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By : lorettcopeland

From ANON - Melanie on August 12, 2005
hey!
ok, after such a long time of not hearing anything about this story, this new chapter was totally great. I loved all of the emotion and angst towards maggie, and narcissa. good job. keep on truckin!

please add me to the personal email thingy, my email is: serendipity_613@yahoo.com .

thanks!
Melanie
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From ANON - ali aka ginny-rules-the-world on August 12, 2005
of corse, guess what im going to say. IT ROCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm back from Europe, i know, i know, u missed me, no need to tell me, i went to bed at 8 last night, which to me, felt like 2 in the morning, i'm never going to Europe ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever again...... stupid airplanes....... 9 hours...... bad food....... stupid seats....... gaylords....... i'm not going back, UNLESS i can sit in buisness class. ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh never gonna happen. well.... i have a surprise in my story, some scurry stuff. lol, u know i luv ya!

-ali

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SMILE! this IS the happy hour!!!!!
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From ANON - Tiarwen on August 11, 2005
yayayayay!!!! i love Sev/Cissa. like WHOA. tis awesome as ALWAYS and i cant wait to see what you have up your sleeve. *muah*

.-Tiar-.
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From ANON - rain on August 11, 2005
Chapter 18:

I love dramtic Ron, whining about the beautiful girls and how Malfoy's a slytherin. And as usual Harry is sharp enough to think things through logically and sense that there is more to this than just some prank. Poor Malfoy, having to admit his father doesn't love him, that must have been hard for him...but it certainly made Harry pay attention.

Rain
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From ANON - Aurorien on August 11, 2005
Woot! Lor, you rock! I want ringside tickets! And I'm placing my bets on Junior!

AU forever!

Luv, Rori
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From ANON - Katie on August 11, 2005
Reveiw for Ch. 36

Hello, Lorett my darling!

I have FINALLY finished your oh-so-incredibly-awsome fic, and I have one thing to say: HOLY FRICKIN' COW!

I don't think I've ever read such a long fic in such a short time (I'm really only counting Ch 19 on when I say this)! I don't even know where to begin!

First of all, let us start with Laurel, who I not only want to BE, but I also want to be able to write. Such a complex, mysterious, yet accessible character. Her powers are so COOL (how on earth do you think of these things?), but beyond being a very powerful and capitivating character in that sense, she is written with such realism and caring (I can tell that she's your baby) that she could be the girl any of us live next door to. She is both larger than life and painfully sympathetic. I am simultaneously in awe of her and intimately connected with her. I have no idea how you pull that off, but you do it beautifully. By far the best OC I've ever had the pleasure to read!

Your DRACO, now! If I wasn't half-way in love with him already, I most certainly would be after reading this fic! You have done what so many otherwise-awesome fic writers often fail to do: you have redeemed him without making him lose that edginess that we all so adore about him! He is snarky and arrogant, but he is also brave and willing to risk himself for the cause. His little line way back when, when he told Laurel that he was hers . . . Dear Lord in heaven, I almost melted into a puddle of quivering goo! If he said that to ME, I would faint dead away, no joke.

Speaking of the romance aspect: My, my, what a tangled web you weave! I don't think there's a single character that isn't somehow caught between at LEAST two others. It's complicated and confusing and I LOVE it! It reminds me of 90210 (did you ever watch that?) when everyone in their little group kept switching partners like they were at some kind of warped square dance. It grows more complex with every chapter, and I wouldn't have it any other way. I adore the Draco/Laurel dynamic! Their scenes together are so intense I can almost see the sparks flying! Ooh, and I can't wait for Hermione to get thrown into the mix (you know I have a soft spot for her). What will poor Harry do then?

I can't help but notice that we STILL don't know what the prophesy says, and I won't deny that I'm extremely curious (and impatient, you know). As I'm sitting here typing this out, I have developed a small theory about it. I won't tell you what it is yet; I need to gather a little more evidence first, which will, obviously, require further chapters from you! Chop chop!

Now, getting down to this latest chapter (congrats, BTW, for finally getting it out! It was worth the wait, or it would have been if I'd had a wait): OMG, I think I may be developing a Snape facination as well! I can't have this! The Draco thing is unhealthy enough! I ADORE your Snape! He's still the Snape we know and love-to-hate, but you've given him so much depth and an extremely intriguing and beleivable past. The banter between him and Maggie was absolutely priceless. It reminded me somewhat of really well-written Draco/Hermione banter, which is one of my favorite things about my ship-of-choice. Some of my favorite lines from that section:

-- Severus Snape turned and directed a quelling look toward Maggie Winters that would have intimidated the most errant of his students into submission without question. Maggie however, simply rolled her eyes and clicked her tongue.
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From dracomalfoysmistress on August 11, 2005
oh how I love this story im so glad you updated. The plot is fantastic and I cant wait for the battle of the malfoys( their both so delicious)! Oh please update soon!!!
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From ANON - Katie on August 11, 2005
Review for Ch. 33 (I think)

Hello, Lorett my darling!

I was planning on waiting until I'd finished the entire story before I reviewed, but I HAD to comment on this lovely chappie!

The bonding scene was SO intense! I would copy some of my fav quotes here, but AFF doesn't appear to have the same review policy as ff.net, so I can't get back to it, or at least I don't know how. Suffice it to say, I LOVED it! Your imagery was so vivid, so enthralling, that I couldnt look away, and at the time I was right in the middle of talking to that boy I mentioned, so that's saying something! I could see the snakes moving and smell the blood. I almost gasped with them as they felt the power of the bond, because the power of your words was just as breathtaking! My favorite scene, by far! I bow to you, oh mighty author!

