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Reviews for The Lord and Lady\'s Veelas

By : DoomPiggy
  • From ANON - cherrycolachick on April 19, 2005
    Hey sorry it's been a couple chapters since I reviewed. Loved the whole confrontation between draco and lucius against harry and the rest. Have to say at first I didn't like the whole hermione being a runner thing I saw her as more of a bookworm not prone to athletics but it's cool that you fit the story into your real life and it is definitely different. Also I love that draco and harry are the rulers of the lord and lady veelas which is an interesting aspect of the veela history.
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  • From ANON - tabitoo on April 08, 2005
    Too bad you didn't make the team but hey does this mean you'll have more time for writing this story. I hope so. I know I'm selfish but can't help it, I really like this story. I still don't understand what happened to make Hermione all of a sudden Gah-gah over Harry. Is it his voice that did it to her, or the singing or both. I like it that both Harry and Draco are having feelings for Hermione. Though are these only sexual feelings or is there love involved? Just wondering if Harry is confusing sex with love. Anyway please post again soon.
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  • From ANON - EmZ on April 08, 2005
    i love it!


    you need to update soon! Please email me when you do!
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  • From ANON - cc on March 22, 2005
    ouch indeed
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  • From ANON - Jess on March 22, 2005
    That's it? Things were just starting to get good. I think Hermione buying the broom was a bit out of character seeing as she hated flying in her first year of cannon. I do wonder what Draco had in mind by insulting her. Though I'm glad Harry got what he deserved. I hope to read more soon, I like the way things are going so far, and I love your strong Hermione. Keep it up and please, please update soon! =)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 13, 2005
    love it
    continue
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  • From ANON - tabitoo on March 06, 2005
    This story is really good. I was afraid it wouldn't be at the beginning but it has a PLOT!!! And a very good one at that. Loved your discription of Hermione running at the track meet. It was really good. Felt like I was there. Please post again soon.
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  • From ANON - Cindy on February 24, 2005
    that's awesome
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  • From ANON - HappilyJaded on February 21, 2005
    Very interesting start. I vote you make Ginny evil - then kill her off. Well done!
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  • From ANON - mgrossi on February 21, 2005
    I like this story a lot, it seems well written (could use some polishing) and the originality of the concept for the HP fandom. However, the only problem is that Hermione seems to be going Mary Sue in the second chapter. Yes, we all know that she is smart but it seems a tad bit too much, especially since you have her working 60 hours a week and then doing all that advanced school work. I think if you work on that it will be a better story.
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  • From ANON - terri on February 21, 2005
    I like it so far, but I'am not liking Harry at the moment. I hope it gets better for Hermione. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - cold1 on February 21, 2005
    I don't understand how both of them could have the same mate... it's very confusing, a person can only have one soul mate, so how can Hermione have two? please explain... those types of things aren't suposed to happen...
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  • From ANON - vblum12 on February 21, 2005
    this is really good! i enjoyed it very much and cannot wait for the next update. it will be very interesting to see where you take this.
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  • From ANON - CherryColaChick on February 19, 2005
    YIPPI someone finally took up my challenge , im so excited!!!! I liked the who creation story, its a new concept to the veela history. As far as suggestion for pairings go for ginny, ron and luna. I always thought Luna and Ron seemed interesting together, just cause Ron wouldn't really get her wackiness. As for ginny, no idea, normally I'd hook her up with harry but since he's already taken I guess thats out. Hmm maybe viktor Krum, just please not Nelville lol. To be honest I'm not entirely partial to any shipper in Harry Potter as long as the story is written well enough. Althought I thought a Harry/Draco/Hermione mix up would be pretty interesting mix up but while I suppose a Ron/Draco/Hermione rivary thing could go on it would be tougher because Draco would always bring up Ron's financial situation and there is just too much hate for them to truly enter a relationship with one woman. However harry is somewhat more open to things. I realize that in a lot of ways it a difficult story to write just because of their bitter rivaries and I appreciate your willingness to try it. Hope to see an up date soon :) Oh and by the way I read your little bio and we like a lot of the same ships although I actually kind of like an Angel/Willow/Spike thing, don't know always liked the brainy girls, However I still like Angel/Buffy better then Spike/Buffy, and while I don't what a lot of DBZ I still like the Bulma/Vegeta fan fics. Guess I just like fics where the couples can have "verbal Judo" Im a lex/Chloe shipper as well.
    -CherryColaChick
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