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Reviews for The Three Keys

By : lorettcopeland

From ANON - Tiar on June 10, 2005
awesome as always!!!! i love it. update soon!!!! my exams are over on tuesday, and i hafta help with freshie orientation on wednesday, but after that i am FREE!!!! yay. so yea. update soon!!!! *muah*

.-tiar-.
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From ANON - Lindsey on June 08, 2005
wonderful chapter, not too much action, but u made up for it by puttin in a lot of details. i still liked it!!! i didn't get exactly how ginny went with laurel instead of harry, buh it's ok. can't wait for more laurel/draco moments.....oooh i wonder wats gunna happen when lucius gets to gringotts!!!! i'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!
til then, TOODLES!
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From ANON - Huked On Fonix on June 08, 2005
LOVE IT!! I SO love this chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next......AND we're SO close to a brand spankin new chappie!
*Jumpin up and down* I'm so excited, and I just can't hide it, lol!

ANywho, keep it up, you are so WICKED AWESOME!

*I'm so hyper, haha.... ;-) I guess that's what happens when you have lots of sugar at 1am, haha.....*

Ok then Buh Bye! You're BLOODY BRILLIANT, girlie!

Smooches, love ya!
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From ANON - eve/roarke on June 07, 2005
Still following the story, really enjoying it, unfortunately it's tax form receipt time so I'm
really busy. Loved your Blaize, sexy lovable rogue he is. Best wishes hope you're o.k.
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From ANON - ginny-rules-the-wold aka ali on June 07, 2005
aha! i got you! i SWITCHED the ginny-rules-the-world and ali!!! HA! lol, i have issues. n e who, my fav. part, in this chap: A shudder ran through him,
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From ANON - Annie on June 07, 2005
Hey Lorett,

Awww poor you! Staying up late to write a chapter and shout-outs and having the shout-outs deleted! I would be pissed as well! I always do stuff like that! Like when I'm sending out an e-mail or something and it deletes itself... STRESS!!! I posted on the community! I got a quick chance yesterday before I went to work so thought I'd come to say Hi! I went to see Destiny's Child on Sunday night and they were amazing! I don't think I've ever been to a better concert! I mean we (me and my mates) didn't have the best of seats but I still had a blast! They really are brilliant performers and Beyonce has one of the best voices I've ever heard in my life!... The cow!!! Hee hee!

Anyway, review time...

I knew it was Ginny who was with Laurel! I can see that their friendship is going to be quite solid as they have similar personalities. That's like me and my best friend Jess, we get on so well because we're do similar, well, we're both crazy and no one else understands our crazyness so I think that's why! It was a nice touch adding Ginny to the mix in the whole Library thing! I think that she's going to be one of my absolute favourite characters in this story! She's so firey and sarcastic! I'm loving it! And her seeing Harry in the shower *giggles* that's naughty, but so funny! Hee hee! I mean any sane girl would perve on a sexy guy in the shower if she could right?... or is that just me?! Hee hee!

Just so you know, you've added my total and utter idea of a dream guy into this chapter! Blaise sounds like the guy I would go for in real life! (except for the whole magic thing!... Actually, thinking about it, a real life Blaise with magic powers sounds good to me too! Hee hee!) I'm a sucker for bright blue eyes and dark hair and the fact that in this story they belong to a bad boy is all the better for me!! I think I have always told you that I go for bad boys without concious(sp?) thought. I hope that he'll be involved in the story some more and very soon hopefully! And maybe he'll have a nice Annie character draped on his arm...???!!! Hee hee! I loved the relationship that he and Draco seem to have. They seem to be the Slytherin version of Harry and Ron in that they know eachothers thoughts since they know eachother so well. It's nice that Draco has a best friend just like everyone else and that he's not been on his own before he found 'the golden group'.

I loved Draco's arrongance in Gringotts. It's just like him to look down his nose at the people who are intended on serving him! (Look at me talking as if I know him personally! Hee hee! I'm a geek!) I'm glad that you've kept his character similar to what it is in the books because so many fics that feature Draco seem to loose the whole essence of him that is captured in the books. You, however, are true to his original personality and make his changes and progressions believeable!

