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Reviews for The Watcher

By : Phantomtale
  • From ANON - Jemi on March 19, 2005
    I absolutely love this. I like how each chapter changes perspective, different characters each sharing their views. When I first read it, I believed it was a one shot, and I'm so pleased it's not. I hope you continue with this. It's interesting. (On a side note, I LIKE how you portrayed Peter in that last one. The lowest level of hell IS reserved of betrayers. Peter can spend eternity with Brutus and Judas. And I love how you portrayed Narcissa. A TRUE mother's love really is pure, and I like to believe that in the end, it will prove strong and redeeming.) Until next time.

    Jemi
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on March 19, 2005
    Oh poor Narcissa! How horrible for her! Thank you for your kind words. I can't wait for chapter 5!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on March 17, 2005
    Hmm. I feel sorry for Blaise. Their room sounds so homey. That would be a hard conversation to bring up. I can't wait for chapter 4!
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  • From ANON - Christina on February 19, 2005
    Fantastic!
    The end line was simply perfect.
    "You see; if he doesn
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  • From ANON - Phoenix on February 17, 2005
    That's so sad.... My heart is actually aching for Severus! You are such a fantastic writer! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Arwen Rayne on February 17, 2005
    What an eerie piece you have written. Poor Severus wearing the proverbial 'hair shirt'. I like the way you have made them so different yet so alike... Good job!
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  • From Reyn on February 17, 2005
    wow. (jaw hangs open) that was fucking awesome! I'm not only talking about the smut, but the way you wrote out Snapes twisted morals. That was great! You totally rawk with that! Excellent job!
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  • From ANON - FairyChild on February 17, 2005
    That was bloody great darlin. I Loved it. Ok, you got me kinda teary eyed too. Very nice. Keep up the loveily ficlits.

    -F.C.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on February 16, 2005
    He does it only for them. *sigh* What a delusion. You wouldn't think that Harry would be so shy after all that. You should write more! Will he break? Will he finally give in?
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  • From ANON - Ashlee on February 16, 2005
    very short but very HOTT(the extra T was needed for this)!! i encourage you to write more....get some *ahem* touching involved. can we say sexy-ness?! phew *pants for breath and lights a cigarette*
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