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By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - Pixi on May 31, 2005
    oh god... Pant pant pant!

    Great story. my only complaint is you need to watch your grammar a little closer. Check out this site. Funny too. http://www.creativeteachingsite.com/humorgrammar.htm . this might also be useful http://www.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/ or this one http://englishplus.com/grammar/mistcont.htm

    Anyway, I really liked the story and can't wait to see an update.
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  • From ANON - lorett on May 31, 2005
    Oh Rain,

    WHAT A LITTLE TEASE YOU ARE!

    Okay, well, I love this chapter too. I'm IN LOVE with both of your stories, it's official!

    I can't wait for the next chappie.

    Keep up the great work.

    Lorett
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  • From ANON - Tithen on May 31, 2005
    Wow, I enjoyed this very much! You are great with words, and I love the way you write characters. I like that you have fleshed out Hermione but have still kept her in character. I cannot wait to read another chapter!
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  • From ANON - slyswn on May 30, 2005
    That was so bad and yet so very damn good. Not to mention the perfect amount of steam I like in a fic. rock on!
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  • From ANON - bob on May 29, 2005
    oooo me likey!
    You gotta love those lopsided grins :D
    I like the whole wandless magic bit...I was hoping that Hermione would go all nuts and wandlessly bind him to the bed...but we dont all get what we want...too bad.
    Keep up the awesome writing
    -bob
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  • From sailorpipn on May 29, 2005
    this is quite good! i make sure to keep an eye out for updates! good job
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  • From ANON - slykitten on May 29, 2005
    Uh oh, this is getting hot hot hot! can't wait til the next part!
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  • From ANON - Farah on May 29, 2005
    That was just so wrong!! And evil and cruel... have I mentioned E-V-I-L?!? I can't believe you left it like that. I have to say, you are seriously one of the best authors I've read! Very realistic and I'd love to see how she's gonna get him back for this! Please continue and don't leave us hanging so long!!
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  • From ANON - Kahlua on May 29, 2005
    I'm in love with this story. Everything is just perfect. Their conversation, arguments, though tamer and more mature, are still Hermione and Draco. And everytime they're together there's always tension and they're just explosive together. And there's no smut yet but it's already hot. I love this! I hope you write the next chapter soon...but I also wouldn't mind if you update your other fic. Thanks for writing and giving D/Hr fans something worthwhile to read.
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  • From ANON - bubbles on May 29, 2005
    WHAT THE HELL?????

    How could you just leave us hanging there?

    Oh god. This is terrible. Hermione's not the one anticipating anything. I AM.

    Oh well - I guess that's a testimony to your very capable literary abilities. Once again another freakin' fantastic chapter.

    But you HAVE to promise that you will finish this story so that I know that there'll be an end to all this agony (i.e. waiting for you to update).

    Also, do you know aprox. how long you want this story to be?

    Anyways, update soon. Love your story. I've only read 5 chaps of this story and 1 chap of the other story and you're already one of my favourite authors. :)

    Keep the good work up and oh, btw, just in case I fogot to tell you earlier - UPDATE !!!!! :P
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  • From ANON - bubbles on May 29, 2005
    WHAT THE HELL?????

    How could you just leave us hanging there?

    Oh god. This is terrible. Hermione's not the one anticipating anything. I AM.

    Oh well - I guess that's a testimony to your very capable literary abilities. Once again another freakin' fantastic chapter.

    But you HAVE to promise that you will finish this story so that I know that there'll be an end to all this agony (i.e. waiting for you to update).

    Also, do you know aprox. how long you want this story to be?

    Anyways, update soon. Love your story. I've only read 5 chaps of this story and 1 chap of the other story and you're already one of my favourite authors. :)

    Keep the good work up and oh, btw, just in case I fogot to tell you earlier - UPDATE !!!!! :P
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on May 29, 2005
    I read your earlier chapters, but when this hit the top of the list, I couldn't resist reading it all once again. Your Draco is so intoxicating, a force to be reckoned with. Your writing is subtle and powerful at the same time. You are also evil for stopping them when you did. You make me want to go back and rewrite what I've have finished so far, but I think I should just pay attention and learn from my mistakes.
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  • From ANON - geo on May 27, 2005
    I like it alot ... please update!
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  • From ANON - jchaser on May 25, 2005
    Read your other story that led me here and now I'm dying for this one to have "next chapter" at the bottom too. Wonderfully written and very edge of your seat angst. I kept holding my breath with this chapter waiting to see what Draco was going to do and or say next. Just incredible!
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  • From ANON - lilil on May 24, 2005
    Just like that!? Come on! Dont leave it here! woo hoo. :):)
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