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By : lorettcopeland
  • From ANON - harrysgirl on June 29, 2005
    ugh, i so love it! how can you end it there? i was screeching, noooo! well anyway, hurry up, lorett! your fans are impatiently tapping our feet..
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  • From ANON - mrs_accio_firebolt on June 27, 2005
    Hi, Lorett! Such a wonderful chapter! I would have hated FF for cutting the story here! It's so exciting! At first, however, I felt like you were taking too long to get to the point. The whole scene when Lucius is reading the letters seemed too long for me, you were teasing us too much. Honestly, almost to the poing where I lose interest.
    But then.... OMG. It picked up impressively. Lucius became such a focal point. You can't help but think of Lucius. He's EVERYTHING. He filled up the pages. You made a BIG man. Very BIG. And the chapter break where Lucius is thinking about the date with his son.... superb.
    One of the things that I wonder the most about, is Narcissa. Don't even think I had forgotten about her. I had been thinking what she was up to. And she's back: more mysterious than ever. What on earth is she up to? I demand to know. lol
    Great, great chapter, lady.
    See you around.
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  • From on June 27, 2005
    I do hate cliffhangers. I was half expecting Ginny and Loren to expose themselves to Draco, and cover him with the invisibility cloak. But no, you had to go and give me a heart attck. I do hope that Draco can get out of there, with hardly a scratch.
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  • From ANON - Dracosgal on June 26, 2005
    HEY LORETT!

    HOW IN THE HELL ARE YOU? So, I'm sitting here looking in my email inbox and see that chapter 35 is up. I'm all on pins and needles waiting for the new chapter. I think this is a teriffic story and I can't wait for the new chapter. By the way, nice cliffy there. I fogot how evil that was. So, I'll be waiting, still here supporting you!

    Love M!
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  • From ANON - RahNee on June 26, 2005
    Well, well, well...Chapter 35: the Luscious Lucius Chaper, to be sure! WOW! Where to begin? I love the idea of Lucius flying by the seat of his pants trying to convince Voldy of some cock and bull story that he and Draco planned this whole thing all along and blah blah blah! Hilarious. No wonder Lucius is grumpy. And I love Leonardo, the smarmy bastard. Just the right amount of sycophant/power hungry megalomaniac tendencies. They all need to start a club, don't they?

    Ohhh, Narcissa's letter was so good. And I love Lucius' reaction to it. He loves her in his sick freaky way and is actually hurt when she leaves him. Oh, and murderous about it, too. But he loves her. How touching in a really, really disturbing way.

    I love how Lucius is so very much under Voldy's thumb, but dreams of the day when he is no longer. This line was great, and very ironic: Lucius Malfoy if he had it his way, would bow to NO ONE, would succumb to NO ONE, would allow NO ONE to enforce their will into his life
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  • From ANON - Huked On Fonix on June 25, 2005
    WoooooooO!!!!!!! *does the happy dance*
    New chappie next, NEW CHAPPIE!!!!!!

    Can you tell I'm excited? lol, great work, I love this chapter and can't wait for the next! **NEW!!**

    *does another happy dance*
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  • From ANON - ali aka ginny-rules-the-world on June 25, 2005
    lol, it's all good. lol! im a little happy. hey guess what!?!?!?!?!?! im a boy!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol. jk. i went to see shark boy and lava girl with my cousin who's 6. There was only one lava girl 3-D pair of glasses. So obviously, she wanted them. So i gave them to her, and i was shark boy. lol. therefore, im a boy! lol. working on my new chapter too! :o! lol. im a little hyper and happy! i'm HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GOING TO EUROPE! CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry, on to more important things, ur CHAPTER! it ROCKED! just like before : ))))! i can't wait for the next chapter! yay! so close! HAVE A GOOD DAY!!!!! LIKE I DID!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    SMILE! this IS the happy hour!
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  • From ANON - Lindsey on June 25, 2005
    well, this was an interesting chapter! i can't wait to find out wat happens btwn malfoy senior and malfoy junior!!! i bet laurel and ginny are gunna step in and help, no doubt about that, but we'll jsut have to wait and see about the rest....well update asap k?? i look forward to the next chapter!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Tiarwen on June 25, 2005
    yay!!!! im excited. cant wait for the next chapter. its awesome as always. this would be longer but for the fact that i apparently have carpal tunnel in my left wrist, and thus im typing with only my right hand. (which is going to affect my writing... rawr.) *muah* i love it its great.

    .-Tiar-.
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on June 25, 2005
    Your story is like find wine, just gets better and better. I lover snarky Draco.
    Look forward to the next update.

    Sorry to hear things haven't been going to well of late, Best wishes. Blessed be.


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  • From ANON - Wilby on June 25, 2005
    aaaaah finally! sorry ive been neglecting to review the past chapters, but from here on out i should be more consistent.

    i CANT WAIT for the next chapter! thank for not becoming discouraged through everything!

    -Wilby :)
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  • From ANON - fi on June 25, 2005
    woooooo a new chappy soon i cant wait! again you've got excellent writing style that just makes you want to read on!and you definately cant get enough i was sooo excited when i saw i had recieved another update from you and went immiediately to read it and then go and review i hope to hear from you soon and i cant wait until a NEW chappy of the keys is up :D its gonna be soo amazing!!!! luv you lots fi xxx
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  • From ANON - ronan1 on June 24, 2005
    fun story. hope you are planning on continuing, i'll be reading and checking in!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 22, 2005
    SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i totally loved it!! amazing story.....please continue
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  • From ANON - blondlust on June 19, 2005
    HELLO! I just had to take a moment out here and comment on how fantastic this chapter is. I'm truly enjoying the story and I really like the originality of the characters and appreciate what a good writer is. Glad I found you. I'm off to the next chapter.
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