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Reviews for The Three Keys

By : lorettcopeland
  • From ANON - ali on June 22, 2006
    speechless. it was beautiful, heartbreaking, terrifying, and amazing all at the same time, plus it took me 2 hours to read. that chapter was better then any book, or story i have read in my life.
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  • From ANON - RahNee on June 21, 2006
    Darling Lorett, you already know what I think of this chapter (and no, "Thank Heaven it's finally posted" is NOT the first thought that comes to mind!). Congratulations on grappling with and writing a dark and deeply emotional chapter. Lord knows I know it wasn't easy! I'm just so stinking proud of you for hanging in there and sticking with it despite all the distractions and difficulty Real Life threw at you! And for not ripping your hair out in the process. You still have your hair, don't you?

    Anyway, I love you tons and am proud to be your beta and honored to be your friend, lovey! And thanks for the fabulous plug for "A New Definition of Family!" (Notice how I got another plug in just now? Shameless-Hussies-R-Us!) I LOVE YOU! MWAP!

    Ronnie
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  • From ANON - SlytherinsWench on June 21, 2006
    That was fantastic and wonderful and so very dark. I'm pleased to see you exploring new avenues as a writer and taking that leap with these characters. I know dark and despairing is not your chosen poison, but this was very well written. And I really like how you just let the story flow and followed where it would go. There was such ease with the transisitions, and Draco had some great lines that really made the reader connect with him, as well as displaying those facets about him that we have all come to see as so very Draco. He's developing and growing as a person, he's redeemable, but he's still Draco to the core.

    Lorett, my darling, my lovely, this was worth every second that we had to wait. I couldn't believe how fast the chapter went. I was so engrossed that before I knew it, I was at the end and left salivating for more.

    It's been most impressive to me, to see how you've changed as a writer and as a person from the first chapter of this grand epic to this one. The characters have developed and changed with you and I feel priveleged to have been able to share that.

    Anyway, much love to you.

    And what's wrong with all of you non-reviewing bastards? Show my girl some love!!! She's wonderful. :)
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  • From ANON - LindseyL on June 21, 2006
    Hey I'm liking this story. Really cool. I'm on chapter 15. I'll review again soon. Lindsey L
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  • From ANON - hp luvr on June 21, 2006
    WELL WORTH THE LONGGGG WAIT. Please don't keep us waiting so long for the next update. HP LUVR 4 EVER!
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  • From ANON - speechless on June 21, 2006
    WOW. I don't even know where to begin. I love the fact that you list all your spells at the bottom of the story. Its a neat touch and I look forward to knowing what the heck they're saying when the spells go a flying. I thought this was a very tender chapter. I didn't think it was that dark, but it was powerful and emotional and captivating. Well done. I was reading this all day long. Had to go back a few chapters, because I started reading this a few months ago in wandering through the HP fics and had to work my way back here. Great job. Chaper well done. Story well done. Can't wait for the next one.
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  • From ANON - dracosgal on June 21, 2006
    i totally was freaking out when i saw you updated!!!!!! this ROCKED my world. what a bloody fantastic chapter. i was so crying for draco. we need more harry too. can not wait for the next chapter! kisses to you - dg
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  • From ANON - hurry up on June 18, 2006
    Hurry up, I've been waiting for ages for a new chapter!
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  • From ANON - Lynne on December 27, 2005
    OMG!!! I was sooooooooo upset that ff.net removed ur story. I was like 'wtf? y did they do that?' anyways... i love the new chapter, update soon!! i gotta tell u, everytime i read that bathroom scene between laurel & harry, it just makes me sooooooo happy!!! LOL anyways update soon please!!!!
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  • From ANON - Rose on December 24, 2005
    NO WAY was that your first fanfic!!! I dont believe you!!! It was amazing

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  • From ANON - Ally on December 11, 2005
    Will be typing the review as I go so as not to leave out any points! So shall we embark on the voyage that is chapter 36?!?! :

    OOOOh a Snape chapter, how fun!! I LOVE how you had Maggie accuse Snape of flirting as he was sending her a death glare! Such a brilliant reaction to our poor professor! Made me laugh to picture Snape actually trying to flirt!
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  • From ANON - Ally on December 11, 2005
    Ah Chapter 35!

    COMPLETELY forgot about Leo Zabini! Reason I love him is cause my grandfather's name is Leo (#my dad's dad!) Anyway God I love your Lucius darling. He is just so amazingly evil yet dashing at the same time. Oh and the signing of the papers in blood!?! Love that scene, makes it really real. Binds Draco not only to the contract but to his new cause!

    Okay eagerly rushing forward to the next chapter!!

    Love, Ally
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  • From ANON - silverstar24 on November 27, 2005
    I really do like your characterization of Narcissa! Sometimes she seems so flat--too whiny, too spineless or abused...but I definitely like her character in this story. She's such an interesting diachotemy. Powerful--but at the same time vulnerable; sometimes seeming submissive and almost broken, but at the same time in control and fiercely protective of her son. The family interaction in this chapter was a really interesting read. Awesome!
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  • From ANON - Jo on November 14, 2005
    i am just about certain that i will absolutely devistated if you don't update soon, i really hope you do update soon! i'll be on the lookout :)
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  • From ANON - lilycat on October 21, 2005
    Hi Lorett!

    Just read your message and came to check that I had indeed reviewed- and I discovered that I had been remiss in reviewing your latest chapters! So...

    The tension between Narcissa/Snape/Lucius/Maggie (granted not in all combinations) is killing me! I'm upset that I sort of feel bad for Lucius when he is so clearly posing a threat to my darling Draco! The Narcissa and Lucius chapter shook things up for me and I'm finding it hard to form distinct impressions. Do we hate Lucius? Pity him? Admire his dangerous sexiness from a distance while spurning him? I suppose that is part of the beauty of your writing- it's the depth of the characters.

    I have a HUGE crush on Draco. Not crush. Obsession. If he was a tangible person, he would currently have at least one stalker, er, admirer. He's so intense, daring, intelligent, single-minded- just think what it would be like to have all of that in a Draco-shaped package, and for all of it to be focused on that one special girl...

    I am really enjoying all the backstory with the older characters as well. My curiosity has been piqued.

    Ron and Hermione: I love the way you are doing this! It's such a sweet side. And I'm happy to say that I no longer feel angst-ridden for my darling Harry. Draco may be my preference, but Harry is a close second and I can 't tell you how relieved I am that you are taking care of my sweet green-eyed darling.

    So... I am now reserving my ringside seat for the Draco/Lucius showdown, though I will be biting my nails through the entire thing!

    MWAP! Of course I've been reading this! I would never NOT read something you've written. You're my celebrity writer remember? Sorry I'm late in reviewing! (hugs you)

    Cat
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