about TNT...you name it, I wish I had it, lol. That Teeny, though...can be kind of a witch with a b if you ask me, haha. And I LOVE your writing!! I have yet to find anyone else that's good enough to spend time reviewing for EVERY chapter. Sure, I'll drop a note here and there, but you're still the only regular! You deserve it!

A rose for you, love! I'm looking forward to more!
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From on March 15, 2005
I LOVE this!! lol, ok, off to read chapter 20!
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From ANON - Wilby on March 14, 2005
whoo! im here! im here! hope you didnt forget about me! sorry for my absence, but it took me a while to get caught up with the re-reads. and for some reason my computer (that may as well be a rock with a hole in it) wouldnt load chapter 18 AT ALL!! it was driving me nuts! so now that you've uploaded 19 and 20, i decided to just skip it. sorry about all the ff.net crap; a lot of people have a prolem with that site, but theres really no where else to go. i mean theres always mediaminer, but that site is just sooooo confusing...i hate going there. the ff.net set up is just so nice. AFF, well, its not my favorite cuz its basically only dedicated to nc-17 stuff, but i support your decision just to stay here. at least you know you wont get booted.

hope things are going well for you! cheers!
-Wilby :)
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From ANON - Alison on March 14, 2005
Whew, darling. That was quite a response. I don't think that was a 1/4 page...it was closer to TEN PAGES. You could publish it and call it a novel and make millions. (Well...I"d buy it....) Now I'm going to have to do my best to make a really, really, really long review....but it's almost my bedtime, so I dunno how long it will actually be. Guess there's no way to know buy find out, huh? Yeah, Alison, that means get your ass in gear.

Hm. These last couple of chapters were so ... fluff-like. Well, not fluff-like. That's the wrong word. But lighter, more fun - the party right before everything goes wrong and the lightning flashes and all the little boy and girls are scared inside by the thunder. That kind of thing. Very foreshadowed (not that I can think of any examples. It just seemed sort of foreboding - in a really fun way). God, don't I wish that I could just show up in Spells looking absolutely gorgeous (I'm brunette, so at least I'm his type) in a beautiful black, hip-hugging dress and just yank my Draco away. And then he could just look sexily at me and kiss MY hand and send shivers up my spine.....ooh. Wow. I could feel 'em, right there.

I completely got the final note you put at the end of chappie 19 - the one about how Harry and Draco are teenagers and don't want to focus on impending doom. I mean, who would? They're at a bar with gorgeous women around them (including me...and you!!) and it seems like they have their whole life ahead of them. What's that word "tomorrow" mean anyways? It's like a song in RENT (musical....I ADORE IT....so amazingly awesome) says: "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other road, no other way, no day but today." Well, it sort of applies. Except for the regret part. Basically, what I'm TRYING to say, is that they're simply living. And you can't live by thinking constantly about tomorrow. It's too grim. It's something that I think Hermione has problems with - and I do, too, for that matter - just letting go and thinking of nothing but that single moment. Impulse is the weapon of the youth; adults often think too much about what they're GOING to do, what they need to do. What happened to acting in the moment? I'm a big fan of the stage - I do a little acting - and it was only recently brought home to me what a reliable tool instinct is. The choices you feel are right usually are; if they're not, then at least you would have acted on your own judgements and morals. It's entirely your mistake, without the overlay of peer pressure and others' values.

Wow, okay. Didn't mean to get psychological on you. (You should read my journals...they're full of that kind of thoughtful crap. Poetic, of course. Analogies and metaphors and all those glorious literary tools in the English language. It's what I love about writing...the freedom within structure. Structure being grammar.) Gee, I did it AGAIN! Must have been something in what I ate. Let's see...I simply loved the whole contest of wills and boldness between Laurel and Draco. I completely thought it was appropriate to have both views - I mean, from Laurel's actions in the first half as told by Draco, you get the gist (did I spell that right?) of what she wants, but it's nice to know that she recognizes him from her vision/nightmare. And, ironically, have already labeled him as HERS. I found that very amusing, actually. They both stake each other out, but one does it waayy more bluntly than the other (is that the American culture I see there? or simply the old-fashioned, gentlemanly way Draco was brought up?). Oh shoot, as promised, I DO have to go upstairs dearie, cutting me off mid-thought. I'll wrap up the last point really fast: I thought that you captured the connection between the two - fated or otherwise - perfectly. Definitely could feel the attraction, the desire, the simple CURIOSITY so completely. It was brilliant. And of course, I am most eager to see how this...er....tension develops in the next chappie. HURRY UP AND UPDATE ALREADY!! Or I'll have to take more than my fair share of Draco!!!! (Don't make me....)

~Alison

P.S. Oh, would ya mind adding me to the list for It Had to Be You?? I think I mentioned it before, but I don't mind reminding you a bit.
P.P.S. Er...I have this nagging feeling I wrote this second post-script for a reason. I just have to think of what it was..... OH YEAH! I would LOVE to have IM chats w/ you!!! You have AIM? My sn is Owl5327 (just like my email), but I must warn you that I'm rarely on. Well, if you count rarely as being on only two or three times a week. In any case, just leave your sn, and I will keep my eyes PEELED for you. Or vice versa. If all else fails, there's always email!!!! Discussion of hotties Harry and Draco, here we come!
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From ANON - Ali on March 14, 2005
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok ok ok breath in breath out breath iiii......... HAAHAHAHAHA ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok ok *breaths in hevily* i forgot what i was gonna say...... hmmmmmmmmmmm....... wait WAIT! i think its coming back to me.................................................................... nope i got nothin. haha whenever i talk about my bf or my best friend i pernonce it bif. hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hey whenever i type my h's it looks like a CAPITAL h HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ok ill stop now. omg im sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo disapointed in my friend tsk tsk tsk. once again she left me ALL of the work for the progect we're working on *pouts* she does this to me EVERY time! grrrrrrrr i told my bif aboutith itith haha i thoughtith itith wouldith beith coolith ifith iith putith ithsith afterith everyith wordith! arentith iith smartith?!?!?!?!?!?!? ok seriously. i am THE stupitest person EVER. omg yesterday i was like i am smart with a capital T even though theres no t in smarT. my friends like you're joking right? and i thought REALLY hard and then i realized that there WAS a t in smarT hahahahahahahahahaha! i felt so stupid. i was about to DIE of laufter. hey. thats a cool way to spell laughter. lafter. hahahahahahahahahahahaha! omg im laughing like myself aka a maniac again HAHAHAHAHAHAHA STOP LAUGHING HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NO!
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