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By : snapesflower

From ANON - Michelle on March 02, 2005
Yippee, Anna you said everything I wanted to but I'm not so ho writing. So I hope you don't mind if I just say ditto.

napesflower you're the best and please, please write your stories as you aleays have and loved.

Wht are morons like evilgrin bothering us? All of us are happy here in the Snapesflower kingdo.
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From ANON - Anna on March 02, 2005
First off all, no one ever said that Snapesflower could not take criticism. Her fans (including me) defend her because we want to, not because she needs defending.

As for the fact that you say she should could "write better," that's only coming from one person-you. The rest of us are quite happy and enjoy her writing. Who are you? Some literary critic for the Times, where unless people can't understand it, it's a critics delight? What makes you think that you are the judge of someone's writing.

And you're petty and cruel. Before people started responding to your remarks your whole "review was "-"Sorry but' it's dull." That's a petty, mean spirited review and you didn't try to explain until people started calling you on this.

If you find the story dull-don't read. Hundreds of other fans myself included love Snapesflowers writing exactly the way it is entertaining, romantic and just all around great. If you don't believe me look around you have like the only negative review.

As for Snapesflower and I being friends, we don't know each other but have e-mailed and I happen to think she's a classy lady and a topnotch writer. And her stories are perfect that way they are.

As for taking a tranquillzer-no thanks I don't need one. Perhaps it would be a good idea for you to seek out some type of medicine that will make you stop seeing yourself as a judge on writing that you feel is not up to your high standards. Snapesflowers has tons of all positive reviews on her many great stories. What about you? All you can do is criticize and than act as though you were "being nice" and you just meant that she could do better.

Sorry to tell you this but Snapesflower is already the tops in SS/HG stories as her many fans will attest. She knows what her readers want and like any great author she gives it to them.

And for the record "Sorry it's dull" is not constructive criticism. It's just a nasty remark that probably comes from a woman who's not to happy with her life and wants to hurt others. I do hope you get better.

I'll say it again Snapesflower-you're the best!!!! And your fans love your stories exactly the way you write them. I salute you.

Anna

P.S.-Evilgrin you can have the last word. I don' t want to take up space that other fans will be using to praise this story, plus unhappy people like you probably need the last word since it will probably be the highlight of your day.
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From ANON - evilgrin on March 02, 2005
Peace girls, I never ment to hurt your star. I thought "review" is not equal to "lick" or "worship her without question". Some authors can stand and even like criticism, because they want to progress, some can't stand it, and don't want to. I thought she belonged to the first, but you say she belongs to the second group. You are very good friends, you defend her so much - even when I say she's a good writer.. are you alright, girls? Have you already taken your daily tranquillants?
Anna, you have no idea who I am, and what I wrote. I'm not one of those stupid 12-in-a-row-with-the-same-plot-and-characters authors, most of whom make only money of your obsessions, and I doubt that they write those stories for satisfying your taste.. I know what I'm speaking about.. that's only business in most cases.. :(
Is there anyone of you who realized that I put down that I liked the way she wrote and I thought that she could be even better than this? I think noone there.
I don't remember which of you called me simpleminded *laughter* but people, who can read the same things 12 times with a little sugar on it are real simpleminded, in my opinion. Meaning not Snapesflower , as you enlightened me of her creativity - accepted, she's just as creative as you said.
:)
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From ANON - Paris on March 02, 2005
You are the Master as always. I am so glad SS didn't slep with that whore.

Loving thje story and can't wait for SS/HG smut.

All Hail Queeen Snapesflower!
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From ANON - Melissa on March 02, 2005
Hi. I'm late for work but ditto everything Anna said in her review. Evilgrin go elsewhere and leave us alone.

Snapesflower-thanks for not having S sleep with the whore. it would have tainted the SSHG thing for me. You handled it beautifully.

Love you, love your stories-every single one of them,'' And if you try to change your great stories for the simpleminded evil grin, I'd be so disappointed as would others. You are a wonderful writer, don't change a thing about the way you write. We all love you. If evilgrin took time to read, the stories are all different. The scenes, the personalities, the plot. What the hell does this evilgrin want? Maybe she wants you to mix in some X-Men characters in? LOL LOL Ignore her. Your stories ar the best.

Be gone evil grin.

Luv you Snapesflower-gotta run.
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From ANON - Anna on March 02, 2005
Evilgin,

Do us all a favor and just shut up. I and hundred of others absolutely love the way Snapesflower writes. You may thing it's the same story but we definately don't. In any case-who are you? I doubt that you could write even one story that was 1/10 as good as Snapeflowers stories are.

And in case you haven't noticed, I hate to break this to you-but read all the classics and all the so called best selling autors of today (John Grishim perhaps). Well guess what-pretty much the plots are the same Name and location changes but that's about it. Do you know why? He knows what his audience enjoys reading and that's who he's writing for.

Snapesflower has a huge fan-base that absolutely adore all of her stories and I can tell you none have been dull. Every single one has an enchanment about it, and her many fans enjoy very much her wonderful writing.

There's a saying (if it ain't broke-don't fix it). Snapesflower is one of the premier writers in the HG/SS community and we love her stories. She's great.

If you find them dull-why bother reading and reviewing. I am sure there's some weird, ridiculous story that will meet your taste for "something different".

In the mean time I'm hoping that Snapesflower continues to write her wonderful stories which makes lot and lots and lots of people feel really good. I adore and can't wait when she updates.

