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  • From ANON - Jirujanne on May 13, 2005
    WOW!!!!
    Strange, but so awesome!!! Please please please continue????
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  • From ANON - Mistress Darkness on May 12, 2005
    I love it!! The whole thing!! I can't really find a fault in it!! I love Severus/Harry pairings!!! This one is just great!! I hope you update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - riding hood on May 12, 2005
    i really like your story!! it's so riveting. i never know what is going to happen next... and i can't wait to read more!! hope you update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Selene S. Snape on May 12, 2005
    I just read the fanfiction and it's is truly wonderful. I favor Severus being the submissive partner with Harry playing the dominant role...I don't know why though. *shrugs*

    I had a few ideas for you as well. Here's what I've got based off of my own relationship and things I've seen people do.

    Pet Names: I don't mean honey or darling or that kind of mushy thing. I think it would be sweet if Harry started calling Severus a shorter version of his name like the classical Sev or maybe even Sevvie. I think it shows that nicknames show friendship and affection. You could also give other character nicknames just to show friendship. Since Snape and Remus are friends Severus could nickname Remus something like Remy.

    Date: Since they're at school they can't do that much without getting into trouble but I don't think much could happen on a simple moonlit walk around the lake. They could talk and get to know each other better.

    Breakfast in Bed: Harry could swing by one morning to make sure Severus is eating by bringing a tray of food and feeding him. This shouldn't be so bad since HArry is already trying to get Snape to eat more.

    Yeah some of my ideas are corny but you have to admit they're classic. ^_^ Anyway...so far so good. I love your ideas and this story so please update soon. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

    Sincerely,
    Selene

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  • From ANON - Blackrose on May 10, 2005
    This is getting really good. Hope we see some loving soon. Hope Remus doesn't think Harry's bad or anything and cause trouble. Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on May 10, 2005
    Ooooo, a bath! How sensuous and loving can you get??? I'm really glad Severus was touched by it as a gesture of affection.

    I'm really into this fic, it's so different with a dominant Harry. So much fun! It's also interesting to see how Harry reacts to it all too.

    Please write more chapters and don't leave us just wrapped in a towel after a warm and inviting bath like that one.

    Can wait for what Harry has planned, although it may only be a foot massage or back rub.
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  • From ANON - War-chan on May 09, 2005
    I've just finished chp.7 and............I'M DIEING HERE WAITING FOR THE LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have the wrost timeing for cliffys (even if cliffys are bad ALL the time!) What's going to happen next!?, What's going to happen next!?!!? *jumping up & down like a sugar high child* I can only guess! Do you know how frusterateing that is!?!?! VERY I tell you VERY!!!!! *in a sing songy vioce* I want to know, I want to know.....PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY TO PIECES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Mostly to the fact that Snapey's the uke, yummy ukey Snapey and seme Potter *drule*.......yummy, yummy........ukey Snpaey the best thou!) Ahem......well anyway PLEASE BY THY GODS PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Ja ne
    ILoveIt,ILoveIt,LoveItLoveItLoveIt!!!!!!
    Miss War-chan ^_^
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  • From ANON - alliekatgal on May 09, 2005
    I love how Harry made Severus just about melt in the tub! Looking forward to more!!
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  • From ANON - AyanEva on May 04, 2005
    Nooooo! How can you stop right there?! Great story, poor Sevvie, though! This chapter is an excellent set-up for the next chapters. I can't wait for the rest of it! If I give you candy, will you write faster? *makes puppy dog face*

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  • From Silverwolf21 on May 03, 2005
    I really love this story and how its unfolding. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Nelver on May 03, 2005
    Bad Remus! Stop interupting! I seriously thought it was Dumbledore there in the end of the fifth chapter. But no, no, no.
    Surprise, surprise.
    And we got a review reply. Me is so happy.
    And me love plot, yes, we do. Me being baby...ow...
    And it's so good that it's not just my favourite pairing(Harry/Severus), but Draco/Ron is all there too. Wonderful.
    And Harry is in love.*grins*
    And maybe I should stop stop the 'and'-ing? Yes, I should. Okey...Or not hehe...
    And I'm reviewing again, maybe I should start a trend? Hmm, sound like a good idea. Yes, me thinks so.
    I know I'm babbling.
    Good thing you updated there. me is sick. There is no better way to spend a day a home.*grins some more*
    Now, have a happy life, and we will try to have too.*waves*
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 01, 2005
    Really unique plot so far
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  • From ANON - War-chan on May 01, 2005
    I've just re-read your story!!!!! ^_^ And I once again I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Though could you 'maybe' make something for Sev to have a 'little' misunderstood trust? Like with Lupin, Harry and Pro.Dumbledore can tell him what's going on, then Harry can tell Snape that he messed with Lupin's mind(mermmery *can't sp -.-"*) and tell Sev off that if he ever do something like that again that he'll be punished, you know that hole type of thing! ^_^ Just thought to put in my 2cents I think it might be a good idea to think over. Well, now THAT'S out of my way and mind.........PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WILL SIMPLY DIE IF YOU DON'T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Ja ne
    TellMeIfYouLikedMyIdea?
    Miss War-chan ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sailor Sol (too lazy again) on April 30, 2005
    MORE!

    Can I say it more forcefully? Yes, I think I can!

    M M M OOO RRRR EEEEE !!!!!
    MM MM O O R R E !!!
    MMMMM O O R R EEE !
    M MM M O O RRRR E
    M MM M OOO R R EEEEE !!!
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  • From ANON - Quashi on April 23, 2005
    Very nicely done. Thank-you.
    I hadn't thought about Lupin. Unfortunately for Snape, Remus, as a werewolf, is also vulnerable to blackmail. And third year gave Harry plenty of material. I look forward to reading whether Harry goes to Dumbledore for help, or whether he chooses to deal with Mooney on his own.
    Does Severus think his Slytherins have betrayed him? Has he considered that Draco may be another of Harry's victims?
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