Well, I'm off to finish the rest of the story. Tomorrow, you may expect a lengthy, overly-enthusiastic review from one very impressed new fan! Having writer's block on the next chappie for Linked, too, so you can also expect a lengthy, rather frusterated e-mail from one very uninspired fic writer.

Absolutely LOVING the story, honey! You were so right about the good stuff happening around Ch 19. I haven't been able to stop reading since I got to the club scene!

~Katie

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From ANON - RahNee on August 10, 2005
LORETT, DARLING!!!! *Runs to you, grabs you in a BIG bear hug and squeezes tight* Congratulaltions on the breakout from Writer's Block Prison! Hope that file I baked into that cake for ya did the trick! Wink Wink...

Let's get right to the nitty gritty: the parts that I LOVE in this chapter...shall we? *Pulls up purple zebra striped bean bag, turns on the lava lamp, and plays groovy late 70's tunes*

First of all, the Maggie/Snape dynamic is FAN-FREAKING-TASTIC! They just know how to get under each other's skin, don't they? This is a classic example of the old adage "familiarity breeds contempt." The entire scene with them was so good, I'm afraid I'd just be pasting the whole thing here if I started pulling out favorite lines. However, I got a nice chortle out of:
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From ANON - SJ on August 10, 2005
Oh my dear sweet Lorett . . . What a fabulous writer you are.

This chapter is definitely one of my favorites. I think Maggie and Snape and Snape and Narcissa have much more than just chemistry . . . they've got electricity! I am so interested in learning how on earth Maggie and Lucius hooked up and why on earth DIDN'T Snapey-poo and Cissy get together? Seriously? If I knew of a man like that so wholly devoted to me, I'm just not sure I could resist. It must've been a big reason named Lucius . . . Oh well, c'est la vie.

Too many good lines to quote . . . you just write so well! You have a wonderful working vocabulary and you know how to string together a sentence . . . Words flow like water. Love it. Seriously, this is a great story and I am very impressed with your perseverance and love for the story . . . I know I get boggled down after not updating for a while and it takes a lot of hard work to get back into the swing of writing.

But you came back with a bang! I expect nothing less with the next chapter which I better have before I leave for England. You've got one month, sister.

Do to it.

Love n hugs,
SJ
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From ANON - rain on August 10, 2005
On Chapter 16 now and I have to tell you how much I loved these lines:

But, Draco was older now, a man, and he knew what he had to do
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From ANON - Rain on August 10, 2005
Hey L,

Finally finding a moment to catch up on my reading! It's a miracle in itself I know. Well, chapter 14 was short but powerful. Poor Narcissa, just after you made me fall in love with her now she is going to be alone in the world. She is an example to all of us foolish girls who love those bad boys...

Rain
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From ANON - dracosgal on August 10, 2005
holy crap!

this was an awesome chapter, i loved everything in it. i can't believe i forgot all about narcissa, but i did and now i had to go back and read about her whole letter thing to refresh my memory.

and the tie in with what laurel said to her mom with draco on the couch, i went back and re-read that too. oh my god you're so good!

loved it and just can't wait for the next chapter with lucius and draco. i hope draco kicks his mean old daddy's butt.

love,

ml
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From ANON - Wilby on August 10, 2005
great chapter, as always, and its good to have you back... wish we had gotten a little more draco, cuz im really curious as to whats going to happen with that whole situation. until next time!
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From ANON - Jenn on August 10, 2005
oh my god, oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!!!

What a fabulous chapter, time has certainly done you well and this is planned out as well as JK rowling at her best! Holy crap, I'm still in awe of your plot..... i read that chapter about three times and now think I have a pretty good understanding of where you're going with this. Was a little confused about the whole patronus part but you cleared that up with the gaurdian explanation at the end. NICE!

So, my mind is in overdrive on the whole shaded past of Maggie thing.... guessing she wasn't so innocent back in the day.... and a possible intimate link to Lucius no? Snape and Narcissa, always one of my favorites. I don't read the story pairings for them but as a background story I think they're perfect for eachother. Amazing conversations skills you have mastered for them. As I always say, you have a great talent for bringing out a better depth of each character and making them seem all the more real. I could practically FEEL the emotions vibing off of my computer screen

Now I know I don't really post of the site or anything, but I still ghost around it a bit when I have some time. HBP was amazing and I have SOOOOO may questions that need answering. I heard talks of an eighth book, have you heard that at all? I won't bring up any of my main questions on here cause I don't want anyone reading them that haven't read the book though since they're spoiler-enhanced. Either way, good job with the site so far! (and just so you know, fanfiction is an IDIOT for loosing such a wicked author as you)

Now, onto my main surpise... the lack of the Malfoy men confrontation. At first I was like NOOOOOOOOOOO but then I was like, holy crap, this is soooo needed in the plot of things. I must say, good job at getting my attention and adding to the suspense. Therefore I expect a MAJOR INCREDIBLE FABULOUS next chapter, and you'll be hearing from me missy! lol, you know it'll be great and I'll be singing your praises.

Well, all great things come to an end, and this review happens to be one of them. HOWEVER, I expect your story to not be one of those things any time soon. I do however expect a new chapter pronto!!! BIG HUGS FOR FABULOUS YOU!!!

~Jenn
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