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Reviews for Obscurity

By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From DracosDuchess on August 01, 2008
    This has to be one of the best Draco/Hermione fics I've ever read (and those are the ONLY ones I read...lol). You have a gift for writing that few in this world do, and I can't WAIT to see what happens next!
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  • From thislove on July 23, 2008
    At moments I felt weak in the knees, breathless. This is the second story of yours that I have read and what can I say? You have a talent for creating those special moments where when reading your story, I get butterflies in my stomach, as if what you wrote was happening to me. Simply amazing.
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  • From mlui on July 01, 2008
    I really enjoyed reading this story so far! I find it a bit appalling that Hermione regards her safety so insubstantially. I know she's a target already before she started S.T.O.P. because she was Harry Potter's best friend and just simply being Muggle-born. But seriously, she should at least take some sort of precautions...I find it surprising that Hermione hasn't [i]heard[/i] of brand names before. I mean, she lives with Parvarti and Lavender as dorm mates! I'm sure she could have heard them talking about it...doesn't Harry have the Marauder's Map? Isn't it a bit risky because Harry might see them together on the map? Also, you seem to have mixed up "strait" when you really mean to use "straight." But this is a lovely story and I hope you'll update soon!
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  • From elibdally on June 25, 2008
    Great chapter. I haven't seen this fic in a while so had to reread it again. It didn't disappoint!
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  • From Eilisbelle on June 19, 2008
    I am so glad that you are continuing!!!! I really enjoy this story, love how you portray Draco, and Hermione. One question though, when you wrote: " People were uniformed and it led to uniformed choices". Did you mean uninformed?? Because it could work either way. Just wanted to point it out. Again, I'm really really happy with you continuing Obscurity and Jealousy!!!

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  • From smmz79 on June 19, 2008
    wow i love this view on draco/hermione... a very different twist to what we normally read.... and you got right to the good stuff in the first chap very nice so i am looking forward to reading on....
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  • From margotlefaye on June 18, 2008
    This is an outstanding story, and I dearly hope you will have more time to update it. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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  • From hippiechick192000 on June 18, 2008
    Rain,

    Thank you for updating this story. It is my favorite Draco/Hermione fan fic by far. This chapter is certainly as poignant as the other eleven, and holds a gripping fascination that keeps me intrigued. I love how you are writing this story in close third to Hermione's character, allowing us to see Draco only through her eyes. Good job and keep the writing coming!

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  • From Cathartesaura on June 18, 2008
    Hey, this is very nicely written. I like how protective Malfoy is, and possesive at the same time . . . mmm.
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  • From Safir84 on June 05, 2008
    Holy shit, I so love this fic of yours! It's so freaking awesome and whatnot! The plot's quite amazing, as well as the character portrayal, I just love the way you've Draco and Hermione interacting and the smut's hot as hell!

    Furthermore, I love the "moodswings" of Draco, the way; one moment he's sorta all possessive and whatnot, and the next he's all sweet and caring, I just love the mix!

    Please update again and that soon, please!
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  • From mollypoxx on June 03, 2008
    O.O

    You need to write more.
    I mean, really.
    People might die.
    So you really should.
    REALLY.


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  • From mandabee on June 03, 2008
    Good God!! If it were even possible to have me swooning in my chair, you would have done it! Honestly, I know that I am just one more inarticulately humble review in a long list, but this story is brilliant!!! You have made me into the puddle of helpless goo that Hermione struggles to avoid becoming! The twists and turns, Draco's mood swings, the cliffies...

    All I can say is damn. You are very good.
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  • From Tootsie on January 13, 2008
    amazing story.i love tha way Draco treat Hermione, such adoreable.pls up date soon.
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  • From mageemi on September 29, 2007
    Rain,
    This is a wonderful story, I just read all 11 chapters and hope that you have plans to update. Please, please, please cont this story and let us know what happens to our heroes!
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  • From mhaj78 on September 23, 2007
    oh gosh...i can't wait for the update!! clearly draco's okay with her making their "relationship" public...i just hope she will!!
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