Anyway, I'm going to stop babbling now before I go into the land of Annie and start writing utter nonsense that you won't understand! Hee hee! I loved this chapter and can't wait to see what's going to happen next! (Oooohhh... Lucius is coming and he's going to be pissed... I'm scared!!) Please write soon!

Hope you're ok and that life is treating you well!!
Hugs and kisses,
AnineXxX

(P.S - Wow look at me go! It's such a long review! I hope I haven't bored you hun!)
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From ANON - Rain on June 06, 2005
Hey Lorett,

I've been lurking at your group the last couple of days, the thing you guys have going with the Ferret is hilarious. I like to lurk awhile before I jump in. But you've def got some good discussions going on there. I havn't had as much time as I would like to read lately but I like the look of some of the recs too. Thanks for turning me onto it.

About this chapter I especially liked this line: 'if he had the proper mix, he could stave death, at least for now
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From ANON - newton on June 06, 2005
Nice writing so far. Very enjoyable. I'm glad I took the time to read this story finally. I'm really digging it. I'm off to read your other one now.
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From ANON - black lioness on June 06, 2005
holy fricking cow, that chapter was h.o.t.

i already love to read about harry/draco teasings but this took it to a whole new level. i really like your laurel she's a cool cucumber and i like how she handels draco and harry so well.

this is a fun read, i'll be looking for new updates.

bl
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From ANON - lisa on June 06, 2005
Hey this is awesome! I'm in luv with your version of Draco. Hes so totally hot. Hes still a bad-boy but god is he goooood! keep going, can't wait for more.
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From ANON - Rain on June 05, 2005
Hey Girl

So far I am liking this story. NO Draco so far :( but you promised so I will take your word for it. You have a gift for details and it makes an enjoyable read. I especially liked this chapter. I hate girly girls who just cry and don't fight back. Your Laurel is a tough cookie and didn't go down without a fight. Even panicing and terrified she had a plan. Really shows a strong character. And Don was really evil!
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From ANON - Jenn on May 30, 2005
A very late review, I know, but a review none the less!

So how are things?? My new job keeps me very busy but I still like to drop in and say hello! You know that this is my favorite chapter BY FAR so I can't wait to see what will out-do it in the near future! Quick question though... did you combine two chappies?? I remember the Harry/Draco scene being seperate from the Laurel/Draco scene... can't really remember though! Either way, it flows nicely!

So its about two more chapters to go??? Oh, and I know a hot little one that makes an appearance next chappie!! Ahh, Blaise walking down the street *sigh*

I better get going here but I can't wait for that new chappie! Keep it going! luv ya!
hugs:)
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From ANON - Tiar on May 29, 2005
*peeks out from under a pillow* hi... i love it. im sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry that i haven't reviewed. like whoa. reallyreallyreally sorry. i love it tho!!!! i always do. hoping to be on more after finals, then i read and review all i like. two-ish weeks, and then i belong to the world of fanfiction again. so i apologize for not reviewing sooner. its great, as always. you're amazing. *muah*

.tiar.
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From ANON - Lindsey on May 27, 2005
OMG, the chapters just get better and better, and that's pretty hard to do when you have over 30 chapters!!!! i DID like the harry/draco flirting, it was different, but interesting. i also liked how you built up the suspense btwn draco and Laurel, BUT you decided to save it for a later time, ay? anyway, keep up the GREAT writing, i get so excited when i see your e-mails and know that there's a new chapter to read!!! lol, kinda silly, but still, i LOVE reading your story, it's great! till next time!!!
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From ANON - Huked On Fonix - too tired to sign in on May 26, 2005
I KNOW!! I know who the mystery person is! Haha, but only cuz I remember from FF.net.. *grin*

I REALLY like this chapter! (33) ESPECIALLY the part with Draco/Laurel..... YAY! I was SO happy to finally see a scene with JUST the two of them, both awake, hehe..
Whew! Somebody crank up the A/C, cuz it is HOT in here! Lol

I'm just so excited - more and more excited for NEW chapters! Patience, I need patience, haha...

Anyway...Imma go to bed now, and have some NICE dreams... mmmm, haha.. 1am.....soooooooo tired.....need sleep......have stuff to do tomorrow......
Keep up good work....still LOVING the story, and can't wait for another chappie!!

Fonix *Yawn!*
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