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Reviews for Vengeance

By : Vashka
  • From ANON - jenn on February 09, 2005
    Well, I'm in. :) I love your premise and you know how to establish sexual tension like no one else. Keep me riding.
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  • From ANON - Andrea on February 09, 2005
    Oh, Hermione comes across brilliantly. I never really give much thought to what might happen if Harry were to lose (Gods forbid), but I certainly cringe every time I see the set up of Hermione reverting to the world's oldest profession to survive. Of course she would have a back up plan, she's as gracious as a Hufflepuff, as intelligent as a Ravenclaw, as cunning as a Slytherin, and as brave as a Gryffindor. Our little Hermione would not be sitting on her ass planning Harry's victory party. Voldermort our paranoid tyrant, very nice touch, I could definitely see him needing someone to be fighting, he's been at the good vs. evil game way to long to just let it go. The little scene with Blaise and Draco as Crabbe and Goyle made me smile, not to mention each duo is the opposite of each other: D/B very asture, aristocratic, collected and C/G are usually portrayed as the dazed idiots; very very nice. There's thievery afoot, I can't wait to see how that little plot element unfolds and just how my favorite non-couple (at the moment) is involved. Lovely background and a good setup, I expect to see this updated regularily...I'll be very disappointed if it's not.
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  • From ANON - mish on February 08, 2005
    come on grl! update! i looooove this story! update!!
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on February 07, 2005
    Awesome! He knows it's her--obsessive little ponce isn't he! To know it's here without evidential proof! He mocks himself! I cannot wait till you post your next offering of "Vengeance"!
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  • From ANON - Eloradanin on February 07, 2005
    great story update soon, please
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  • From ANON - trixrstrange on February 06, 2005
    *blinks* hubba hubba, Hermione's built! *clears throat.... _> Anyways. Brilliant bit of a FF, can't wait to read more. I always do love a good thief story. And this one is no exception. Oh, and please do add more of that dishy Lord Zabini, after all.. e' siempre qui calmi!

    Love, Hugs and Bludgers,

    Trix ^_^
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  • From ANON - leah on February 05, 2005
    oooooo that was good! I frikin love the story! keep it coming man! you can't just leave us on a cliffy like that!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 05, 2005
    kudos to you for writing this fic! yay for hermione... she is so much smarter than some of the aff.net authors give her credit for! I often wonder what has happened to canon hermione in some of the stories out there. This was a particularly intense chapter. you described the atmosphere, mood, and costumes quite vividly... i love how draco sensed her presence at the end, though it was a bit predictable. however, the fact that you allude to the notion that he's had something for hermione since hogwarts sets up a new challenge for your next chapter. i'm curious to see what will happen! update soon, i'll be waiting to read and review!
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  • From ANON - June on February 05, 2005
    Ch 2 - thanks for updating! I'm really curious about this Goddess
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  • From ANON - CWolf on February 05, 2005
    I agree, in these types of stories people totally kill Hermione's character. I mean most of the stories out there are way OOC. Lovely job, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - anon on February 05, 2005
    oh my god you have GOT to update soon! excellent story
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  • From ANON - amniarix on February 05, 2005
    Well its a very original opening chapter. Definitely not the usual situation, I would be interested to see where you take the story from here.
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  • From CatHound on February 05, 2005
    This is a very good start to what i hope will be a very good story. I was a little disapointed when i heard Ginny (My farourive character) died but i well...

    The weaslys all fell as one
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  • From ANON - aglaia on February 04, 2005
    ooh! very enticing, dear!
    I do hope you don't abandon it, it's a very interesting concept.
    hope you post again soon!
    lia
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  • From ANON - June on February 04, 2005
    Ch 1 - very nice! I wonder what that secret object is, and what happened to Severus Snape. It would be nice if Hermione could figure out a way to heal all those Dementor-ized Resistance members. Yes, let Draco lose - as vengeance for what he did to McGonagall, etc. More, please!
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