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Reviews for Vengeance

By : Vashka
  • From ANON - chubs on December 29, 2005
    gosh dangit! update already! not to rush you or anything, but i have been waiting FOREVER! please update. your my favorite story. seriously. update.
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  • From ANON - Kewlpoohgirl on December 22, 2005
    AH! HORRIBLE ENDING TO THIS CHAPTER! well i mean great but it's got me yearning for the next one. lol Please update soon because i wanna see if Hermione joins Draco. XD
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  • From ANON - chybby on December 12, 2005
    NEXT CHAPTER!!!! OMG! this is my favorite story. please update soon! i feel like im gonna die if i dont find out what happens! excellent story by the by.
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  • From ANON - Bri on November 28, 2005
    I really liked the way you discribed th tahisen dancing. Sorry, i don't know how to spell. Anyway, the descripion was right on. i do that kind of dance, w/ the poi balls nd everything, so iit's nice when someone shows true pprciation for it. Most people just hink it's some kind of weird hula, they don't get the spped and the rythem, and the movemeents of it.
    I just wanted to say howmuch I am enjoying reading this. You have actually built up a plot. It's much funner this way instead of just writing a plot and giving the characters the names Draco and Hermione. Here you have still kept the essence of the characters JK Rowling creraed. so good job! I'm lokking forward to the rest, so Im gonna go back to the story now.
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  • From ANON - Rain on November 27, 2005
    Girl, now you have me on the edge of my seat wondering what on earthh you are going to go next. Naughty images of naked skin dancing like surger plums in my head! I adore this story. The orb, a matchmaker, how cute.

    Please continue soon, hope RL is looking up.

    Rain
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  • From ANON - elle6778 on November 27, 2005
    I can't believe you left us with such a cliffie *whines*. Loved the story and the way everything is set up. Draco and Hermione's development was gradual enough for it to be realistic. Great buildup to this chapter. The orb's really amusing as well, lol! I was wondering if you do email alerts when you update. If you do, can you put me on your list so that I know when you update? Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Amada on November 27, 2005
    This story is amazing! I love it and was thrilled to find you had updated. Wonderful job! Congrats on the engagement and I am sorry about your grandfather. Once again, amazing story. I hope you update soon. :D
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  • From ANON - Tyronica on November 27, 2005
    Mmm. That chapter was tasty!
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  • From ANON - lemonade on November 27, 2005
    Well!! What on earth is she waiting for? Jump in, girl!! Lick that six pack!! *LOL* At this point the only thing she has to lose is some tension. That's MY sage advice at least. ;D I have to say I'm enjoying your orb. It's a LITTLE like the one from the Belgariad. Except you don't have it kill people who innocently touch it. Yet. ;D

    I hope Draco gets to go home and make sure his Mom is okay. Isn't she still trapped in Malfoy manor? He must be worried sick. I don't know how he will become an animagus so quickly, though. Does Hermione have a short cut? Or was there a potion short cut, if I remember correctly. I could just be reading into things. (I also wish you could answer questions on this forum, but *sigh* no dice)

    Am liking this and can't wait until you uncliff us in the next chapter.
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  • From cruttan on November 26, 2005
    Vashka you little tease! I may need to go take a cold shower now. *fans self*

    Seriously though, that was intense. You write a mean Draco, lady. In a very good way. I love the relationship between Hermione and Draco. It's so volatile! I love the ups and downs, all the different emotions that pass between them. There are the lust and the attraction, but also all different levels and varieties of affection, including some brilliant humor! I was giggling throughout a lot of the brief scenes of their arguments. It's wonderful how you can insert a bit of "cute" while keeping the more serious tone of the story.

    Wow, I'm totally rambling tonight. I haven't slept in about three days, so I must apologize for the totally incoherent nature of my thoughts, but I did enjoy it SO much that I'm going to continue.

    The orb! I love the way that orb functions in the story. Every time it plants some sort of vision or emotion into one of their minds I cackle gleefully. It's wonderful! Like little sneak peeks of what could be to come- only the most delightful bits.

    The updates are definitely worth waiting for, because your story is amazing!

    I may leave another review at a later date when I feel more conscious, but I do want you to know how VERY much I am enjoying your writing. *hugs you*
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  • From ANON - Stacy on November 25, 2005
    Great chapter!
    I loved it!!!
    BTW-Thats so cool, you got engaged!
    and sorry about your grandfather.
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  • From ANON - curlyq2713 on November 24, 2005
    yay, congrats on the engagement. sorry bout the death and spasms :-(

    so happy you updated, good chapter! update soon please :-)
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  • From ANON - NAR on November 24, 2005
    I don't think I've read any story with such deep plot in a long time, never mind plot that was so well done. It was very original and highly entertaining. You kept my on the edge of my seat throughout the whole story. You write such beautiful prose-- I'm envious! That was an evil cliffhanger, and I demand that you update and put me on your update list. Again, excellent, excellent job.
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  • From ANON - fiona on November 24, 2005
    i love this story!! great chapter! i hope there will be another chapter up soon! i am sorry to hear about your grandfather and your spasms. i hope you feel better soon.:) On a happier note congrats on the engagement!!!
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  • From ANON - --- on November 24, 2005
    ooOOooo I wonder what will happen next?? :D
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