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Reviews for Obscurity

By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - Syndal on August 14, 2005
    Usually, it's very hard for me to find a fic I like. Soemtimes things are much to short, or far to long. I like being able to sit down and catch the whole thing in one sitting, and hate it venhemently when things end and aren't finished.

    You're story was 8 chapters, fairly long and as of now unfinished, however it is thankfully still in the process of be updated. It's taken me two sittings to read up to this point due to work, sleep and plain lack of time. However, I throughly enjoyed every word. I found myself beating my boyfriend originally for losing my webpage of your fic, and then diligently setting out to find it in the morning. It's difficult to find a captivating Hr/D fic simply because of how oppisite they are. Thank you for writing this, and for being as talented as you are.

    I will now indefiantly comment on all other chapters that you write, and I look forward to reading them. Remember to take your time and rush for no one. Genius takes time. :) Muses like chocolate, air conditioning and lots of love.

    I can't wait until chapter 9!

    ~S
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  • From ANON - Lala on August 12, 2005
    Awesome! You're an excellent writer and you kept me very engaged in the entire plot. You're absolutely correct - this is fan fiction and you don't have to stick to the rules - rock on and keep up the fabulous work. Your HG/DM stories are some of the best!
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  • From ANON - Nelp-xan on August 10, 2005
    OMG...I just realized that that was the last chapter u.u... I am sooo into this story, so please update as soon as you can.. I am truly enjoying it ^^.. Could you please e-mail me and tell me when you update? Thanx.
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  • From ANON - geo on August 09, 2005
    I love this story! It is very original and the awesome plot brings life into the sotry. You are really good at creating new aspects to the characters. This is soooooo awesome. Reading it brings me into an entirely different world! Thanks soooo much!

    geo
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  • From ANON - anja on August 08, 2005
    Amazing story. I was so disapointed to come to a last chapter. Your story is obviously well thought out. I've enjoyed every moment so far:)
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  • From ANON - april ryan on August 08, 2005
    Just wondering if you have an email list or something that can tell us when you've updated?
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  • From ANON - april ryan on August 07, 2005
    Wow, I have really enjoyed your story... it's a different twist on the typical fanfiction Draco, and I like him a lot. This is honestly one of the best stories I've read in a while, and the first time I ever felt compelled to review. I hope you will continue with this one, because I look forward to seeing where it will lead. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Always_In_The_Dark on August 06, 2005
    How do you do it?? You have got to be one of the only authors who can have me so completly wrapped up in the story that I will forget all else. Please keep going. This story is fantastic. Although Im worried about Ron, you're not gonna make Hermione break his heart are you, cause thats always so sad. Oh well if it happens it happens. All chapters were top notch. Everything kicks ass!!!!
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  • From ANON - Meredith on August 06, 2005
    I love it! Please keep it coming. Very interesting insights and super hot lovin'.
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  • From ANON - Katelyn on August 06, 2005
    Your story is awesome! I read way too many fanfics for my own good, lol, but your is one of the best. The characters are realistic and well-developed and the story itself is very intriguing. Me like! :-D
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  • From ANON - MaryP! on August 06, 2005
    Please continue. It's great!!!
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  • From ANON - flynn on August 06, 2005
    i'm really enjoying your fic so far. i admire you tactics in revealing information without forcing the characters to talk through every niggling detail. for example, ron's mental diatribe on hermione's self-defense made it blatantly clear that while he may admire her abilities, there is no way he would probably ever be able to confess his (pissant) feelings for hermione or accept her as a woman of strength in a romantic setting. another example from about the same time in the story is draco's casual comment on how hermione never used to run. it such a subtle touch that conveys that yes, he has been paying attention, he has been watching her, he knows her habits and schedules and this is in no way a new thing. his rant in your latest chapter saying something like, "ask me to die for you, ask me to kill for you, but don't ask me to help put you in harm's way" (i suck at paraphrasing) it really sounded like someone obsessively infatuated with her. not inlove, because i don't think loving someone as grounded and upright as hermione would require such desperate actions, (although they're great in hyperbole-_-) but honest to goodnessly head over heels in like that he doesn't know how to handle anything, including himself. i will be very interested to see how you choose to progress the relationship.

    aside from the analytical stuff, it got me hot, bothered and gave me that really good squicky abdomen-twisting feeling of good fluff.

    great job~_-
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  • From ANON - Sunny June on August 06, 2005
    Hey Rain . . . whatever that one person said about Hermione being weak and to susceptible to Malfoy's orders . . . psha, whatever. . . Even strong girls become weak when emotions and feelings and men are concerned - it takes a hard lesson to garner the strength to say no, even if it's a mistake to say so . . . so whatever that person said, again, psha whatever. . . This is a high emotion intense story! I would be quick to believe that if Hermione's family had been threatened, then she would lose a little bit of her natural color but that her drive to do right would be that much stronger . . . I think you're doing a great job with this story and don't let one or two silly reviewers get you down. If that were the case, I'd have had to abandon fanfiction months ago for 'crappy stories and confusing lines and out of character lameness' . . . Keep on keepin' on! You're doing great! I love it!

    SJ
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  • From ANON - Maureen (CloudySkieZ) on August 05, 2005
    This is one of my most favoritist stories on this friggin website. I might have said that already, but that doesnt make it less true. I practically wept!

    I think I reviewed already, but im doin it again!

    Mo
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  • From ANON - Lorett on August 05, 2005
    CH 8 -

    RAIN!

    LOL! I'm SO, SO SORRY. I thought I'd reviewed the other day and I didn't! Bad me!

    Anyway, amazing chapter darling! I loved it and Draco...WOW. His power, his devotion to Hermione and keeping her safe.

    The way Hermione chose not to examine Draco's revelations to her too closely in front of him, least she show some kind of emotion that she's not ready for him to see!

    Sigh!

    Love it!

    Wonderfully done and I don't think that Draco was too ooc. I mean, him being with and into Hermione is enough OOC for us! And we don't care, right? We love him anyway! So, this just went along beautifully and the words were captivating and emotional and beautiful.

    Great job, as always darlin, you're one of the best!

    Can't wait for the next chapter...and hey - how's bout a little JEALOUSY! My FAV of your stories!

    MWAP!

    L
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