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Reviews for The Three Keys

By : lorettcopeland

From ANON - WatchDaRain on March 09, 2005
OMG! Do you know how long I have been looking for this fic @ fanfiction.net?! For the past month!!!!!! I almost believed that I must have dreamt about reading a story like this and my god! I thought I was going insane... haha... Oki, well I'm gonna start reading from where I left off now, so 'til my next review!
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From ANON - RahNee on March 09, 2005
Wow. Wow wow wow. I'm speechless. That chapter grabbed my eyeballs and I couldn't stop reading until I got to the end. I don't think I even blinked! The repressed Narcissa is gone and powerful Narcissa is here and WOW. I loved this chapter. I think it's because Narcissa's character made a huge leap, and I'm apprehensive about what havok powerful Narcissa will wreak. But yea for her to embrace the mama bear role and realize that Lucius is too selfish to love her no matter how much she loves him.

Ummm...I can't seem to get to Chapter 15! Not going to panic or anything, but, um, can't get there. Must be a glitch. Please be a glitch! I NEED MY 2-FURS! Sorry, but I started to panic.

Ah well, even if I can read only one chappie tonight, it was a bright star in my evening. Thanks so much, Lorett dear! Hugs and smooches to ya!

PS: Not to be a nag or anything, 'cause I know the creative process is a fickle one, but I need a little steamy, sexy romance fiction update in my system soon before I pass out from "It Had to Be You" withdrawl. No pressure or anything, but the room is starting to spin and my vision is going gray...
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From ANON - ALP on March 08, 2005
OH NO!!! WHERE IS CHAPTER 15????!!!! I've been reading this story in the past couple of days, and I really like it. I decided to review this time to let you know that I think this has a great plot. I love your characterization of the whole Malfoy family. Narcissa is really great. In other fictions she is portrayed as an obnoxious snob that relies on her husband's reputation and power, but she has no power of her own. I like your version of her better. Please post chapter 15 soon. I can't wait to see what happens.
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From ANON - DracosGal on March 08, 2005
Well Lorett, you know I'd follow you anywhere so never fear! I also sent a few terrorizing letters to FF.net I can't believe they did that to youAGAIN! What a bunch of asses. Well, you're great and you ALREADY KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOUR STORY! This is one awesome chapter. Draco is so amazingly written that I totally believe its him! Cheer up luv, the reviews will come! I SHOCKED that not more people have reviewed alredy, but they will. If you go back to ff.net let me know, I'll follow you there too!

Love, M
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From ANON - erin on March 07, 2005
aww gotta love cocky draco...and sensitive draco...sigh my perfect man...
i love him in this story...but not really until the um...later chapters...so keep writing!!!!!
ahh cant wait...haha
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From ANON - RahNee on March 06, 2005
Hi Lorett! It's me, RahNee! I am so sorry about all the trouble you've had at fanfiction dot net! I was very upset to find you had been taken off my alert lists and off of everything over there. But thank goodness that my mind retained the tiny bit of information that you also posted on AdultFanFiction; I moseyed here and kept an eye out for your next chapter! And now it is here! And I love it!!! The "take Draco into my arms and comfort him moment" I have been waiting for is here. Excuse me a moment... *imagines poor, cocky, sexy, sad Draco in her arms*

You took me into Draco's head and I can really understand why he behaves the way he does, yet it is also believable that he isn't really such a jerk but keeps the masquerade up to keep himself safe. People as messed up as he is build up pretty amazing defense mechanisms, don't they? Poor guy...he got the short end of the stick when it came to parents and having a safe, secure home. And for him to break down and cry...oh my heart breaks! You must save him, Lorett, you must! Is Laurel the one to break down the walls and save him?! I hope so! I can't wait for the next chapter. (I miss the 2-furs already...)

Please put me on your email list to alert me when you post a new chapter for "Keys" and "You" and speaking of "You"...I really need a steamy story fix right now...hint hint! Hugs to you, sweetie! Now get back to writing! Hee hee!
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From ANON - Annie on March 05, 2005
Hiya Lorett hunny!!!

See I came to this site to read your story so I haven't deserted you!!! I told you I wouldn't! Hee hee! So your Twinkling star is back!! (I hope I'm still your twinkling star!!) I love your story and it's one of the only ones I actually get lost in and enjoy reading! I'm glad you're still posting and I'm sorry about all the trouble you got at FF.net. You didn't deserve it!

