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Reviews for Desire

By : wineandwit
  • From Persy on September 02, 2021

    What a beautiful love story...


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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 05, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 02, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 27, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From scwolf10k on April 08, 2005
    I think I'm in love with you now! (umm.. author wise :P) This was WONDERFUL! I love it!! THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS PIECE!!!
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on February 20, 2005
    An interesting oneshot.. Good job.


    cdk
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  • From WriterLady1031 on February 20, 2005
    Excellent!
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  • From ANON - Moi on February 20, 2005
    Beautiful.
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  • From ANON - mariteri on February 19, 2005
    I loved this story. Thing is that even so I felt there was so much left unsaid. You might think about writing more of this story. This was great. Thank you and good luck with the stories to come.
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  • From ANON - ~Rhiannon on February 18, 2005
    Very well written and original. Brilliant. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Amber on February 17, 2005
    I really liked this. You painted such a desolate picture that the ending was amazingly happy. Makes me wonder what inspired it. Bravo. :)
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on February 17, 2005
    This is a one shot?! No! You really should think about making something longer. It's wonderful.
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  • From ANON - June on February 17, 2005
    Lovely story!! I like the way she keeps going - a "dying woman" - fueled only by her desire to see Severus. I don't know if his memory was ever really gone, or if he just got put into the camp because of his Mark and not having proof that he was a spy for the Order; both are believable. I would imagine that in the confusion of post-war recovery, it would be too easy to temporarily lose Severus, and I'm glad it was Hermione who found him. Thanks for sharing this!
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  • From ANON - Bambu on February 17, 2005
    Very sweet... and it reminds me of stories I've heard of WWII veterans who wandered across the continent in search of a way to get home. In some cases they were incarcerated in each new country because they didn't have the right papers... as any released prisoner of war wouldn't necessarily have them. It was nice to read this, and I liked the fluffy ending.
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  • From ANON - Susan on February 17, 2005
    I liked this story. Interesting ending...left me wondering what happened to him and to her. I look forward to more stories from you.
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