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By : uqui
  • From bloodshound on March 01, 2012
    poor gin. i still feel incredibly sorry for her. It might be better to have her die dramatically thought atm she's the only one who knows the whole truth... and doesn't care. it just seems a waste to toss that by the way side.
    anyway, heh, lol. like all those candles would make a difference. it's interesting that the shadows can give them mostly the truth and dumbles and crew, because of their mind set, still won't draw the real answers from it. I do hope they can corrupt fawks before har shows his real colours. Fawks is no light opponent. does kali regret being shadow converted, would he have fought it? Is fawks likely to do the same? does a being like that whose forcibly converted bring it's own unique talents with it or is it subsumed while the conversion is happening.
    I wonder if X t vamp will dies as well? I can't see voldi, the shadows OR har leaving someone that knowledgeable about them around? does that mean they'd have to take out his sire and off spring as well?
    one more side Q? Bella likely to cause trouble once she learns of voldi's mate? she's rather obsessive and possessive yeah?

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  • From roosickle on February 24, 2012
    Now I get the shadows much more, I think the explanation of them and their agenda( if I can phrase it that way) makes them into a real characterin the story, once again I must say I do love the story and the writing that you do and will avidly await the next chapter .
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  • From bloodshound on February 11, 2012
    i'm glad that charm worked, it'll make things much better for the wolves.
    I thought mio and his friends knew about his shadow powers... but then again there's but so much going on it's hard to remember whose in the know and who isn't... though i'm clinging firmly to that potential future vision where mio and ron are happy at hogwarts and har rules from elsewhere than having his friends reject him... at least until i know otherwise. >>
    About time har learned of oli and cissa's feathered extra's though if there are other basalisc held at the manor will har pass the info on to voldi or ask the shadows to get them out?
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  • From roosickle on February 11, 2012
    hmmmm I've been following this all along but have only just joined AFF so this is my first review, I am enjoyin it but am not sure about the shadows , although they are a wonderful idea you seem to rely on them alot for a simple plot device, think of this as constructive critism as I do think the story adn your writing is brilliant.
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  • From bloodshound on January 27, 2012
    blinks... good luck with that old hat. I doubt you'll get har to pop u on now. the hat might feel obliged to squawk to the head master.
    heh, poor sev. phoenix tat or not, he's not going to win this.
    I can feel a bit sorry for gin. just another witch indeed. maybe har can turn her affections elsewhere with a spell or something. to someone who'll actually love and care for her as she should be loved and cared for.
    so many plans in the air. so many works in plan. which ones will come to fruition i wonder... and i'm still hanging to find out who fire dragon is? :P
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  • From bloodshound on January 14, 2012
    Wow, i've really lucked out witht he Har /voldi stories lately. Additions to three excellent sequls in three days. I feel so spoiled. Though i think yours is the only one that doesn't have the horcrux in hars head leading him down a delightfully dark path. Does shadow Har still have his horcrux?
    anyway, more back ground work. I'm glad Voldi is getting most of his 'guests' out of the way. He's got other things he needs to be dealing with and can't realy afford to have them underfoot. voldi got his first warning about what draco might be as well. it won't help draco at all, but at least if he manifests it will be less of a surprise. Same with Har's friends. Even if they didn't understand it at the time, they can't say he didn't give them fair warning.
    I'm surprised Luc is still so composed but then Malfoy pride (and hubris) is a very powerful thing.
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  • From kinkylilgirl on January 05, 2012
    Ok so I have been following this story like a religion. I love it. If you need any help please feel free to contact me. :D Oh i can't wait for more -excited shudder-
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  • From bloodshound on January 02, 2012
    well, that explains the soul less bodies... not the end i'd wish for that.
    sighs. cissa cissa cissa. She's just digging herself in deeper and deeper huh. they're going to be obliterated.
    ty for the quick update too. ^^
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  • From bloodshound on December 17, 2011
    well poopie, and he was so close too. I hope the fact that he had to bail on the last before he got a chance to answer wont be troublesome later. There was no one useful at all in the mid term prisoners or he just couldn;t be bothered?
    glad one of my fav stories is moving on once more. ^^

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  • From bloodshound on November 28, 2011
    I remember what i was going to say now. David, while he only had a bit part in the books... and most likely this fic, i was happy to hear another mention of him. I was rather fond of his character in Basic Needs and Basic Wants (Har/Fen slash fics, good stuff)so i welcomed his appearence.
    Will the ever nutty and fixated Bella feature?
    btw, my e mail is ckestra@hotmail.com
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  • From bloodshound on November 26, 2011
    Sigh... a dark lords work is never done. :P
    I'm glad the dementors remember who owns their asses... especially since the shadows had to eat one to make a point.
    still, i wonder why they wanted to bring the empty bodies? Shadow food? identity theft? can't wait to find out and wow, are the wizards gonna be freaked. Har had better get seducing on those Auror's or there's gonna be a VERY high body count there. The last time I read an Azkaban break this impressive was in basic wants. (an awesome Har/Fen story)
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  • From bloodshound on November 13, 2011
    *snickers. so NOT a false alarm. Still, whose voldi got left in Azkaban that's useful to him?
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  • From NessaC on October 29, 2011
    Slowly slowly things are moving forward. Made good sense for the explanation to come from Hermione - that way when Harry "comes out" so to speak, it won't have been him feeding them his beliefs, explanations, etc.

    My email is dark_angel_jo47@hotmail.com, if you want to get in touch :) Thanks!

    ~Spiritxx
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  • From bloodshound on October 26, 2011
    Man, everyones just writing off Draco. lol. Still, compared to a shadow lord and the serpent lord, a mildly shadow tainted quarter tenchi is no big deal, basilisk killer or not. (and isn't he meat on a stick when they learn that, mwaha) :P Still, if he manages to pull it out at the right time, he may get a hit.
    So. Voldi is being flashy huh? I wonder how the order plans to respond to that, especially as the first attack was mostly showmanship, where as the second attack sounds like it;ll be anything but.
    I know you has plans but it;s so hard to be patient. I want Snape under the shadows command now and Draco crushed and demeaned like the side character he is and more Har/Voldi lemons... oh yes, lol.
    Hmmm, i wonder what Luna means by calling Fawks a black phoenix. Har's reference i recognize but not that one. Does that mean that Fawks is already tainted, or that it's something that will happen in the future. Hmmmmm mmmm mmmm. *ponders.
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  • From NessaC on October 22, 2011
    I'm really happy you're updating more often now :) And I was very touched by the shoutout! Kudos! Thanks to your little cliffie, I will be checking back nearly every day to see how Harry and Voldemort handle this particular situation..

    ~Spiritxx
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