Awwww... Poor Draco! I just want to run up to him, tell him everything will be alright and give him an extra special hug *wink wink*!!! Hee hee! Bless him! He's not a cold blooded murderer like his dad so I understand his thinking. I love his arrogance aswel since that's just the way I think of him. That's what attracts me to a man actually even though that's a bad thing really!!! Hee hee!

Anyway I'll stop babbling on now!!! I hope you're ok and the whole FF.net trauma isn't stressing you out too much. Let me know if I can do anything to help! Update soon and let me know when you do!

Hugs and Smooches go out to you hun!!!
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From ANON - princessgreta on March 05, 2005
I just went on a hockey tour to holland and came back looking forward to reading to the new chapters of this ff. All gone! I was furious for you, but am so glad that I can catch up here.
That last chapter is really good because I now understand Draco that little bit more (and all the rest of them as well!)
Hugs and kisses,
princessgreta
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From ANON - fi on March 05, 2005
awwwwww bless poor draco and bless poor you! you definately deserve more reviews and id be more than happy to review ALL the chapters of the three keys all over again! (again) lol still love this story and most likely always will keep up the amazingly spectacular work!
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From ANON - lilegyptiangoddess on March 04, 2005
Another fantasic chapter!!!
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From on March 04, 2005
Oh cool. Somehow it seemed very in character for Draco to completely asses ( i think i spelled that right ) himself, and be conceited about it. I totally loved it. Please update more.
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From ANON - Alison (Or Blood Rust) on March 04, 2005
Lorett, darling -

Hi, girlie. As you can see, I stuck to my promise and FINALLY REVIEWED. Goodness gracious, it did take awhile though. Sheesh. I'm just glad that you're posting in general; I think I would have died if you stopped. I mean, I never even got to read it before, so it would have been so...disappointing never to get past chapter 12. Anywho, you're still posting, so that's all good. Hem hem.

This was an interesting chapter - a bit different from what you've done previously. (Since the review window isn't separate, it's a bit harder to remember everything I want to say, but I'll do my best.) I found the choice you made to introduce Draco's vanity extremely intriguing. I mean, it's definitely his signature quality, and there is no doubt that your Draco has it. That's for sure. And though the action is missing (of course, that makes sense. You need the slow, thoughtful chapters to really compliment those with action) you definitely gave the reader food for thought. Narcissa, for example. It hadn't really occurred to me what exactly her offense was. I knew that the choice she made wasn't what Draco wanted, but I hadn't thought of it precisely as a betrayal. The real betrayal, I think, was to choose for him only what he should have the power to choose. Except for the fact that he would never have had that choice in the first place if it wasn't for her. I don't think enough people realize what parents do for their children. It really is an amazing relationship.

Anywho, back to the point. To me, it seems a bit as if Narcissus has become a puppeteer (hah! what a coincidence!). Like, she really knows Draco better than he thinks she does. I think that she believes so strongly in Draco's desire to be free of the Death Eater life that she knows he will find a way around the murder. And that this separation from her will allow him the ability to choose for himself. And in that, her own freedom. Now, of course, this is all probably wrong. But that's sort of how it seemed to me.

And the introduction to Hermione!! Very sly. I assume we'll be meeting (or you'll be indirectly introducing) the rest of the Hogwarts gang. Er, I think I may not be on the adultfanfiction update email list, so if you don't mind, I would LOVE to be added (my email's up at the top). God knows I want to keep up on this brilliant bit of Fan Literature. Oh! I just updated today, too. I would love it if you wouldn't mind looking it up!! (I would give you the link, but I've forgotten it. Heh heh heh...) Hope that EVERYONE over there at fanfiction comes to view the updated stories. Hmph. I SHOULD HAVE PUT A LINK IN PUPPET MASTER (slaps forhead). DOUG! How dumb could I get!! Oh well, I'll put it in the next one.

So, love you. UPDATE SOON!!
~Alison
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From ANON - erin on March 01, 2005
aww damn fan fiction.net i could kill...

so i guess ill start reviewing from here...

keep updating!!! and dont forget to add me to ur email list lol
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From ANON - fi on March 01, 2005
hia darlin GRRRRR they make me mad at ffcant believe that its just so ridiculous not even a reason this time i emailed that xing guy and told him what i thoguht (in a nice way of course) otherwise dont think it would get us far, i only reviewed this chappy coz i wasnt sure about whether you'd wish me to review the others i will if you desire hun! fi xxxx
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From on February 27, 2005
I love it. So far, just the right amount of sex, and coflict, ad a little bit of ' can't guess what's going to happen next ' . please continue, waiting patiently for more.
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