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By : lorettcopeland

From ANON - Rose on December 27, 2005
Please update! IN THE NAME OF ALL THAT IS GOOD OR HOLY!!!! have pity on us!!!!
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From ANON - Rose on December 24, 2005
another brilliant chapter!!! im sorry you were feeling like shit but please update soon!!! Oh my god! private lessons from Draco! yes please!
P.S. Draconius??!!
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From ANON - Rose on December 23, 2005
WOW...it was brilliant!!!! thankyou for bringing it into my life!!!!! How can i ever repay you!!!! Ive started writing a Draco/Hermione fanfic but I think I'll just give up as it will never be half as good as yours! PLease pleasepleaseplease email me when up update/write a new story!!
your the best!!!
-Your biggest fan!
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From ANON - Emily on November 26, 2005
Very cute story thus far. I would love to see Ron and Harry's reactions to the little romance going on behind their backs. Do you have some sort of update list going on here? If so, I would love to be added =) Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Sanjay on November 24, 2005
Uuuuuurgh, I absolutely HATE Ginny after this chapter.
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From ANON - Brianne on November 23, 2005
I came across the title to this story while reading Celebrity Skin on ff.net...and I couldn't find the story there...I'm glad I found it here because I reallly wanted to read it!
I absolutely love it! It's very well written....I'm a sucker for fluff! Hope you update again soon!
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From ANON - sheila on November 21, 2005
All I can say is WOW. You totally have hit the mark with this fic. I love your work.
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From ANON - Ally on November 20, 2005
Okay,

So I have finally read the new chapter. You are great at writing angst I must say. At the beginning I was like Oh god, this is cheesy. All the I'm not ready's, no Draco I can't...but I trusted you and your skill with words and sure enough they were talking about Flying. Draco is so strange! lol. Loved Ginny in this chapter. Only thing I didn't get was the end. Why did she suddenly clam up? I mean come on girl! Honestly though, I don't get how what he said made her want to stop. Okay maybe my views on sex are a bit different but please, they are pretty much doing it anyways! Okay I know you are just dragging it out I do but it still doesn't stop me from being frustrated. ARG!

But really it was a great chapter, though her protests are kinda needing to come to an end. After that amazing 'non-sex' scene they had the next step is sex really. I mean come on! They are WAY past dry humping! lol. Okay I have no idea where I have taken this review. THe chapter was amazing it really was. I can't wait for Ron to find out about them. Should make for an interesting Chapter. Well done Lorett my darling. You horrible horrible tease!!!!!

Love Always,
Ally
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From ANON - Ally on November 20, 2005
Ahhh I totally forgot about the blow-pop chapter! dear Lord woman. I will never be able to look at candy the same way again! Okay back to reading!

Love, Ally
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From ANON - Kueble on November 16, 2005
I just found this tonight and it's brilliant. Wonderfully hot and fluffy at the same time.
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From ANON - giddy on November 16, 2005
girl, when are you going to update? I'm dying here. HURRY!

I NEED MORE!

G
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From ANON - SJ on November 14, 2005
"Private lessons from Draco? - Grin. Yeah, me too."

Oh L! You CRACK me up - seriously. . . . Yeah, I was laughing so much in this chapter for various reasons . . . All that build up to sex, but it was actually leading to flying . . . hahaha, had me fooled. . . . The painting of Ophelia sounds absolutely gorgeous, I could really picture it and I felt instantly sad for her. . . . Gorgeous imagery during the flying scene . . . Your Draco is SO cheesy! I mean, REALLY corning it up there. But the knight in shining leather pants suits him in this story because it is sickly sweet, like you say.

And the almost-sex scene . . . well you know me and sex scenes and stuff, I usually skip over it . . . but I read yours and I must congratulate you on excellent use of proper anatomical nomenclature. I HATE the word that substitutes for rooster (see, I hate it that much I won't say it) and I was so pleased by the maturity you show in this story - it's exemplorary, really, and with due reason - alongside your fun, childlike energy, you're still a mature woman and know what's what!

