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By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - Cecille on May 15, 2005
    I'm in love with this story. I think you got Hermione and Draco perfectly right. And, I love the pace of your plot and I think your style is fantastic. There's a cadence to your words--almost like poetry, and it matches the tone of your story very well. Keep up the fantastic work.
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  • From ANON - bubbles on May 15, 2005
    OH how I love your story ! ! ! When I saw that you'd updated, my heart started pounding because I was so eager to read the update. You'd better update soon :P

    okay, in all seriousness, this was a good chapter as were all of your other chapters. I think the lack of smut was fine and it'll probably only benefit the story later on. I really love how passionate this story is.

    Keep it up and update soon . :)
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  • From ANON - Ivy on May 15, 2005
    Love the story please please keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on May 15, 2005
    AWESOME CHAPTER! I love the details and the way you describe Draco. This is an absoultely awesome story! I hope it's very long. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - anon on May 14, 2005
    oh my freakin gosh! i'd just discovered this story and boy am i glad. this is one of the BEST DMHR fics i'd ever read. ur writing style is really what captures me the most. i just love the way u word ur sentences and brilliantly switch the POVs. i also love the twists in the plots and the dimensions u add to the characters. sure, they can be classified as OOC, but w/the way u write ur characters and incorporate them into ur story, the extra aspects to their personalities become believable and only serves to make this story more unique and interesting anyway, bottom-line is that i really really enjoyed this story and simply LOVE it. keep writing please! can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - silver on May 14, 2005
    yous story is really interesting...and i hope you will continue it soon...i am curious how this "relationship" between draco and hermione will turn out...thank you
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  • From ANON - silver on May 14, 2005
    yous story is really interesting...and i hope you will continue it soon...i am curious as how this strang relationship between drac and hermione will turn out...thank you
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  • From ANON - Stanley Steemer on May 11, 2005
    I love this story! It's one of the most romantic things i've ever read! :3 I'm quite literally reading this for the plot. So awesome!
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  • From atmosphere on May 09, 2005
    I love this story so far. I especially liked the part where he gave her red silk sheets. It made me smile.
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  • From ANON - slyswn on May 08, 2005
    First of all I would like to see that plot is just as important as anything else in the story so I am glad you have given us some plot.

    Next I totally agree with everything you said and your reason behind writing the last chapter as you did. In Rowling's world it is seen through Harry's eyes but you are certainly not Rowling so you should be able to write your story as you stay fit.

    Besides I happen to like your writing style and I think you are quite talented

    I look forward to more of this fine story.

    If some people don't like it too freakin' bad

    Rock on!

    Update again soon!
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  • From ANON - catwalker on May 06, 2005
    who the fuck cares if they're OOC? it's your story, they have no right to complain. obviously they like it enough to keep reading so they should just suck it up.


    lol. i for one LOVE this fic, even if they are currently only 3 chappies. i want more and need more... you're portrayal of malfoy always "Accidentally-on-purpose" being there at the right moment to save mione is perfect. and their whole twisted love scene is great. i like how malfoy knows enough not to have sex with granger because i think it's because he knows that he's not right for her, in fact, he's quite wrong.

    obviously, i am desperate for you to update...
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 06, 2005
    come on you have to upload something new!!
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  • From ANON - madame malfoys mirror on May 05, 2005

    This is marvelous. I love the breathless detail and the soft, romantic phrasing. My favorite phrase is "she pulled his body into alignment with hers." I like it because it's cleanly elegant, not overdramatic...

    I like her hesitation in touching him, I love his reluctant fascination with her.

    Very well done first chapter. I look forward to reading more.

    Madame
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  • From ANON - KaraQ on May 04, 2005
    As always I love it, and I really liked the way you portrayed some of this chapter from Harry's point of View. Lol, I'd love to see our little Dracy-pooh get jealous. That ought to be fun. Keep up the good work. I'm looking forwrd to the next (hopefully a bit smuttier) chapter.
    ~KaraQ
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  • From ANON - rogue3011 on May 04, 2005
    ah, well i was hoping for there to be more of malfoy but i guess i can wait. :) i think you are going fine the way you are. The characters are great.....the story is great......keep it up
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