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By : lorettcopeland

From ANON - redhottamale on September 27, 2005
Wow. Yeah, lets say that again - WOW. This story is so great. Im in love with Draco and where can I find a man just like him. Hes endearing, he's sexy, he's sensitive, he's sweet, he's perfect. Can't wait for the update. Thanks for this, I'll be watching for new chapters.
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From ANON - luckigirl on September 27, 2005
Hey, this is a wonderful story. I read it all in one sitting. Can't wait for you to continue. Great job. Update soon.
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From ANON - dreamscapegal on September 27, 2005
My friend, Lemonlover demanded that I come over here and read your story and I am so very glad that I did. What a treat. I love your Draco and Hermione and the characterization is just suberb. I can't wait for them to 'do the deed.' I'm wondering if you'll wait till they're married? Well, I will be following along. Thanks for the fun. DSG
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From ANON - lemonlover on September 27, 2005
luvin the lemons baby

keep em coming

can't wait for the 'big show' i know it'll be hot

hurry and update soon, don't keep us waiting so long
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From ANON - joi on September 27, 2005
ACK!

LOVE IT. LOVE IT. LOVE IT.

THANKS FOR TAKING THIS STORY NICE AND SLOW. IT IS A TREAT THAT I DON'T OFTEN SEE. ENJOYING IT VERY MUCH AND HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON.
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From ANON - RahNee on September 26, 2005
[Ronnie breezes into the room happy to settle in and read the fabulous lemony fluffiness of Chapter 6 when she is suddenly absolutely gobsmacked at the INCREDIBLE dedication of this chapter to her. She stops to dab a tear from her eye (for no one has EVER dedicated anything to her before) and then THROWS HER ARMS AROUND YOU!]

Squeal! Oh Lorett, you just made my week, heck, my month, okay, okay, my entire year! Darling, I was happy, dare I say even eager, to listen to you tweak and agonize over this chapter. And while I am a fantastic actress (tooting my own horn) I did NOT need to fake my enthusiasm for your story.

But enough about me! LOL! Let's talk about this WONDERFUL CHAPPIE! Ah, how I loved In-A-Good-Mood-Draco with his winking at the girls and scheming about his intentions with the girl he loves. He's happy and terrified at the same time about finding he may just want to spend the rest of his life with Hermione! Whee!

Darling, I loved the whole scene with Ophelia the portrait. Such fantastic foreshadowing, no that's not right, but you know what I mean...forewarning? Quick, where's the thesaurus when you need one? Anyway, I loved that sad little moment of warning. Yes!

Oh my, Draco vs. Ginny! So utterly hilarious. Ginny has so got his number! But I must say, I would just LOVE to have Draco bound into my room without preamble and say in a sexy, husky tone, "Are you ready for me?" YES YES OMG YES!... Ahem, sorry 'bout that...

Oh how I loved the whole teaser that turned out to be NOT GOING ALL THE WAY but about flying! I loved it when you first told me the idea and I LOVE how it turned out! And so HOT! Draco can persuade me to go flying any time he wants...sigh. Ooops. There I go again.

OMG the whole scene after the flying was so damned sweet and fluffy and lemony and H-O-T!!! You already know my opinion about the "outercourse" scene! Fan-fricken-tastically hot! And the "I want you" moment after, poor Hermione so torn between sticking to her guns and giving in to her hormones (and Draco's). So angsty and yet so fabulously sweet when Draco tells her he will honor and respect her. And when he told her she was going to make one man a very lucky husband and she'd be a beautiful bride, well the "damn that is so amazingly sweetly sweet" meter blew it's top!

Bravo for NOT having them DO IT! Bravo for Hermione sticking to her values and not compromising them! Bravo for Draco being a gentleman and respecting her wishes! Bravo for realistic portrayal of the advancement of a physical relationship, and not some jump in the sack thing two seconds after we kiss for the first time scenario!

This story is my absolute favorite fluffy story. I love every tummy tingling moment, every pitter-pat of my heart enducing scene. I love the sexy pillow talk and all the fabulously delicious tasteful smut. I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT IT!

So...when will chapter 7 be on the block? I just can't wait!

I love you, my wonderful, darling twin-separated-at-birth-and-by-two-years! I am toasting this chapter with some 2 Buck Chuck and shattering the...oh damn these cheap plastic wine glasses...uh, dropping the glass on the floor and watching it bounce...yeah, that's it!

MWAP, Lorett dear. I LOVE YOU!
Ronnie
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From AyumiKoshiro on September 26, 2005
Looooooooove It.
Do i really need to say anymore?
-Ayumi-
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From ANON - curlyq2713 on September 25, 2005
ok, so, on friday, i started reading and got really into the story, then realized i had a train to catch. so the entire weekend i was waiting in anticpiation to read it, and yay! good chapter, gooood times. a lil disappointed that they didn't make love cuz ya know...they love each other. but oh well. UPDATE SOONER PLEASE, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD! waiting such long times for a good story like this SUCKS. hehe.

good chapter, can't wait till the next!

