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By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - Charlottte on August 03, 2005
    Please, PLEASE keep updating this story. I am totally addicted to it! And update quickly!!!! Thanks!!!
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  • From ANON - slyswn on August 03, 2005
    It's brilliant and I envy you once again... rock on!
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  • From ANON - katie on August 02, 2005
    oh gosh! this is fast becoming one of my very favorite stories! ohhh! cant wait for the next chapter!
    keep it up cause i'm hooked! :)
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  • From ANON - April on August 02, 2005
    "...It rocks or something." Ha, yeah. I'm really digging the story and the plot. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Ivy on August 02, 2005
    I've been keeping up with your story please please keep writing!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sara on August 02, 2005
    Hey! i really like your story and the way that you've shown the relationship between Draco and Hermione but i think that maybe his 'powers' on her are just a bit too unrealistic. like kissing her makes her do anything he wants and she stops being angry etc. i think it would suit hermoin's character better if she wasn't so helpless against him. it isn't like that in real life anyway.......nevermind how good he is. Update soon, you're a good writer!
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  • From ANON - Maureen on August 02, 2005
    I love love love love love this story! Draco and Hermione are just....such a conundrum. I dont know if thats the right word, but hey, it might work in that context.

    The last few lines about Hermiones death and funeral....brought tears to my eyes. It was so beautifully written!

    Im glad to see you updated and I hope to read more, soon!

    Mo
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  • From ANON - Liz on August 02, 2005
    It totally rocked! I was very happy to get your e-mail that you had updated and I was not disappointed when I read it. I have been let down recently by the fanfic that had been popping up, so it was a welcome read to get your update. Still great!!! I can't wait to see where this goes and if you could update soon (writer's block hopefully leaving you alone), I would be soooooooooooooooooo pleased.
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  • From ANON - brownpaperbag on August 02, 2005
    It definitely rocks. I like the whole thing with the complex issues.
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  • From ANON - jadering on August 02, 2005
    I just discovered your story today, and I absolutely love it! I like the direction you're taking the characters into, and that there's a point to why everybody is doing what they are doing. You don't stick scenes in there just because you don't know what to write...you actually have a point. Great job! Now where's the next chapter? ;)
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  • From ANON - Nina on August 02, 2005
    good stuff good stuff!!! i luv yur draco/hermione fics and i'm dying for you to update your other one (aka jealousy)
    keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Stag on August 02, 2005
    So far, I am frapping loving the possessive Draco. Please keep that up. :)
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  • From ANON - Joanna on August 02, 2005
    Yep! She continued! Brilliant & thanks a lot...I DO like it more and more...please don't wait that long again *g*...
    I like the "problems" you created...poor Hermione & poor Draco...hope to hear more soon, okay?!
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  • From ANON - lunastar on August 02, 2005
    GRRRRR...... you had to leave it there. I had forgotten I had read this story.
    If you could, e-mail me when you update again. I am definitely going to have
    to keep my eyes on you. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Amber on August 02, 2005
    I really am enjoying your story so far. You have a good grasp of writing which can be rare in fanfiction. My only recommendation would be to watch your spelling on things like "strait" to "straight" and such. I know these are easy mistakes to make so please don't take that as a critical remark. I also love your Draco dirty talk; it's just terrific! Please update soon.
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