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Reviews for Obscurity

By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - Luvtracker on May 14, 2015
    I think that Hermione's mom was just within her right to stop her from going out alone. And Hermione's a bitch. What's up with arguing with her savior.
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  • From ANON - LuvTracker on May 14, 2015
    Well, that was a dumb move. Why not go inside the loo and call you parents or better yet...TEXT them instead of going out alone. For someone who supposedly intelligent, you wrote the most stupid Hermione.
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  • From ANON - msmdhr on January 13, 2014
    I REALLY like the way you write. is both funny and clever. and i like this story very much, also.
    i really hope you update soon, along with jealousy, that i read in ff.net (:
    Cheers and congrats!
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  • From ANON - Siona on December 17, 2013
    This is the best fan fiction I've ever read! And I've pretty much read all of them so that's saying a lot. So disappointed that you have apparently abandoned this story :( is there anything we can do to get another chapter??? Please????
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  • From ANON - LadyFireCrab on November 22, 2013
    I absolutely fucking love this story and can't wait for you to post another chapter! I've now also read all your one shots and everything you have so far on your longer stories.
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  • From ANON - fel on October 23, 2012
    Please keep going. This is good.
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  • From Regin on April 16, 2011
    I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!
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  • From RZZMG1111 on January 10, 2010
    Is there anymore to this story? I'd love to read the rest. Please update, if not!
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  • From ScarletSnow on October 02, 2009
    I'm liking the story so far, but there are things that stand out and most of it is your spelling errors, even in the chapters that you have had run through your beta testers.

    On the up side, at least you don't spell "Neville" "Navel" as I've seen in some other fanfictions around here.

    Please keep up the good work, but have your beta testers pay closer attention. Words like 'vial' are spelled wrong (spelled 'vile') and the meaning gets skewed if you don't read carefully enough. Also, Pansy Parkinson's last name is misspelled several times as are a few of the spells in the story.

    The errors detract from the overall flow of the story, but the plot is still solid enough to keep readers interested.
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  • From MrsDracoMalfoy93 on September 29, 2009
    hi i really really like this story is there gonna be an update soon or is this going to be an abandoned story because i really really like this story.
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  • From on September 26, 2009
    This is a great story! Are you going to finish it?
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  • From katiekrm on August 30, 2009
    I read this a really long time ago and have read many Dramione's since. This is my favorite Dramione! That is saying alot b/c I have read a lot of good ones. I really wish you would come back to this.
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  • From ebonyeyez1 on August 14, 2009
    Outstanding story, eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!
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  • From permione on August 03, 2009
    I adore this story, I really do!

    The plot is fantastic, I love the idea of Hermione heading up a grassroots movement - it totally makes sense. I have also griped about how JKR privileges the wizarding world - of course I understand, that's what the books are about, 'Harry Potter' not 'Hermione Granger'. But this is just amazing.

    Honestly, if you need another beta, I am offering up my services if that means it will help with updates.

    Awesome story!


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  • From jade2099 on July 03, 2009
    Oh I hope you haven't abandoned this story. I saw it on a list of the top 10 Dramione stories...and I am hooked! I really like a strong Hermione - though I have to admit that you have written her (rightly so, I might add) as a bit of a self-righteous fanatic. It's hard to like her sometimes as a character and it's hard to imagine why Draco would fall for her. At the same time it makes for very compelling drama. :) Hope you update soon! :)
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