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Reviews for Obscurity

By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - Lina on May 19, 2005
    Beautiful
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  • From ANON - morwen re on May 18, 2005
    good, good! although i hate the suspense. please update again soon, please? =^_^=
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  • From ANON - lorett on May 18, 2005
    I reviewed yesterday, but forgot to comment on the letters as you asked. I liked them. I thought they were witty and crafty. Good job. I didn't think they were silly at all and I LOVED Draco signing his letter - THE BIG BAD WOLF. - Groan...I'm so infatuated...

    Anyway, incidentially, I also like the other new story you've got going as well.

    L
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  • From ANON - Fukari on May 18, 2005
    I'm simply taken aback by this story. Every chapter, every word. The words practically esude... something I can't describe. I want to read on, never stop, but alas, I guess I would have to await the next chapter. This story can have me begging for more. I pray you update soon, as I am dying of thirst for the fifth chapter.

    Till then,
    Fukari.
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  • From ANON - phantom on May 17, 2005
    I don't know how to ask this and still retain my oh-so-dignified persona but please please please more more more and as soon as is possible, I'll do any thing I'll sell you my sister, she may be small and annoying but she's good for pokeing if you have writers block...... ok that was a lie I can't sell her to you but the thought was there!!
    So in conclusion pleasse more ASAP!!!!
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  • From ANON - lorett on May 17, 2005
    In two words....

    LOVE IT!

    You're gifted and the plot is wonderful and DON'T you DARE stop to explain yourself to anyone who questions you. Is Draco OOC? How do we know? We don't really have anything much to go on who Draco REALLY is, other than his brief encounters with Harry and Co. Although I LOVE HIM DESPERATELY, I fear he is what he is in JKR's world...But here, he can be anything we want and I want him just the way you're writing him. He's SMART and I totally agree that he is. He's clever and he loves a good verbal fight. I truly do think he and Hermione are well suited, even canon version. I think they're great together and she'd keep him in line and he'd loosen up her straight-laced self.

    The story is progressing beautifully. Don't fret about the smut, it comes in good time and with a fun plot, the rest just falls into place.

    I think it's great. No wonder you have so many reviews for just 4 chappies. I'm impressed and I'll be looking forward to your updates.

    Cheers,

    Lorett
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  • From zentiis on May 17, 2005
    *claps hands in glee* great! dark, seductive, smutty and amusing all the same. Great work, love it!
    /(^_^)/ \(^_^)/ \(^_^)\
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  • From auryn on May 16, 2005
    I absolutely love your story! The writing, the plot, it is all amazing. I thought you did a great job with the letters, and I especially liked that you included an excerpt from the book. It sounded very authentic, and added all the necessary information to understand the twist you put on wandless magic. Which was pure genious if you ask me. You really know how to hook a reader, you know. Leave them craving for more. I will definitely be checking for updates on a regular basis, and I hope, no, beg, it doesn't take long. You are a brilliant writer, and I look forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - slyswn on May 16, 2005
    go figure you would leave me hanging like that , *sighs*

    great chapter , keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 15, 2005
    Beatifully written. I do like the letters, the codenames are ingenious. Overall I really enjoy reading your story and I hope you'll continue. I also like the fact that you're taking time to build up the relationship instead of having them fling themselves at each other in a lustful frenzy. I like that alot. I was wondering, why does Draco care about Hermione? Will there be a back story explaining that? I mean in the books they seem to hate each other, and are physically abusive towards each other too. I was also wondering why the name Obscurity?
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  • From ANON - crazy di on May 15, 2005
    i love this fic! The letters were pretty cool, and please update soon! =D
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  • From ANON - fiona on May 15, 2005
    i love this story! i wonder when they'll give into themselfs, lol. please update soon oh and i love the letters!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 15, 2005
    hurry and update... now =)

    Love your story
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  • From ANON - the earth guise on May 15, 2005
    Great! Another update :). You know, I don't think it matters if Hr is looking for answers in books or not re her feelings for Draco. She's grown up, I think it makes sense for her to change a bit as she ages even if it seems OOC compared to how she was younger. Besides, it's nice to read a well-written, plausible if slightly different Hr- the reader can see her change and grow. Isn't the specualtion part of the fun?

    anyway, I really like this story and look forward to the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on May 15, 2005
    Another great chapter! I liked the Great Hall scene... I just like a frustrated Hermione I guess, lol. I also thought the letters to be rather clever. Can't wait for the next installment

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