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Reviews for Obscurity

By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - ApriL on March 06, 2005
    I'm loving it. Keep it going.
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  • From ANON - doesn\'t matter on March 06, 2005
    Oooh, you killed the story the second you mentioned 'Janice' and 'Leslie'. You don't include your own friends in a story just out of nowhere and just for the sake of it. The club was 'hopping?' C'mon, what the hell is that? Instead of working the personality and thought patterns of the characters, you simply ignore them. That sure as hell wasn't Hermione. Do us all a favor, and stop writing. If not, take a class, or get yourself a beta-reader. You need one very badly.
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  • From ANON - vexedreality on March 06, 2005
    I read this the other day and then I couldn't find it again. So I searced like mad and now I've found it. I adore this story. The plot bunnies that are wandering around are amazing. Please do update soon, I'm on the edge of my seat with anticipation!! D:
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  • From ANON - chris on March 06, 2005
    nice. this is one of the best fics i've ever read. please keep it going.
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  • From ANON - Mia on March 05, 2005
    I like the premise and thinks it shows promise- has Draco been leading a double life since he was eleven? But unfortunately I find Hermione too out of character. We know that her first reaction when in doubt is too research yet in your fic her academic pursuits hardly exist. Personality-wise this feels more like a Ginny/Draco fic than a Hermione Draco.
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  • From on February 28, 2005
    I love your writing! That's awesome...please update and write more. I'm dying to know how you continue on. *droolz*
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  • From ANON - islandmochagurl on February 28, 2005
    Once again, great chapter! I was absolutely thrilled to see another chapter just waiting for me to click on and read. I love this plot! Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Janne on February 26, 2005
    Great story. I absolutely love it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - slytherinswn on February 25, 2005
    Aww now that was sweet. more more!
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  • From ANON - Raife on February 25, 2005
    Woo! This has to be one of the most wondrous and facinating fanfics i've read, and i've read a few. It's teeming with mystery and lust!! Please, please please update!
    Raife
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  • From ANON - LadyMalfoy730 on February 25, 2005
    Damn that's hot. Update soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - doodle on February 25, 2005

    Please continue with this! The running around is exciting.
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  • From ANON - nathalia on February 25, 2005
    Oh I loved this so so much!! You are the best writer in the world. Please please continue!
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  • From ANON - Bambu on February 25, 2005
    Very nice plot and character development in this second chapter. You can easily see Hermione railing at the circumstances, and then coming up smack against the brick wall of reality. That her dark knight in shining armor arrives to save the day was quite lovely... and the chemistry between them is delicious.
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  • From ANON - carolyn on February 24, 2005
    Wow.. A dozen versions huh? No matter what your worries are, this chapter turned out perfectly well! Some action, some drama (and crying), and some touching between Draco and Hermione. Good enough for me! =)
    Although I have to question the logic of Hermione bringing her laptop to Hogwarts- only if you want to abide by canon rules, that is. As said in GoF, electronics don't work well within Hogwarts' grounds because the magic in the air messes up electricity. But if you are choosing not to follow some of the books' details, well your fic is to do with as you wish.
    Hope you have more luck with the next chapter, and update!
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