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By : lorettcopeland

From on March 12, 2005
Droppin' a line for chapter 17! lol, Yes, I remember Tad and Teeny now...I also wish I had access to their plastic, lol....I'm so broke.

Haha, ok, I'm gone to the next chappie!
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From on March 12, 2005
Hello! Just dropping a quick note here! lol

I had forgot about this chapter, but it's good to read it again. I like how you called Draco "Harry's secret weapon" here

Ok, OFF to read chappie 17! *grin*
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From ANON - RahNee on March 11, 2005
Oh my dear Lorett! I absolutely, positively LOVED chapter 18!!! I thought the banter/arguing between Harry, Ron & Draco was "spot on" (to quote our British friends) and amusing. When H & R entered and Draco was supprised that they cleaned up nice and looked good in their Muggle clothes, I was chuckling! I sensed a bit of "Draco the clothes horse" there. I mean, he must be a clothes horse, he's so vain and egotistical, right?

I like how Harry slowly picked up on the various clues that Draco was serious, starting with Draco calling him "Harry" and ending with Draco slamming his drink and signalling for another. And the "Am I?" ending cliffy!!!! Cliffies are like ultimate torture for me...I know I've mentioned before that patience is not one of my virtues!

But my favorite line from this chapter is "I've never lied to you...I may not have told you things I know because, well, I'm a prat..." There's my Draco with his detached analysis of himself again! Recognizes he was a prat, but doesn't apologize for being one. And why should he? It's part of the charm that is Draco. I love the way you write Draco. Love, love, love it.

I definitely want more Harry-Draco interaction and witty repartee. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please don't torture me too long...

Thanks for spoiling me rotten with the 3-fur! Hugs and muchas smooches to ya, darling! And thanks for the heads up about "It Had to Be You." I would be forever grateful if you would add my email address to your "You" update list. *sits and stares at email, eagerly anticipating a message from Lorett that "You" has been updated and a glorious link to the new chappie*
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From ANON - RahNee on March 11, 2005
Chapter 17...Ahhh, teenagers! I spend a lot of time with them. I love them. But boredom is a LIFE & DEATH situation for them, isn't it?! I am a little jelous that Laurel has Vera Wang when I do not. And I am intrigued by the idea of a garter belt holster for one's wand. Certainly it is more likely more comfortable than slipping it down the cleavage! I sometimes wondered how the fasionably clad women would keep their wands on them if they were wearing an evening gown...

I am not 100% clear on this: Tad & Teeny are Muggles, ahem, I mean "non-magical"? So does Laurel have some Muggle background? I think I need to go reread the early chapters. It sounds like Laurel comes from a moneyed family, too, although not as hoity toity as TNT's family. Well, this certainly shows why Laurel would be orbiting in Draco's social circles. She WILL be orbiting in Draco's circle, right? Hmmm. I wish Draco existed in my little solar system...sigh.

I like that Laurel is not an attention-seeking drama queen, but is savvy about the social scene. She's not stuck up. I think Miss Laurel is growing on me!

*saunters off jauntily to read chapter 18 and savor the 3-fur goodness that Lorett kindly provided*
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From ANON - RahNee on March 11, 2005
*gleefully claps her hands and dances enthusiastically around the room* A 3-fur! It's like Christmas, my birthday and winning the lottery all at once! ( OK, so my bank account didn't get any fatter, but my happiness account did!)

Well, chapter 16 certainly explained a few questions that were lurking in my mind after the last one. I really like the way you incorporated a scene from Rowling into your story. I love the line that Draco doesn't like Harry, but respects him. I hope that that respect eventually leads to perhaps a friendship (?) between the two. I really enjoy it when you take me into Draco's head. His handsome, snarky, witty, gorgeous head. Because that wonderful head is attached to his handsome, sexy, Slytherin-y body... whoops! There I go digressing again!

