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By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - julie on May 03, 2005
    i really love this story, it really keeps my attention. altough this draco might seem ooc from time to time...i really like the "comforting" side of him. aw who wouldnt wanna be wrapped up in his arms. lol
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  • From ANON - Lala on May 03, 2005
    i luv the story and i don't see anything wrong with it except that u have a habit of crossing from 2 places without anything in between. but other than that, the story is perfect. i'll be on the look out for updates.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on May 03, 2005
    I really enjoy this story. Please continue it!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on May 03, 2005
    Your an excellent writer and the there is some great plot involved. Keep updating!
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on May 03, 2005
    What can I say... I love it!!!! LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT! I love the plot and I am sorry that you had a personal tragedy as it were, I hope things are better now. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it is sooner, but well worth the wait.
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  • From ANON - Brit on May 03, 2005
    Bollocks! Of course there's a minimum drinking age. Trust me, its 18 in London just like everywhere else in the UK. That's 18 to buy alcohol, 14 to drink it in a restaurant or pub with a meal if somone else buys it. However, as with anywhere, underage drinking is prevalent because of bad security letting people into clubs just cause they're wearing short skirts and low cut tops - that's the girls obviously! Apart from that - great story.
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on May 03, 2005
    I would agree that once you save someone's life, a bond that cannot be broken is formed. I have almost drowned in the ocean twice, saved by members of my family. I mean really almost drowned, started not caring and just wanted to give up against the current. (I know, why do they still let me swim, but they occurred 10 years apart.) Even if we don't talk about it, that bond is there. Draco has saved her more than once in your story, and I don't find this OOC at all. Don't let the bastards get you down.
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  • From ANON - Rosie on May 03, 2005
    Don't you love how the board decides to leave out complete chunks of your comment?

    Read as: It almost feels like I'm reading a Harry Potter book, with different author quirks.
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  • From ANON - Rosie on May 03, 2005
    I don't think I've ever stumbled upon a Draco/Hermione fic still set in school that actually had such amazing character development and plot. I almost feel as if I'm reading an You're an extremely talented writer, and aside from the complete OOCness of ANY Draco/Hermione fic, I think you're doing a beautiful job at actually portraying the characters as someone else laid them out. I find this amazing, and I can't stop thinking how awesome this is, because I certainly can't do it, and I don't know many people that can. You're a truly talented writer, and I look forward to reading a lot of your work.
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  • From ANON - Avanell on May 03, 2005
    Things keep getting more and more interesting...from that first time to now with the red sheets. Love it! One complaint, however: I really want Hermione to show she can kick some ass! Please let her! And THEN she can enjoy twisted games with the sheets ;)
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  • From ANON - Larissa on May 01, 2005
    I love this! It's so sexy, and they haven't really done anything yet except talk, kiss, and touch. And your Draco, so sexy and snarky. I just love that he's so protective of Hermione.
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  • From ANON - curlyq2713 on April 26, 2005
    update dammit! hehe
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  • From ANON - bob on April 24, 2005
    eheh that was awesome!
    I hope you are still gonna finish this story, as it is VERY awesome!
    I give it 110% 'cause I love it that much!
    I love the banter between Draco and Hermione, it's so cute! ^__^
    Draco's got it BAAAAD....so does Hermoine, but she doesn't really realize it yet.
    Your writing style is awesome and I hope you keep it up.
    -bob
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  • From ANON - Natalie on March 26, 2005
    You made Draco so HOT! I love his portrayal and the he he keeps teasing by backing away. YOu left me in suspence, I can't wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - Rogue3011 on March 25, 2005
    How i LOVE this story. There is such passion between the two characters. I love Draco and how you portrayed him. I love the dialog. I love the way the story is going. I would love to be Hermione at this point....to have my very own savior!!! Your writing is off the hook! Such a pleasant style that is like music to my ear. Now only if my writing was like yours....lol. Well UPDATE SOON!
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