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Reviews for Don’t Blink, Don’t Flinch, Say Nothing

By : Chaldanya
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 27, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 12, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Mawariah on February 07, 2006
    A really, really good story. Nicely done!=)
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  • From on February 23, 2005
    I liked the ambiguous and dreamy quality of this fic. Even though the content was pretty direct, the language still had a bit of a melancholic quality to it, creating a very good surrounding atmosphere. Really liked the quirk in the end too. ;)
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  • From ANON - Raffy on February 17, 2005
    Mmmm
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  • From on February 17, 2005

    I really, really like this. It's tight, free and nicely sensual. Quiet and powerful, too.

    The best part for me:
    His mind is split in two - between the man in his mouth and the woman with the
    bushy hair and slightly protruding collarbones.

    Beautiful. I like realistic, believable detail, it adds so much to the tone of the narrative,
    the voice of the character.

    It adds a human dimension to the romance,
    which is something I personally prefer, having little patience for overblown, decorative prose.

    Nicely done.

    Madame


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  • From ANON - Liz on February 17, 2005
    To quote: anon 2005-02-16 id # 2035157000
    "well that sucked"

    It did. It sucked Blaise's penis, in a most delightful manner.

    Awsome fic, I love how vague it was. I think too many authors now are becoming too involved in their own made up details about HGxDM that it contradicts the books/the character's personalities.

    At the same time, few people can pull of the vague-ness you did with out also losing the ... "substance"? (Sorry, can't thin of a better word.) Its left to our own imagination how HG and DM got to be HGxDM. ... but it a good way.

    So anways, good job for keeping the characters true and all that, and great job for writing an awsome awsome story.

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  • From ANON - anon on February 17, 2005
    a bit too abstract, with lots of vagueness that wasn't quite resolved by the end.
    A valiant effort, however.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 17, 2005
    well written, different, and great! liked it, liked it, liked it. woo
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  • From ANON - arbitrary on February 17, 2005
    I would have reviewed sooner, but this story was... well, let me put it this way, I read it, then I had to read it again... then I had to ponder it over work... then I had to read it *again* and you know what I came up with? this fic is fucking brilliant! I love the whole concept, and I can only hope that our little gryphindor doesn't quite hold to the rules at the very end.
    excelent job!
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  • From ANON - anon on February 16, 2005
    well that sucked

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  • From ANON - Andrea on February 16, 2005
    All I've got to say is that was absolutely wonderful. Don't add anything to it, don't take anything way from it, just leave it the way it is. That was an absolutely lovely story, I enjoyed myself very much. I could see the two of them very clearly in my mind's eye, silly children, and they were just so cute -- in that perverse sort of way. Wonderful ending, I'm pretty sure my jaw dropped at the way you finished it. Beautiful story, great job -- keep writing.
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