Loved this chappie. I'm skipping off happily to read the second part of my 3-fur! (Did I mention you get an extra big hug for posting a 3-fur? And a big smooch *mwah* too!)
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From ANON - Ali on March 11, 2005
haha! yea more lke late night text messages! haha im back to my normal self! HAHA!!!!!!!!!!! im going home tomarrow! im so excited! its my dads birthday and the cousins i NEVER get to see are coming over! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! omg did you know that exactly a year ago today one of Spain's really big trains blew up because of tererists (i probibly mispelled a lot of words already. for some odd reason i can't seem to spell...)?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? i found that really odd that the tererists attacted on the 11th 2 times. hmmmmmmm thinking thinking thinking. my god im rambling about nothing again! oh well. i wonder how my boyfriend can stand me hehehe im hyper im sugar high! YAY SUGAR HIGHNESS! omg i actually get to sleep in tomarrow GASP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im so happy! ive been trying to fix the first chapter on my story because it stunk so now its much better but i havent finished it yet too busy too busy too busy busy busy me! haha my favorite shows on tonight but its kinda a kid show and its kinda not a kid show... its got bipolor people in it! excuse me A bipolor PERSON and this girl she got........ AH HA! you thought i was going to tell you didnt you???? you want to know what happens! WELL IM NOT TELLING *sticks out tungue like a 2 yr old would* NAH NAH NAH NAH NAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg i thought i was going to DIE of bordom today. GAH i almost did. hey i read this really corny joke in a joke book once and it said, "im writing this letter slowly because i know you can't read fast" HAHA that one still cracks mew up. hey right now im writing and talking really fast can you talk really fast? i can talk really fast! my mouth moves at the speed of light! hahahahhahahahahaha GREAT CHAPTER KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - mrs_accio_firebolt on March 11, 2005
Hi there. *HUGE GRIN*
You soo make me laugh. It is indeed like in "the old days". I don't only read your storie (and Ally's) but I also love to read your reviews to "A Reason", Alison's reviews to "The Three Keys", Ally's reviews to "The Three Keys", etc. I love your story, but I think your A/N add something really special to it. Being acknowledged as a reviewer does encourage us to do so. I do love to review and any opinion I may have on your writing, I'm sorry but I'll tell it to you: good or bad. As ever, never meaning to hurt your so-very-much-appreciated feelings. I hope I'm pulling it off nicely.
On to the review:
I liked the scene when Harry and Ron enter the bar. It made me think of Ben Affleck / Matt Damon, Gael Garc
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From ANON - mrs_accio_firebolt on March 11, 2005
I loved this chapter precisely for being so light. It also feels so real and I can't really tell why. I mean, they're a magic family. Witches and wizards. However, no real displays of magic happen at their home. Perhaps it is because they're new characters and we lack of all the background about them. Anyways, I loved the part when Maggie is so upset at John for coming home with a surprise before telling her. Soo real.
The very last line, however, I'm not sure I like it. It is a good line, I just don't know if it fits in this chapter. It as all soo light and suddenly.... very dark, powerful line. I think maybe you should have taken one more paragraph to tone down the mood and then... great line. But as always, it's just my opinion.
Finalmente, creo que hay varios errores al usar "too", en algunas ocasiones debiera ser "to". Am I right?
See ya.
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From ANON - mrs_accio_firebolt on March 11, 2005
Hi, lady.
I loved your explanation on Draco's reasons to save Potter. Harry can indeed defeat Voldemort. However, I'm not convinced about that scene in the QWC. It seems to me a little forced. But then again, como siempre, confiar
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From on March 11, 2005
Oh my, oh my! How could I have missed out on reading a story like this? Yes, I finally had the right opportunity to sit down, and READ many of my friends (since I consider you one :D) stories that I have promised to read. I just stopped on Ch. 2 to let you know I will read and read and read and when something comes up, review. But hopefully by the end of today I will have read all chapters 1through18.

Oh, one more thing. Since I'm on your update list for this story, please add me to the other one. :D Big ups to you girl. You've done a great job so far. Now...I will go on and finish this little ficlet.

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From ANON - Annie (You must be sick of me by now!) on March 11, 2005
Hee hee! Twinkle Toes!!! Love it!!!

YAY! Stressed out, sexy Draco has emerged and I love him! He's so... *sigh* dreamy!!! I wish I had a real life Draco around me right now so I could lavish him with huggles and smooches!!! As for Harry and Ron you've portrayed them really well! I can just see them bickering and not believing Draco when he's only trying to help them. I suppose Draco hasn't really made it easy for them to trust him since he's been so hostile towards them. But I undersatnd that Draco's reasons for doing that.

I'm happy that my reviews make you happy!!! Because if you're happy then you write more of your story and I can get lost in the wonderfulness (is that even a word?) of it all more! That said, I hope you update soon because I sense a Draco/Laurel meeting and I'm tres excited for it!!! *squeeee* *claps hands and jumps up and down in anticipation*

Huggles to you Lorett my lovely!!!
Annie.

P.S - Put me on your 'It Had to be you' update list aswel and I'll give that a read too.
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From ANON - Annie (Yet again!) on March 11, 2005
This is review 2 out of 3!!!

Loved this chapter! I know what you mean about hating people like T-N-T but secretly wanting to be them! I know a girl who's like that. She has absolutely everything!!! I wish I was her but she's also a bit stuck up so in a way I'm glad I'm not!!! Hee hee!

I'm glad Lorel is back! I've missed her! And now she gets to go and P-A-R-T-Y!!!!! I know whats coming up in the next chapter (I remembered when I started reading Chapter 16!) and I am sooooooo excited so I won't babble on with my excellent babbling skills, I'll go right along and read the next chapter!!!

Annie.
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From ANON - Annie (a.k.a Twinkling Star!) on March 11, 2005
Lorett my dear, your wish has been granted!!! (Hee hee sounded like the fairy godmother from Cinderella then!!) I will leave you three reviews! One for each chapter! YAY!!!

I love contemplative Draco too! He soooooo loves himself and I love that! I don't know why but I'm always attracted to men like that even though it usually ends up with me getting hurt! It's the bad boy syndrome I think! I just can't help myself!!! You've been very clever intertwining (
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From ANON - lilegyptiangoddess on March 11, 2005
Well done, please continue to post more chapters and what not ^_^.
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From ANON - mrs_accio_firebolt on March 10, 2005
Please, email me when you update.
Chapter 15.
I'm so sorry Narcissa has not told Draco about her decision. She could die and he would regret being so cold to her.
And am I glad Harry has stepped into scene.
This should get exciting.

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