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Reviews for The Lord and Lady\'s Veelas

By : DoomPiggy
  • From whogirl on October 27, 2005
    5 months. Its been 5 months since you've last updated. 5 MONTHS!!!!!! Come on, will you please update already? I used to love getting your e mails, saying that you've updated. This is too good of a story to abandon. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - jacq on October 01, 2005
    i love this story and i cant wait to read more, please!!!!
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  • From ANON - Amira on October 01, 2005
    This is an awesome story, please continue, I would love to read the following chapters and finale /conclusion.
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  • From ANON - 1701 on June 20, 2005
    Wouldn't mind an update some time soon ;)

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  • From ANON - Princess on June 15, 2005
    Wow, i love this story, update soon ok?
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  • From ANON - Alexis on May 31, 2005
    Alright, I was in a snarky mood when I first reviewed.... so lemmie try again with a clear mind.

    I still think the people are way out of character, the mastubation scene was a lil too much for me to suspend my belief, and the Veela/Mate idea is a lil confusing.

    I also think you need to explain the law. Are the mates supposed to be forced into being in contact with their Veela? Why has no one fought for their rights?

    I still like the different Veela idea, dark and light, and the writing is well done if not a little fast.
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  • From ANON - Alexis on May 29, 2005
    Everyone is seriously out of character. I'd never see Harry acting in such a way, or Hermione for that matter. And when Dumbledore broke down to Malfoy's threats (in the "Moral etc" chapter, that was out of character too. And I still see no valid reason for the Trio to break down... they drifted apart? After all the horrors they've gone through together? Seems like a weak argument....

    I also don't understand the concept of Veela and their mates.... you said they each had a mate to call their own.... so why are Harry and Draco chasing the same woman? It doesn't make sense to me....

    I loved the concept of the light and dark veela, and the writing is good. But for a woman to not notice a man's penis in her hand? He couldn't have been immobile in her hand. That's a lil hard to swallow (no pun intended).


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  • From ANON - Eddie The Black Maru on May 28, 2005
    hmmmm, another stellar work of art. the nine are THE nine muses of Greek Mythology. may they patron your work forever. I really, oh god, REALLY, want to know WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN WHEN DRACO AND HARRY REALIZE THEY BOTH LOVE HERMOINE. i am dying here. withering away. seriously. btw, thanks for the email, this is a lovely story, hot, intense, wonderful. if you don't update, I find you and make ya update. please. with cherries and chocolate and carmel and vanilla and cinnamon and nutmeg and oh those mint things with chocolate creme fillings. I uh....got to go now....I made myself hungry.
    Much Love and Blessed be the Nine,
    Eddie
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  • From ANON - sevati on May 28, 2005
    Oh. Thank you, that is sweet! I can deal with bi *coughs*I am bi*coughs* Hm... as long as the former-lesbian isn't forced, I guess that's fine. Yay! DA payback. Kick their misogynistic asses, wh00t! Tsk tsk, no oatmeal? I have the MOST DELICIOUS chocolate cookie recipe that uses rolled oats (not the quick cooking ones), bananas instead of eggs, and split sugar (half white or turbinado, half dark brown). It's a vegan one, but can be enjoyed by all. *grumbles* I guess I can make my grandma's christmas cookie cutter ones... it's a thick butter cookie with flavored icing. I haven't found another cc cookie recipe that's sans oatmeal, sorry. But I do have a present for you, I remembered a page a friend sent me on Vagina Dentata (the toothed vagina) after I saw the title of Hermione's book. It's all about feeling comfortable with one's body, particularly down there, and they quote 'the vagina monologues' while talking about rape. It's really interesting if you've never come across it before. http://harlequinade.zeetee.com/gorgon/vagina.html I am still waiting for Minerva to read Albus the riot act when she finds out. Hell, I'm hoping she blows up at all of them minus Hermione. My sympathies on your crashed computer. My hard drive is slowly dying by making funny noises and freezing at the most inopportune times. No loss of data yet, and there's already a replacement, but it hasn't been installed yet.
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  • From ANON - 1701 on May 28, 2005
    More more more! :(

    Nice chapter, interesting how Hermione seems so very horny in her sleep ;).

    KEEP WRITING!!!! :D
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  • From ANON - whogirl on May 28, 2005
    Bummer about the hard drive. I hope now that you have a working computer updates will be more frequent. This was a great chapter and I look foreward to more.
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  • From ANON - carly on May 28, 2005
    love it
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  • From ANON - EmZ on May 28, 2005
    I really dont want Harry to get her! please let Draco Win!
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  • From ANON - Kelly on May 28, 2005
    Great to see you back! I have really enjoyed your story so far. I have always enjoyed the angst between Harry and Draco, and I love to see them fight over the same girl. Although, I must say that I hope you do a DM/Hr/HP thing. You know-unite the kingdoms, blah blah. Also-it's real hot.
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  • From ANON - 1701 on May 07, 2005
    Wow it's been awhile since the last update, eh? Starting to feel that withdrawal already so I figured I'd come and comment again :P
    Personally I find it pretty interesting how you've had the two Princes interact with Hermione to this point. Draco may seem to have done more considering he's gotten the hand-job, but since they're also pursueing her heart...perhaps Harry's first kiss is foreshadowing what's to come?
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