Snapesflower, as far as I'm concerned you're the best and you have legions of fans to prove it.

Bravo, Snapesflower, take a bow. You're the best.
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From ANON - Jolie on March 02, 2005
I am so thrilled with Chapter 7. You wer brillant having Dumbledore save the day. I am so glad tha that Valencia didn;t get her hands on him Hubnd indeed!

Now let's hope Hermioneups the ante and really goes after him.

Great chapter and i know for a fact all your loyal readers gave a sigh of relief.

And my offer stand-if you want me to tell of that idiot Evigirl who obviously has no concept of "our world" or your talents-let me at he.

Please no more scares of a sexual nature between SS and other than HG. I couldn't take it. LOL
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From ANON - evilgrin on March 02, 2005
Hi :)
You absolutely misunderstood me.
I think this will be a dull story.
But I never wanted Sev to have that whore.. it was just your subconscious that spoke out.. maybe you want that, hmm? Because I most certainly don't! :) What made you think it?!
What I wanted to say with using the word "dull" is that after having read all stories of Snapeflower I realized that the actions are always the same.
1.she has a crush on him. more or less, but defenetly .
2.something extraordinary happens which makes them live together.
3.he has a crush on her. and he can't resist temptation. Even if he wants to play with her, the play turns against him.
4.the consumation. always the same. even the expressions come back.
5.+/- marriage.
Than again, I don't know why I put it to this story, as this is a bit different from the previous ones...
You are a very talented, brilliant author, Snapesflower, and I think you are capable of writing better plots , better stories than these. I think high of you, you are one of my favourite authors. Still I think, you could give a try to be more creative, because your stories start to be ..copies of the previous ones. I love your stories, but I think you are more talented than these stories showes.

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From ANON - Gracie on March 02, 2005
oh em gee

I hope you keep updating fast. This story is SO good. easily 5 stars...if there were 10 stars I would rate it 10.
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From ANON - Melissa on March 01, 2005
I'm going out on a limb and trusting that you don't have Snape screw that hooker. Please don't listen to asswipes like evil grin tha try to make people put in all types of sex with everyone or esle to them "it's dull".

All your stories including this one are thrilling romantic, dramatic entertainment and I alove the way you write.

Please keep your many, many loyal fans in mind and keep the sex to SS/HG (although I respect your right to do whatever you want in the story).

I guess I just hope it's something as simple as SS changes his mind and doesn't bed the hooker. Or maybe intervention or whatever.

In any case love the story and you for being such a SS/HG genius.
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From ANON - Suk on March 01, 2005
I'm scared. Save Sverus from this whore please. I want him just for Hermione-sexually and hormonally. Hey if I can't have him only HG should.

Snapesflower, please make your fans happy and "Stop that Hooker" from putting her hands or anything else on our beloves Severus.

I know you have something up your sleeve. You're not my favorite author for nothing. It's because your writing is entertaing and I always feel you respect the HG/Ss relationship as much as I do.

No hooker for Severus-please. Oh and please don't think I'm trying to in anyway tell you how to write or tell your story. i don't mean any disrespect. It's just that I'd really hate to see SS having sex with this hooker, while our Hermione wants him.
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From ANON - Fran P. on March 01, 2005
OMG, no Sev please don't have sex with that horrible woman. You've waited for sex. Just a little longer and you can have Hermione.

Jeez, I actually said a prayer that he doesn't when I read the last chapter. I think I'm going to go do something safe like bake cookies.

If your stories affect me this much, I suppose you can figure I'm a huge fan-girl of yours.
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From ANON - Mystery Lady on March 01, 2005
Love your story my dear. But I hope Severus stays away or at least doesn't :do the nasty" with that hooker. It would ruin the HG/SS dynamics at least for me so I'm a wishing he cchanges his mind or somehing happens to stop them.

I'm trusting you as always babe. You have never made a misstep with our SS/HG-you're the coolest.

Oh and if anyone has any flames aout your stories send them to me. I'll take care of them. You use your precious energy and time to write, sweets!

Read all you stories and you are "the Queen".

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From ANON - eve/roarke on March 01, 2005
I just adore really grumpy snapes, this one is brilliant! You've got to feel sorry for him and personally I think the way the day
went in it was score one to Hermione, loved the way she went and got the headache potion.

One wonders why after such a day he would go with a witch of the night, sexual frustration perhaps.

Please update soon, love your stories.
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From ANON - Jolie on March 01, 2005
I'm going on a rampage here against EvilGrin. How dare she criticize my favorite author. What the hell has she written. We all love your Hermione/Severus stories just as they are. Look at your loyal fans. I bet this EvilGrin person doesn't even have a story must less fans.

I just worry that you'll throw in sex with Severus and this whore to please people like evilgrin who apparently wants a fullblown sex scene with Severus and someone else instead our beloved stories by you that feature only Severus and Hermione having sex with great build up.

Please don't bow to her wishes and keep your story in the wonderful way it was going with eventual SS/HG sex not SS sex with some whore while Hermione remains faithful and pining for him.

I know Severus is super snarky in this story but I do believe he has morals and deep down knows he's falling for Hermione and won't ruin that.

Your stories are A++++ and I left my e-mail in case you want me to tell you in unlady like terms exactly what I think of reviwers like evilgrin.

You Go Girl.
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