So let's teach them kiddies how to do real fan fiction, hmm?

Love you lots doll - so glad I finally got the chance to read this chapter, after like, forever!

Always,
SJ

P.S. My only criticism - the 'thoughts' distracted me and confused me at times when they were right next to dialogue.

P.P.S. The title ALWAYS reminds me of 'A League of Their Own' . . .

"It had to be you-you-you-you-you . . . . I'm singin' to Nelson! Ain't I baby?"
"You sure are. . ."

HA - fun.
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From ANON - Krysta on November 13, 2005
It's been awhile since I've been able to get back and read this and it was well worth the wait (chemistry.. ick) LOL But it was wonderful. as I've said amny times before you've got a nack for writting.. keep it up.. *ish impatient for the next chappie but will wait.. somehow... LOL

~The Lynster/Icy_princess
Krysta Lyn
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From ANON - mrs_accio_firebolt on November 01, 2005
Hello! First of all and so that I don't forget later on, INCLUDE ME ON THE UPDATE LIST... please.

I believe I told you some time ago that I didn't like fics with perfect Dracos or perfect Hermiones. And now, as I re-read this story, I'm amazed at how much I had previously read (maybe chapter 4)... and honestly, I didn't like it. I hope I even said "sorry".

And now, a few months after that, I proudly see you've been nominated and come back to give myself a second chance to see what other people had seen in your story that I had missed. I read chapter 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6. I took notes. I printed chapter 6 and took it home, reading while driving (don't yell at me, it's your fault), underlined some paragraphs, told a couple of friends about the story... and just one question remains: WAS I OUT OF MY F.... MIND WHEN I READ IT THE FIRST TIME?

I can't believe that I didn't like it. I just can't. If you ask me now, I could give you a thousand paragraphs I like. Why didn't I see them back then? I have just one possible reason: temporary madness.

Lorett, this story is fantastic. It's sweet, it's hot as hell, it's endearing, it's funny. You've deprived me of sleep. I refuse to EVER go to sleep again unless Draco is included in my bed. I love the smut scenes. LOVE them. I loved the Ophelia scene. I loved the blow-pop scene. I like the way they're trying to keep it a secret ... and failing.

I love Ginny, Harry and Ron. Have all of them noticed or just Ginny? What will Ron say? What will he do? With that terrible temper of his... I can only imagine.

I have an undecided mind on whether I support Hermione's decision to keep her virginity. I've never understood that. I mean, his fingers have been inside her. His mouth has been everywhere. What much more is there left to it? I've never understood girls that go THAT far with a guy, but refuse to go all the way. In my way of thinking, if you're planning to stay a virgin... then no rubbing, and absolutely no hands under the clothes. If you're prepared to see a naked guy, and to let a guy see you naked... then why stop? Don't misunderstand me. I like your story. And it includes a hestitating Hermione. I'm just stating my point of view. Last chapter was agony for Draco. SOOOO damn close. And the answer was "not yet". Aaaargh! How many guys can take that?

It may also mean that I secretly admire those girls for having some sense of will and control of themselves even in such moments... Maybe I envy that. But really, can somebody explain to me the difference between what they have been doing these last chapters and "going all the way"?????

Back to some more... literary conversation... I'm just surprised that you can write 2 Dracos. The one in Keys and this one. I know how much in love you're with him (aren't we all?), and they're both handsome and sexy.... but even so, they're different. I think of them as having different backgrounds... Does that make any sense?

Anyways, I love your story (had I already said that?) and will be looking forward to the next chapter.

Much love,
accio
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From ANON - T on November 01, 2005
I NEED MORE!!!
YOU COULD ALSO MAKE RON DO SOMETHING STUPID IF HE CATCHES THEM OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT!!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH THAT THERE HAS TO BE MORE!!!!
THERE JUST HAS TO BE!!!
ANYWAY THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS AMAZING STORY!!!!
GOOD LUCK WITH WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTERS!!!
I SAID IT CHAPTERS NOT CHAPTER!!!!!!
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