Click Here!

Reviews for Obscurity

By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - Norah on July 03, 2006
    I've noticed a lot of little mistakes in character behavior and stuff like that.
    I try not to let it bother me.



    I love this story so much.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - demonika on July 01, 2006
    LOL!!! Draco and Hermione are such NERDS in that conversation....
    .....
    ....
    ....
    ...
    ...
    ...I LOVE IT!!!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Given2fly on June 28, 2006
    Update. More. NOW!!!!!!!!! LoL








    Please? =P
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Parva_Larva on June 28, 2006
    OMG.. I have never EVER read a fanfic this fast.. How can I not have discovered this before? Anyway I love it!! Your potrait of both Draco and Hermione is so real, not counting the fact that it would never happen, I just adore it! Hermione is maybe a little bit too manic schoolwise but you still make it believeable.. And for the first time (in a long time) I actually miss not having a boyfriend, someone to care for me like that! I'm really close to saying you should just continue writing no matter what happens plotwise but seriously, no.. never mind.. just continue the story, I can't even write a comprehendable sentence anymore, so just update, please, and know you have my full support (and readership), even if it's not worth much!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - DeceptiveInnocence on June 27, 2006
    This is one of the best Draco/Hermione fics I've read, I love the way Draco acts with her! Very sexy! Keep updating!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Leeree [again, unfortunately] on June 26, 2006
    sorry, I ment *inside joke*... not... well, whatever the hell I said before! lol!


    Report Review

  • From ANON - Leeree [not logged in] on June 26, 2006
    Please update soon! This is getting good!

    ~Leeree a.k.a. weirdo bitch whore (inseid joke with my friend Cerenna :D)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - sheedy on June 26, 2006
    awesome work! I look forward to your next update.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ozarkmoon on June 26, 2006
    You said in Author's Notes at the end of Chapter 2 you included the Twin Towers as a recent event. That occured 9/11/2001 and by then Hermione, Draco, Harry - et all in that year class - would be 21 or so. A more timely reference for them would be the first Gulf War or Tianamen Square, since they started school in 1990 or 1991 and Hermione is what? 16 or nearly 17 (now in the summer before her last year at school)? making it 1997 or so.
    Report Review

  • From amoraluv on June 26, 2006
    totally hot!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Empress on June 26, 2006
    I almost by-passed this fic. I'm so glad I stopped though. It held me with its creative writing, solid plot and with a Hermoinie and Draco that weren't OOC. You made them a little sexier and your adaptation was very believable. All around good story.


    I look forward to reading more of your work and the updates to this story.
    You have created a fan.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Tjay Motou on June 25, 2006
    I love it... please keep writing... this is the best HG/DM fic ever... and the relationship is real... they didn't fuck after the first kiss... they didn't fuck and then confess their undying love... they get into fights, they have disagreements... but in the ned it all works out... I love it! I'm soo looking foward to updates!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Aurora on June 24, 2006
    I love it, and you managed to keep the characters in character. No suddenly hot hermione or andelic draco.

    I am a Draco/Hermione shipper simply because it's one of those impossible relationships, and is so very hard to write in a plausible way.

    You've done a wonderful job od making it work. I think this is a great story, please continue it.

    Anxiously awaiting your next update,

    Aurora
    Report Review

  • From ANON - gevfuan on June 22, 2006
    Like the chapter.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - yummydraco on June 22, 2006
    i luv this story please write more.....if it helps i would suggest threatening ur muse..just saying that it works for me ;)....post soon
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!