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From ANON - Alison on September 25, 2005
Heeere I am to save the daaaaaay!! My darrrlinnn Draco's on the waaaaaay! (Smashes bottle against the wall, continuing to sing raucously.) And Loreeeett has duh-uh-uhnnnne it agggaaaaiiin!! All this wiiiinnne is making my head spiiin!! (Takes out toothbrush and begins to scrub mouth furiously.) Whooee! When you say sweet, you mean sweet! This sweet and sour all-in-one - it's addictive! It hits you in that perfect spot, the place where the roof of your mouth tingles when you eat something totally unwholesome but completely delicious. Ah, fluff. Good old, lemon meringue pie. I think I just put on about ten pounds reading it.

But it was worth it! You realize this is the first time I've read this? But it's weird, as I worked through the first few chapters, I could have SWORN I read them before. Maybe I read it before I really got into fanfiction, before I created an account and got into the swing of reviewing and things. That's my guess, at least. I've got to hand it to you, babe, you really know how to make this stuff work. I usually don't read fluff just because there's so little that's actually GOOD out there, but this far and away surpasses all of it. There were so many pretty little lines in this last chapter, especially, and cute little moments between Herms and Drakes. Sigh....don't you wish this was real life, pure and simple? Have a guy to sweep you up in his arms and take you flying before bringing you back to bed? Mmm. (Sense a romantic here?)

I just have one little spot of confusion. I'm a little unsure of what Ginny was doing there. She and Hermione are friends, obviously, and she came to chat with Hermione before some emergency occurred and Hermione had to run off. But what was with the ecstacy potion? (Hah, like the drug? Is it illegal?) Was she giving it to Draco or had she already given it to Hermione? That was the only section I got a little lost in. There were so many riddles and half-guesses mixed in there the answer was hidden.

However, I have to quote back to you the brilliant lines with Ophelia. Seriously, they were tops: "'When you are young, you think you can achieve anything. No dream is too impossible to realize, and rarely do you worry about consequences. Youth fools you into believing that you may defy anyone and remain strong and unaffected. It lulls you into accepting a false truth, thinking if you are blessed enough to find love and foolishly let it go, that it will eventually find its way back to you. ...But that is not true, Draco. Yes, you can achieve what you desire, but rather than be defiant, be convicted in your goals. Convince others that your dream is worth fighting for, above anything else. And whatever you do, Draco, never, ever, let love slip through your fingers once you find it within your grasp.
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From ANON - Vashka on September 25, 2005
Aloha! Finally checking out your fic, gah, I have so much reading to do! Anyway, I like the start to this. A PWP with a plot, what a novel idea! Or at least, a nice, logical set up. I hate lemons without *any* sort of substance. I will definately be continuing this fic though! I loved the idea of Draco and his father turing spy and Hermione being his only friend for awhile. And that thing with Blaise- so funny! Getting him accecpted again was lovely but bittersweet for Hermione. Great job! Expect more reviews from me in the future.
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From ANON - Jianne on September 25, 2005
very passionate ...been following this story for a while ....love the newest chapter...thank you
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From cruttan on September 25, 2005
Private lessons from Draco! I am currently hyperventilating at the prospect. This chapter is just as amazingly sweet-and hot- as the rest. I loved the buildup to them flying together- and Draco is so sweet! I can't wait for to see what happens when they use the ecstasy potion. Ginny is a naughty one...

Love it- thank you so much for writing this AMAZING story!
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From ANON - luna luck on September 24, 2005
Oh my! Will need a cold shower after that.....very well written!Hope you update soon!
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From ANON - Freya on September 24, 2005
ok i changed my sn from plooshgirl to dracosbaby07

no review time...
OMFG I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! i would SO take ANY lesson form Draco!!! holy crap!! the best yet!!! now all you hve to do is update and i be happy!!!!!! YAY!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update now!!!!

Freya
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From ANON - Rain on September 24, 2005
Lorett~

You naughty naughty girl. My mind was so not thinking flying and I know you deliberately wrote the w hole beginning in such a way that I would be all worked up and then go AWWWW how sweet. You vixin you!

I really really liked the whole flying thing. It added a whole new dimension to their relationship. Malfoy isn't just declairing his love with sweet sappy words (though he used plenty of those) it's obvious that it's real for him. He cares about her so much that he is desperate to share his passions with her. And rubbing it in Ron's face is an added bonus.

I also liked the smut, obviously. I like the little twist that Hermione wants to wait until she is married. That is very her. And Draco's consideration of her wishes but letting her know that he does desire her was very well done.

Rain
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