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Reviews for The Domino Effect

By : TaranMagdelena
  • From ANON - pink panther on June 15, 2005
    i amm soo glad about this.. i swear- i think i could die from happines.

    pink panther obvously isnt my name- but i thought it was fitting- did you know that in the 60/70's, there was a group of peouple that petitioned for gay rights- they called themselves the pink panthers.


    ha! take that name game!


    my name is soooooooooOOOOOOOO000000000000 much better.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on June 14, 2005
    Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you for the update. Yes it was a long, long wait but well worth it. The snarry was perfect and the domination of Harry over Severus absolutely complete, well, except for the impending guilt and other stuff you mentioned would happen.

    Now, tell me about the magic swirling around them during the act and what exactly happened to the dark mark. Did it fade, get changed into Harry's insignia or what?

    I'm sure Voldemort will be more pissed with Harry now that he has the Potions' Master as his. Wow, a prophesy and a possession to fight over. lol

    Will Albus be concerned that Severus is now more under Harry's control than his?

    All through this, there's been a little nagging doubt that Harry has carried on with and that is that not only can he pull it off but can he maintain it? I'm sure his solid love for Severus will come into this equation somehow. I hope Severus will also have this love/appreciation/devotion etc. to Harry, and not just a need for him emotionally, i.e. not a black mail obligation.

    Again, great chapter, loved every word of it. I know that RL can be a hassle, living through some of it now. Keep yourselves well and please post soon. I'm all a tingle!
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  • From ANON - Marie on June 14, 2005
    Continue the good work, hope to see the continuation soon.
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  • From ANON - alliekatgal on June 14, 2005
    Lovely, lovely, lovely chapter!! New chapters are always worth the wait, and this one was definitely worth waiting for! I did feel pretty badly for Severus when Harry told him that Dumbledore didn't truly trust him. Harry grew into his role of protector well, and I love how possessive he is (and unabashed about it!). The fallout of this should be very interesting. Despite getting rid of the Dark Mark, I think Harry is going to have a tough road ahead to make up for everything he has put Severus through.
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  • From ANON - melody demort on June 09, 2005
    ----"Clandestine savior"

    hmmmm that would then insinuate a savior that is not so true with his intentions, or a savior in one's eyes that is being covert about his being more of a hero then previously thought. i like it. though, your title hints at something at the edge of reason. being that breaking connections with voldemort would cause a backlash of magic, it is suffice to say that this could have a "domino effect" on voldemort and those wearing the dark mark.

    you still alive ther luv? people are starting to wonder where you've gone. and i think, that some are insinuating thier sexual appeal in the hopes of bargaining from you an update.


    until later my luvs...

    m.Demort
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  • From ANON - the name game on June 09, 2005
    iv'e come up with a new name for your fic.




    Clandestine Savior

    i'm not sure why- it just seemed to fit. Clandestine- adj : conducted with or marked by hidden aims or methods; "clandestine intelligence operations"; "cloak-and-dagger activities behind enemy lines" -or- Kept or done in secret, often in order to conceal an illicit or improper purpose.


    well- you don't have to use it- domino's are nice and all 0.0 but i just dont get the domino reference.
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  • From ANON - water on June 08, 2005
    I am really looking forward to the rest of this story. Please write more soon I want....NO NEED to know what happens next . So please write more quickly.
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  • From ANON - smilingcat on June 07, 2005
    I really enjoy your story, very well written!! And the plot is really original, too. Write soon more :-)

    smilingcat
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  • From ANON - Hazel on May 26, 2005
    On several occasions, Harry and Severus did engage in sexual acts, but it was usually with Severus being the recipient. Once, Harry finished what he had begun in the Potions classroom, and another time, he spent the entire evening mapping out Severus' body with his tongue and hands, only giving in and suckling Severus to orgasm at the Potions Master's begging. Other times were spent in mutual fulfillment, each giving and receiving pleasure.


    Hello? Descriptions please? Pleeease? AND FOR GOODNESS SAKES, UPDATE!!!!!!!! THIS IS DRIVING ME NUTS!!!

    ~Hazel
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  • From SailorSol on May 20, 2005
    Wonderful! Marvelous! Just the right amount of tension and dominance. One would almost think you had some experience! :D

    I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Nelver on May 20, 2005
    OMG, now things are happening! So exciting! Yaya!
    For not talking about OMG, I planned the review for last chapter so long that I didn't get to post it...vops...*looks sheepish*
    It so cute...fluffy-angst-feeling all around, oh my...*cosy grin* Me likes this stuff alot, did I say that? I think I did...Yeah, maybe i did.But it can never be said to many times, now can it? Nah, don't think so, no I don't.
    All those being nice-and-possesive thingies are so cute. Thought the absoulutely sweetest thing is to dry someones hair. Oh, I love that! Thoug combing is good too...if you're not hairsore (can you actually say so? *word-by-word-translation from swedish*), that is...

    Oh, again, wonderful chapters. Lots of cheers for you...:)
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  • From ANON - snarry lOver on May 19, 2005
    SEX PLEASE!!! some yummy LEMON... *wink WINK* i'll be waiting.... *does patented draco malfoy smirk*
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  • From ANON - peNNy on May 19, 2005
    I love all the angst that I can just feel building!! I'm so worried for Harry, since it doesn't seem like it will turn out good for him. Especially since he's starting to fall in love with Severus. please update!!!!!
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  • From ANON - dRagOn QueEn on May 19, 2005
    OMG OMG!!! what's going to happen next!!! you must update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - pink panther on May 19, 2005
    really love the story!! LOL poor severus....
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