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Reviews for Obscurity

By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - Sommer on September 22, 2005
    Really, Really good chapter
    update soon please
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  • From ANON - blumvale on September 22, 2005
    YAY!!!! I'm so glad you updated!!!! This is a good chapter. With all the plot advancments it's nice to see how sweet Malfoy can be to Hermione. Even when they fight it shows how much he cares for her! I love it!
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  • From ANON - yaness on September 22, 2005
    i love your story
    you should update more often
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  • From ANON - lorett on September 22, 2005
    RAIN -

    Running in and kissing you on both cheeks. How continental of me.

    You're MOST WELCOME for the beat-love. ANYTIME, seriously. And BRAVO for the additional, smooching scene.

    LOVED IT. The perfect little addition to end the chapter nicely.

    Your Draco...WOW. I just adore him. And a flustered Hermione is always sweet when Draco turns on the romance. That charmer! LOL.

    Oh and can't forget to mention, you guys with your acronyms. You, SJ, Neffy, Ronnie...You guys kill me. WHY can't I be clever like that too?

    Disgruntled sigh.

    Ah well.

    Loved the chapter.

    Love the story.

    Love you too.

    Can't - CAN NOT WAIT for JEALOUSY! WHEE!

    Anyway, if you'd like me to take a beta read through as well, or anytime, I'm here for you love.

    SMOOCHES AND HUGS

    L
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  • From ANON - LaLa on September 22, 2005
    Oh. That was so sweet. Continue soon.
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  • From cruttan on September 22, 2005
    The chapter is wonderful! I really enjoyed the teaser with Ron and Pansy- I have enjoyed the complexity of the Ron factor throughout the story. It's cool that your Ron is not a typical extreme- a total ass or a suddenly platonic friend- and I think what you have done with that whole part of the story really strengthens it. And I loved the last scene between Draco and Hermione- sigh...

    It made my day to read the update- thanks!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on September 22, 2005
    Love the story please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Red on September 16, 2005
    Just found this wonderful , beautiful story ! You need to write more of it now because I can't wait to see what happens next. This is one of the first stories I have ever read where I actually believe that Draco could be a good person.
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  • From ANON - Serentipity01 on September 15, 2005
    Oh wow! I am so glad that there are fanfic writers like you out there - you just got me completely sucked into the story, I read through to chapter 8 in one go and now I'm all figety and can't wait for you to continue! You're right, Draco all possessive and noble concerning Hermione while still being his aristocratic self is a major turn-on! I absolutely love it! Don't worry about the story not being HBP compatible, nobody cares about that when there's such a Draco to obsess over ;)
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  • From ANON - kurtcouper on September 15, 2005
    I've never experienced a story like this. I feel like I'm drowning with Hermione in a sea of unknowing and intrigue. He offers her no answers, but gives her what he can give-himself. God, it's gorgeous. How he'd do anything! for her. Just...you're a fantastic writer and I need you to continue this. The plot is refreshing and god, i love it. I can't wait for the next part.
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  • From malfoysvixen on September 12, 2005
    love it love it love it!! Update asap! Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - gra on September 11, 2005
    where's the next chapter?! i've been checking this story religiously for an update. PLEASE UPDATE
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  • From ANON - pinky on September 07, 2005
    beat story ever
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  • From ANON - Isola on September 07, 2005
    Y'know, Rain, I'm in the most boring occupation on the planet. I spend my days placing undeserving ratfinks in depressing jobs, earning peanuts to boot, and the only thing to make me feel a bit better is sneakily reading your stories during work hours. So could you please, please PLEASE (with hundreds and thousands on top) update soon?? Both Obscurity and Jealousy are amazing, and I need to read more!
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  • From ANON - Katie on September 05, 2005
    Okay, wow, finally finished all eight chapters and I got to say, that was awesome! I love this story! The only thing I could say is that it is lacking in the smut department a bit. But still wonderfully written! Great job.
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