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Reviews for Vengeance

By : Vashka
  • From cruttan on September 30, 2005
    This is only the second or third time that I can remember being moved to actual tears by fanfic. The scene with Draco and his mother was so beautifully written. The shock of her dropping the mask was very moving, and when he was being tortured and mentally said goodbye to her- it was a twist of the knife. I have never been successful in creating these types of situations without pushing it past Melodrama, so I am both impressed and envious.

    I think that what made it so powerful was how much respect I had for Draco's character throughout the entire chapter. He was so noble, but in such a subtle way that kept him from going OOC.

    *salutes you*
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  • From ANON - glenda on September 21, 2005
    Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, please, please update
    it is really a great story, so interesting and the caracters are just like Rowling
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 05, 2005
    Great job! Mighty great fic!
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  • From ANON - mendie on September 03, 2005
    this story is just awesome. one of the best harry potter fanfics i have read so far. very good job, please never stop writing!
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  • From ANON - Kewlpoohgirl on September 03, 2005
    OMG!!! This was such a great chapter (8). I really loved Draco and his mother's relationship. It was heartwrenching to think Draco was going to die. I also really liked the flashback and the fact that Draco and Hermione had some sort of connection in the past beyond just enemies. =D and of course the ending!!! It has me *DYING* for the next chapter so please please please update soon!
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  • From ANON - lynz on September 02, 2005
    i thought this story was grand well written. and im hoping to see more of it. i've no real suggestions to make just that when you write the next installment let me know :)

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  • From ANON - emily on September 01, 2005
    I've never reviewed and i'm not really sure what it entails so I'll just wing it. I think you're very talented and I like your plot line. You are building on elements of the original but it's your own. Not many people have been able to do that. I hope chapter 9 comes up soon! Have a great day, and best wishes,
    Emily
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  • From ANON - elektrik_storm on September 01, 2005
    i admit that i felt skeptical when i began your fic but now i am completely hooked! it is fantastically written and i love your descriptions!

    please update soon i want to know what happens next lol!

    E_S
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  • From ANON - curlyq2713 on August 31, 2005
    ooh, i hope hermione helps draco to not die hehe. he knows she's the theif!! woaaah, can't wait to see what happens next. update soon please :-D
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on August 30, 2005
    Excellent story! I loved reading it and I'm really hoping more is coming soon!
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  • From ANON - fan on August 30, 2005
    WOW! This is SO great! I love this story so much! plz update soon!
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  • From ANON - Tina on August 21, 2005
    Wow. I believe you are very right in Hermione's case. I also think she would never, ever, be stupid enough to not consider all the posibilities of the war, as well as the chances and all. I'm glad you wrote this, I was getting tired of stories where Hermione is caught or murdered in the last battle. Although I must say, if and only if Hermione would somehow be in one of those situations, it would be definetly before the last battle, because there are more chances of killing or capturing her during an ambush or something of the sorts that during something previewed.
    Also, the thief thing was amazing. I find myself surprised by the fact that she, indeed, could be the perfect thief. She is clever, so she'll use every ook she has in hands. She is a relatively small girl, so she can glitter trough walls and traps with ease. She is also cunning, so she can make last-minute excape plans. There was a small problem in all this and you took care of it as well. Of course, I'm talking about the fact that she isn't very much trained in the prospect; Tonks and Shacklebot came in scene and all went fine. I'm amazed.
    Congratilations for a very fine story! I can't wait for the smut^_~
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  • From ANON - Kewlpoohgirl on August 11, 2005
    omg!! *heart flutters* I love draco and hermione in your fic. Love the chapter and I can't wait for the next update. =D
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  • From ANON - curlyq2713 on August 10, 2005
    yay. please update sooner. that'd be greeaaaat.
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  • From ANON - JUJI on August 09, 2005
    U really need to update more often. I completely forget about this story with no regular updates. It's really good writing and I enjoy the plot. Update sooner then a few weeks.
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