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Reviews for Black Eden

By : sabbitha
  • From NymphyFate on May 22, 2008
    Great chapter 9, can't wait to see when/what you update with. :D Keep it up, you're a wonderful writer! XD

    Love,
    Nymphy Fate.
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  • From storylistener on September 06, 2007
    Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, interesting. This is pretty good! Do tell me when you write more, won't you? Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Cammi on August 08, 2005
    Hey could we get more of this stroy cues I liek it thus far, well thought out and typed, I would not have carred about eth grammer if I had typed it, so could we like get oh ten more chapters hu?
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 03, 2005
    I can't wait for chapter 10! Siri was rather cold. And yet later he seems to care so deeply for his godson. Hmm. Wonder if its because he looks so much like James.
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  • From ANON - YamiNoWedge on August 02, 2005
    You suck. Okay, no you don't, but you seemed to want to be told that. *sighs modestly* it's my way of giving, really... Anywho, I like your story! And I'm sorry about the whole moving-and-not-having-internet thing. Please update more quickly next time (you have no excuse not to) and good luck! ^_^

    Mechante
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  • From ANON - chi no hana on August 02, 2005
    wooooooooooooow! first chapter is coooool! but you reall yneed to either work on your french or get a new translator... not many spelling mistakes, but the syntaxe isn't exactly peachy... ( that was just some advice! )
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  • From ANON - Els on July 17, 2005
    I am hooked. HOOKED! And I'm bloody leaving for two weeks of sans-internet holidaying tomorrow... *grumbles*

    I love this story. I adore vampire anything (though het-vampires are a bit squicky... I mean, come on! Does that not simply *scream* crime-against-nature? Vampires are gay, you hear? GAY. (I think I'm speaking to a convert... xD)), and Draco/Harry with either one (or better yet, both) as a vampire is a dream come true. Unless the writing is horrible, which is most certainly not the case with Black Eden.

    I love your Lucius in the memory. For once, he has feelings! Very nice, for once. And Narcissa was sufficiently nasty. (I've never been a huge fan of hers.) And was that Severus/Lily -hintage I saw there? Oooooooh, that would be rather nice...

    (Yes, I am aware of the fact that I am making no sense... But it *is* past midnight, so it's the night-time crazy-energy kicking in, not my innate weirdness slipping out of control... *tries to be convincing*)

    The walk down memory lane thingy is intriguing. And fics with someone in a coma always have a tendency to be delicious!

    I demand more fic. You'll post the next chapter today, right? *tries bambieyes, but moves on to bribery by means of chocolate and naked men when simpler methods do not work*
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  • From ANON - Cleresta on June 04, 2005
    More please!
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  • From ANON - MadEyeMax on May 16, 2005
    Just finished the first chapter. That was nice. I always love to read about Harry and Draco discovering and exploring their *eh-hem* need for one another. Very hot. I think I need a cigarette.
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  • From ANON - yana on April 29, 2005
    It was a short chappie, but nice.
    update soon.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on April 28, 2005
    Can't wait for chapter 9! Please hurry! How will they explain Harry's absence to Draco?
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  • From ANON - Lady X on April 27, 2005
    Wow this is a good story. I really like it alot.I can't wait for the next update! If it wouldn't be to much of a problem could you please e-mail me when you update?? it would muchly appreciate it and will review faster if you did.
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  • From ANON - Alexa on April 27, 2005
    Nice how you got out of that Light/Dark problem. Makes sence.
    About the bloody animal - I'm puzzled. And a bit worried. What does it mean?
    Keep writing and posting - please! :-)
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  • From ANON - Alexa on April 24, 2005
    Love the story. So captivating!

    But, I do have a complaint. When Sirius says: "You will question where your loyalties lie and decide whether there is really a Light and Dark side, or if there are only shades of gray. The people who you've trusted, without question, will now be questioned for ulterior motives. It will be up to you, to decide. It will be up to you whether the Dark is subsided and conquered by the Light, or if the Light will be overshadowed by the Dark. Only you, Harry."
    You begin to breack that childish binary of "Dark" and "Light" but then you swiftly return to in, by saying "It will be up to you whether the Dark is subsided and conquered by the Light, or if the Light will be overshadowed by the Dark". Then why even tease us with the possibility of gray? And if after seeing all the memories, Harry will eventually still use that binary, what is the point in the memories? Aren't they supposed to make it possible to see gray and live in a gray world? Or will he just admit that there are gray shades, but end up acting as if there is only "Dark" and "Light"?

    Regardless, I do love the story, and very much enjoy reading it! Thank you! KEEP WRITING PLEASE!!! :-)
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  • From ANON - ooo on April 18, 2005
    lol this is great plz update!
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