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By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - a_reader on June 21, 2005
    Oh, just wonderful. Enjoying very much, thank you :)
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  • From ANON - ~Kat~ on June 21, 2005
    Damn it!! You have got me hooked on this fic!!! I keep checking to see if you have updated reciently but every time i come on and you haven't it sucks... I need more! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Joanna on June 20, 2005
    Rain!
    Great story - really... I'm very peckish about what I read especially with HP Fanfiction & especially when it's found on AdultFanFiction...
    BUT! you did it. I mean, I'm writing myself - though mostly in german - and love the characters you chose...Hermione (Hermine in german by the way *g*) and Draco seem so perfect - because there's no real reason why it should work out... so PLEASE! Hurry up! *g* I want to read how it ends for you - and for them...
    I like the idea of wandless magic very much.
    Also: you're not twisting the characters in a way they would never ever react & do things...
    Well done!
    Joanna
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  • From ANON - Jess on June 17, 2005
    This is really good so far. I find the plot very interesting. I will definitely be looking forward to when you update next.
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  • From ANON - Maureen on June 16, 2005
    Holy jesus! So loving this damn fic! I hope to all things holy (and not so holy) that you update as soon as humanly possible because it is soooooo hard finding a good fic like this out on the internet.

    *fans herself and wiggles in her chair*

    Time for a cold shower....fucking Draco Malfoy....

    M
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  • From ANON - moxie on June 16, 2005
    Love it. Love it. Love it. please update soon!
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  • From ANON - RahNee on June 15, 2005
    OK, I have a few more comments about Chapter 7, 'cause I just had to re-read it after I left my short (what can I say...I'm pretty tired tonight) review...

    I loved Possesive Draco...how he hated that all the guys were looking at her in class. He has got it bad!

    When he asked her if she had thought about him, and had she touched herself, and then she said it wasn't as good as when he touched her...well it was SO HOT that I melted into a puddle of goo. Seriously. We're talking needing-a-cold-shower kind of HOT here.

    LOVE IT. You are a wonderful writer, darling!

    Ronnie
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  • From ANON - RahNee on June 15, 2005
    Oh Rain! I thought Chapter 7 was so hot! Loved it. I laughed at Hermione's very bad day. I sure ended well, though...

    I loved that she could think of all the reasons she was with Draco in her head but could only say "I don't know"

    This is a great story...can't wait for your next update!

    Ronnie
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  • From ANON - Gracie on June 14, 2005
    Chapter 7

    Oh Em Gee. This is one of my favorite chapters so far. Jealous Hermione
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  • From ANON - Gracie on June 14, 2005
    Chapter 6

    Oh Ron; poor, silly, slow Ron. He is so undeserving of Hermione. Good thing he won
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  • From ANON - Gracie on June 14, 2005
    Chapter 5

    Juheez I
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  • From ANON - Gracie on June 14, 2005
    Chapter 4

    What a visual! Draco in a library looking through the children
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  • From ANON - Gracie on June 14, 2005
    Chapter 3

    Oh I just love how Dumbledore knows everything. It
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  • From ANON - Gracie on June 14, 2005
    Chapter 2

    Hmm
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  • From ANON - Gracie on June 14, 2005
    I am just now realizing that while I have been following this story since you posted it in February, I have yet to review. I will just have make up for that. Here goes...

    Chapter 1

    This is a very good introduction to the story. The character develpment is excellent and you still manage to keep Hermione and Draco true to their original form. The physical connection between your Hermione and Draco is simply electric. What I find most appealing is Draco's need to protect Hermione and her ability to maintain independence.

    Great beginning.
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