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Reviews for The Lord and Lady\'s Veelas

By : DoomPiggy
  • From ANON - 1701 on May 07, 2005
    Loving this story, although the knot idea just doesn't sit well with me >_
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  • From ANON - cherrycolachick on May 04, 2005
    This chapter was definitely interesting, I thought draco and harry craving vanilla with cinnamon was a nice touch. Although the whole mating kink seems a little brutal, and perhaps I missed this I was reading kind of fast but who is nymphadora's mate? Hope for an update soon :) gotta go take a final in trig which sucks :( but atleast I got a little sunshine in my day lol.
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  • From ANON - sevati on May 02, 2005
    *giggles* I'm sorry dear Piggy. I get a story I like in my head and it just becomes "what's going to happen? Is it Route A, B, C, or 42?" then I map out all the possiblities. Keeps me entertained until the author's next update, then the process sometimes starts all over again. BTW, thanks for updating! *squees in happiness and throws cookies at author* See, I'm feeding you just like the note up top asks for. Well, you've made it perfectly clear that Hermione is uncomfortable on the subject of dating. One wonders how she'll react to learning of Draco's helping hand last night. Unfortunately I've had a close friend raped and tried to help her navigate her psyche afterwards. She swore off men and acted quite skittish around them, even her gay male friends. Though sad, it's understandable behavior. Let's hope Harry and Draco are sympathetic to her, otherwise they're in a load of shit, yes? I do get the fact that both Harry and Draco have been horrible to her in your backplot, and if either or both are going to end up with her they're in for a fair bit of karma-payback and groveling. Oh, hey, quick out of the blue question. What if the Veela's mate is a lesbian? That damned law wouldn't force her to take the male Veela as her mate, would it? That would be uber-wrong :( Oh, is Ginny just an Super Bitch(tm) then? Thanks for the DA explanation, I hope the idiot male DA members get over themselves and allow the girls back in. They're leaving them quite vulnerable at the moment, excluding them from vitally needed self-defense knowledge.
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  • From robin777 on May 01, 2005
    Great chpater. iliked the interaction between Harry and Draco. Eventually they would have to get along to share Hermione.
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  • From ANON - Eddie the Black Maru on May 01, 2005
    URGH! you are mean! I am REALLY GETTING INTO THIS. SERIOUSLY. UPDATE. I will be pining for this, its bookmarked. I hope to the great Nine you spare us mortal readers some slack and give us a chapter. OH GOD PLEASE you just HAVE to HAVE to HAVE to.
    Much love
    Eddie
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  • From ANON - whogirl on May 01, 2005
    Thanks for the e-mail update. This was another enlightening chapter, explaining and setting things up for the next chapter. I look foreward to Hogwarts and more.
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  • From ANON - Miki on May 01, 2005
    I've only read the 1st chap and felt I had to review before continuing. This very creative. I like the historical and mythological perspective that you have put on this. Excellent! I am looking forward to your take on the Veelan challenge. I can't imagine that it would be boring or commonplace.
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  • From ANON - sevati on April 27, 2005
    First off, I have to say I love the story so far. I'm on a Veela binge as of late (second only to my Blaise/Hermione one :) and your story makes me all warm and happy inside. I can't wait for you to post more! Secpnd, since I've been rereading it a few times, waiting for updates, I've asked myself a few questions. We know Draco and Harry are 18, which is the age of majority in some places, but Hermione's only 15 in your story. So can she legally reject them until she gets older, then decide on one or both once she turns 18? What's going to happen when McGonagall finds out about Hermione being the mate of both? I mean, McGonagall helped Hermione come to school early to escape her father's unchecked reign of molestation (and at such a young age... 7, 8? *sniffles* poor girl), might both women think this is similiar? I don't see Hermione readily accepting that due to a law another male has control over her, in fact I can see bad things, like flashbacks, breakdowns, other post-traumatic stress disorder symptoms, etc. happening if they tried the direct approach of telling her she's their mate and they have rights over her. Of course, if they tricked her, which Harry was already stopped from doing once, I can see her hating them for trapping her. Why are all girls except Ginny and Luna banned from the DA? I hope you explain that. Plus, your Ginny sounds like Riddle diary has left quite the nasty influence on her, either that or she's insanely jealous of Hermione. Cheers to Cho and Neville standing up against Hermione-bashing! I like your Pansy too, I hope the group of Neville, Pnasy, Cho and Hermione become friends. Oh, and does Dumbledore already know that Hermione is to be Harry's mate? You'd think he'd feel somewhat protective of her and her safety after the whole father incident. I can't wait for the explosion to happen once the meeting in Dumbledore's office learns the future Veela Kings both have the same mate. Sorry for my ranting, but I enjoy picking an author's brain every once in a while :)
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  • From ANON - anna on April 26, 2005
    pleaz up date soon.. and i think both but make them work for it and some come togather has freinds

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  • From robin777 on April 21, 2005
    this is a great story. I like the H/HR/D combo. If you make a list for updates I would love to be on it.
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  • From ANON - alicat999 on April 19, 2005
    I have been following this story by luck actually, as I dont usually venture into the main list.
    I have been enjoying it...but I usually miss the updates.
    Do you plan on moving it to the Draco/Hermione list?
    If not, could you please e-mail me with updates, as I always miss them and I'd rather not forget about this fic, you've managed to hook me badly.

    I really hope harry doesnt get hermione, he's such a shit! lol

    cheers alicia
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  • From copewithit on April 19, 2005
    you really need to update this story more regularly. it's an amazing idea and, as you were hoping, a very original take on the whole veela idea. i congradulate you.
    PS: Harry seems like an ass in this. it works well with his behaviour in the last book. i definately like it.
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  • From ANON - anna on April 19, 2005
    Absolutely love it!! Please update!!!
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  • From ANON - EmZ on April 19, 2005
    Loved the chapter! And yes please i would very much love an email when you update.

    I am hoping for Draco to end up with Hermione (i am an avid Draco/Hermione shipper).

    Dont like the way that Harry and the others treated her...


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  • From ANON - whogirl on April 19, 2005
    This was a wonderful chapter. It had a good mix of furthering the plot with the Malfoys confronting the Order about being on their side and an amazing scene in Hermione's bedroom. I really like how you aren't rushing things too much and I look foreward to more. And if you could continue to e-mail me when you update, that would be great. I know you mentioned something like that in your author's note.
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